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怎么办呢 11.19的现在issue写刚好500字要40分钟而且是除去列提纲的时间练了十篇提纲列了20篇，现在计划每天提纲至少写5篇。 argu还没开始练，完全没谱

这个速度实际考试我的issue半小时可能只能打出400词甚至不到我知道文章论证和表达清晰更重要，但我想要是有个基本的字数吧老G很多人说是600词我肯定是做不到的况且新G时间减少了

有谁说说怎么办吗我作文还是很想尽量考4.0以上虽然俺不是文科申请的学校也没有特别作文要求

最后 argu是不是也必须先把图库全都看熟一遍？

18 The well-being of a society is enhancedwhen many of its people question authority.
当很多人都质疑权威时，社会才会繁荣昌盛。

The authorities are those who possess solitary discourse power in the specific fields they involve. This kind of power is always reasonable, due to their significant contributions and expertise in their own fields. However,there is a saying that if many people question the authorities, the society will be more prosperous. At least for me, I find such statement quite rational.To present my view point let me illustrate in details.

We should begin first to admit a truth that questioning the authorities make people continue to explore the unknown and uncertainties, which enhance the perfection inintelligence and knowledge. No matter how wise a person is, he can only understand this world only in small part. The authorities, too, may grip alittle more truth in the fields they meditate for many years and contribute opinions that more valuable, but are confused and ignorance as us in most other cases. No one can boast to be omniscience. Inthe retrospect of history of human science and technology, we can easily seemthat a great deal of important improvement and innovations are made on the basis of doubting, of challenges to authorities. A prominent example is in physics, that Einstein constructed his relativity theory, asserting that Newton's classic mechanics are only a law under specific condition. Thanks to the countless questionings like this in the history, that we human beings can closer to the truth and can give more accurate descriptions about the universe, which enable us to lead a more civilized and comfortable life.

Then, let me discus this issue form another perspective. Even for winning human's right that they deserve, the questioning the authorities have a fatal meaning. No one can keep the monopoly might in truth, so it is in right. Through the oppugn for various object, including bishops, god,kings, presidents, ordinary people strive to seek for their own right, eitherin political or in economic, step by step. And these rights, in turn, act as complements for human systems and inevitably bring welfares. I still thank Jone Locke, a great thinker and philosopher, who doubtthe hereditary power of kings from god and summarize his conclusion in his masterpiece<Two Treatises of Government>

Finally, I should say that questioning the authorities is by no means the task of elites. Ordinary people also have the right and power to do such a thing, and the effects are positive too. Many people can take part in questioning the authorities, though they many hit the wrong points, for it is a essential characteristic, that is, putting out criticism and doubts in public affairs,for highly quality citizens. By questioning, governments can improve their services and society has the force to upgrade. Furthermore, those citizens who appear humble to the authorities are easily tamed as docile sheep in a totalitarian nation. The consequence of it, proved by historic experience,is always disastrous.

In summary,questioning authorities is not insulting or disgracing them, but helping usdiscern unknown things, consummate our system and keep critic sprit, all of which propelling the well being of a society.

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发表于 2011-10-16 23:00:27 |只看该作者

复制的时候不知出了什么问题有些词黏在一起了没分开

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发表于 2011-10-17 08:45:26 |只看该作者

其实半个小时写500字就够了
看看OG的范文

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发表于 2011-10-17 16:21:36 |只看该作者

我觉得500字也难啊！现在只能拼命练习 3# 肖邦的眼泪1987

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发表于 2011-10-18 23:54:29 |只看该作者

4+和字数关系不大...关键在于文章的质量，而不是数量。打600字通篇废话，凑字数反而影响文章的连贯性和结构

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发表于 2011-10-19 14:18:55 |只看该作者

5# 咖啡盐
同意小咖的说法。与字数无关。与文章论证充分、有效有关。

大家值得研习OG上有关analytical writing section 的二十几页内容-- 要研习十遍左右，把自己原有的从小到大的汉语作文思维打破，然后精练几篇习作，写一遍对照scoring guide 及OG中的sample response 做修改。

OG，没有比它更简明有效的讲解了。

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