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发表于 2013-6-25 23:25:13 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
With the rapid development of modern society, an increasing number of parents attach great importance on their children`s education. Some people hold the view that encouraging kids to take a part-time job is one of the best ways for parents to help their teenager children prepare for adult life. In my opinion, I have a totally favorable feeling towards this issue.

As I see it, no one can deny the fact that children will inevitably benefit a lot from part-time jobs. On one hand, by taking part-time jobs which are related to their major children can put their theory knowledge into practice and thus to better understand what they learned from class. My classmate lin has improved her English ability by being a English tutor on weekends. She told me it was so helpful and worthwhile for both of their English. On the other hand, children at present suffer different kinds of pressure from their classmates, parents and themselves. He may relax himself and reduce the stress if he has a part-time job after class.

However, a part-time job is not sufficient appropriate for those children who don`t have good performance in their study. There is no doubt that they should of course take academic study in the first place. They are supposed to spend more time on study rather than part-time jobs, which might have an opposite influence in them.

In a nutshell, taking a part-job is of great effect to prepare for adult life, but some children should focus themselves on study in school instead of part-time jobs.   


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