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发表于 2004-11-13 12:56:39 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

ISSUE 208:the way people look, dress ,and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society’s ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of people..

There is not only one language said by tongue. We “say” by our eyes, eyebrows, figures, legs and other parts of body. It is called “body language”. The appearance and behavior also reveals the information that we don’t pay attention to .Believe it or not. Finding the cues of those needs both instinct and skills.
Emotion is the activity of several muscles in the face. We never take notice of any single muscle such as eye moving muscles and eyebrow moving muscles. However, we can recognize the emotional precisely by combining the little differences of muscle moving .It is an amazing ability of human being which is developed since we were born. A famous Psychology research reported that the ability of recognizing the emotion is surprisingly common in the world. .Every baby from any race can distinguish seven ”basic emotion”---happiness, fear, sadness, anger and so on. The biologists say the appearance of this instinct is because in the tough environment of living, our ancestor must try to understand what others are thinking of so that they can work together more effectively. The ability is quite good for human so the gene is passed on generation by generation.
But human aren’t animals that living only by instinct. We live in society and different culture teach us different expression of body language. And different people in different environment also develop his own way of expression by body. As for a single person, if we want to know his/her attitude and interests by behavior and appearance we must consider them in both general background of human and special background of him/herself. For instance, when you are talking with an American, he is quite interested in the topic or your bearing, he will show it to you unconsciously by stepping forward. Less distance can increase the intimacy of two person .But, if you are from the Arab countries, you will feel nervous for in your culture it means offending. To overcome it, we must learn the knowledge of different countries.
Although we can’t tell all about a society’s ideas and values by observing the appearance and behaviors of people, after special training, we can tell most of them and practice them in daily life to get on with others better. In a conversation, if your partner feel nervous, he may cross his fingers in front of the chest. Then you can give him a glass of water to diminish his tension. Another example tell us how to improve the our impression to others. When we are talking with others, f we watch the nose or mouth of him, he will feel disdain. If you watch the forehead, he will feel flattery. If you watch the eyes directly , he may feel threatened or sexy luring. So the best solution is to watch the zone between the eyes and nose, which will show you respect to him. Apart from special training, if we pay much attention to others, we can discover the disciplines by ourselves.
The ability of inferring the attitudes and interests of others by observing the behaviour of them is defined as EQ(emotion quality) by Psycologist, which is quite different from the traditional IQ(intelligence quality) tested by IQ scales. Some EQ scales has been developed and used by millions of people. If you want to know your EQ scores, you can take one any time.

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发表于 2004-11-13 18:00:23 |只看该作者

以后的文章还是每一段空一行，这样比较让大家可以看清你的结构。
语言方面我就不谈了，因为我也不好。但是总体看后我觉得你没说到点子上，There is not only one language said by tongue. We “say” by our eyes, eyebrows, figures, legs and other parts of body. It is called “body language”. The appearance and behavior also reveals the information that we don’t pay attention to .Believe it or not. Finding the cues of those needs both instinct and skills.这个开头，尤其是最后一句很奇怪，会使人以为你要介绍怎么发现body language.
后两段段的例子也跑了，而且你的观点根本没有和题目的后半句联系起来，主要说的就是肢体语言了，而我认为这道题最重要的就是后半句。
呵呵，也不知道说的对不对，再讨论 :p

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发表于 2004-11-13 20:32:11 |只看该作者

谢谢

谢谢，你是寄托上第一个帮我改作文的人。论据确实不能直接支持论点。绕了个弯。我觉得是没写提纲的原因。写每段时论点是什么自己都不清楚只是把论据放上去，就像去年的辩论赛砸了一大堆论据上去却被判跑题。
如果需要心理学方面的论据可以Q我：5861239。
再次感谢。

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发表于 2004-11-16 19:18:51 |只看该作者

ISSUE208 second edition:

第二稿，其实是重写了一遍
the way people look, dress ,and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society’s ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of people..

Let’s go into a room where there is a conversation between an American and an Iraq man. It is about a great deal of goods and they are both quite interested in it. It’s about one meter between them. Suddenly ,the Iraq man move forward to the American. The conversation doesn’t stop but the American move backward unconsciously. After the conversation with a good ending, they find they’ve moved several meters from the former spot.
The act of a person can reveal the ideas and values of the society he or she has lived in, In Arabic country, if a man move towards you ,he is showing his interested in you or the topic. They once lived in the grassland and like to show their friendship by intimate touch. If he take you as best friend, he even will pat your shoulder when talking. However, in the US, people want to keep a certain room of himself. If anyone break the boundary ,he may feel threat So it’s the society that determine a person’s ordinary act and the act can reveal the society’s ideas and values. If you are a lucky traveler who can visit many countries, you will find the large difference of behavior all over the world.
Emotion is common among human being, but how to express it depends on the certain background of culture. In western countries, people would like to show their emotion frankly while in Eastern countries people are asked to restrict the expression of passion. An American may yell loudly when feeling happy, well, such as get ”A” at exam, but a Chinese ,under the same condition ,may just show a slight sweet., The little difference of emotion reflect the large difference of idea and value between two culture.. In the US, it’s encouraged to show a person’s special feeling, as part of personality to others. But in ancient Chinese, people especially girls can’t show his or her personality too much too others for the King think it will treat his rule. They made many doctrine of feudalism to restrict the behavior and thoughts of people. Although the last King has been exiled for almost one hundred years, the traditional thoughts hasn’t been cleared thoroughly in modern China. So, you see , although we are now in an earth village connected by telephone Internet, television and other modern inventions, the behavior still show the deep difference of our own society.
And it must be admitted that in such a world of communion, it is more and more difficult to take behavior as the remarkable symbol of an unique society. Especially in the circle of young people, they intimate doing something just for fun, without any value or ideas of the foreign society. Many Chinese boys or girls go church , but they have no idea in that religion. Church is a home to satisfy the religion knot of followers. They pray their every morning and night to show the respect to God. But many Chinese boys or girls go to church every day know nothing about it and they don’t believe in God in fact. We can’t say this kind of behavior reveal the society’s value.
But on the other hand, it reflects the changing of the society value nowadays.

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