[作文] 3.29高分作文文章及写作资料放送 [复制链接]

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在煎熬中终于等到了3.29的成绩，很惊讶的是作文竟然满分。由于自己复习的一个多月时间主要都在针对自己的弱项口语练习，作文基本上就没怎么练过，甚至连185的提纲也没看多少，直到最后考试总共写过4篇文章，3.29这次也算是人品大爆发了，考到的就是自己练过的一篇，考试的时候基本上是想都没想直接往上敲，相当之爽啊。这里把3.29自己的文章贴上来，内容基本上和考试提交的一致，可能一些用词方面有所出入，希望对大家有所帮助吧。

关于其他的经验。
口语：最后才22，不过对于像我这种平常基本不开口的工科生来说已经是很理想了。准备的时候个人感觉3-6T如果能够把红蓝DELTA后面TEST的练习练好就差不多了，考试时候感觉要简单一些，至少自己平常练习的时候很少能讲全。1-2题自己基本上把从05年开始到08的JJ都详细写了一遍（主要参考了独孤九剑那个帖子和秋姐35题，但是要根据自己的情况改写啊，是自己经历过的东西说起来感觉就是不一样的），最后总结起来好像总共有20多页WORD文档的样子，然后就是狂背自己写的段子，这种方法并不推荐给大家啊，主要是自己口语太烂太没信心了，现在回想一下考试如果碰上个和准备的完全没联系的TOPIC，真的就要OVER了。
听力：自己准备的时候就把红蓝DELTA上的听力都做了而且全部精听，但是没有听写。个人感觉如果能精听到每句话的话和听写的效果也差不多了。最后1个月的时候坚持每天听一上午磨耳朵（3hr左右）。考前一个礼拜开始做BARRON的听力，每天一套。练的时候自己并没把重点放在做题上，第一遍尽量模拟考试的感觉，处理好没听懂的地方，感觉锻炼自己在没听懂很多受打击的情况下调整心态尽可能记要点的能力很重要，后几遍就是精听了，要听到每句每个词。最后上场的时候感觉还不错，基本都听得懂，但是题还是比较难，要注意把握做题的时间啊。最后听力29感觉也有正态分布在里面。

总算是杀T成功了，现在回想起来就像一场梦一样。以前在GTER上也看了不少经验贴下了不少资料，感谢前人的帮助啊。就要转战G版了，希望在准备的同学多多努力，都考出满意的成绩啊。我始终相信只要有付出，注意方法，总会有不错的回报的。

PS:谢谢一楼的同学帮我上传啊，都是些自己在XDF作文课上讲过的关于语言方面的一点东西和综合写作的模板，自己感觉还挺有用。长沙新东方的托福感觉就作文不错了，作文老师挺牛的。
最后报下自己的的分数：R29 L29 S22 W30 total 110

Twenty years from now, students will not use printed book to study.

In this technologically advanced society, we are invariably confronted with the controversial issue about which people have divergent attitudes: whether printed book will disappear in twenty years? Some maintain that the traditional printed book will undoubtedly never be replaced, whereas others assert the opposite is more reasonable. From my perspective, I am convinced that people will abandon printed book in the coming decades.

First and foremost, printed book, compared with the advanced electrical devices as a result of soaring technology, is less convenient and efficient for most people. On one hand, people may find it extremely inconvenient to take large numbers of books from one place to anther one, while a small portable disk containing identical amount of information of those books is available. On the other hand, how to preserve printed books properly and protect them from “aging” caused by some natural factors or bug biting is an irritating issue which people find is costly and almost impossible to cope with. Therefore, it is no exaggeration to say that the elimination of printed book is the inevitable result of human's continuous pursuit of a more efficient and convenient lifestyle.

Another equally significant reason for my inclination lies in the fact that printed book, to some extent, poses a probable and potential threat to the environment. This can be aptly exemplified and illustrated by the fact that countless trees have been cut to meet the high demand of paper which is needed to produce printed book. Further lending credence to my position is the fact that factories producing printed book usually are the main source of pollutants which adversely affect river, lake and air. As we know, the awareness of environment protection should be accepted, respected, appreciated and advocated, while printed book, to some extent, imposes a detrimental impact to our environment, so I never remain suspicious that printed book will disappear in the future considering the negative effect it exerts to the environment.

Apart from the two points mentioned above, I would like to add one more that is readily discernible. People will attach more importance to some high-tech products instead of printed books considering the economic factor. For instance, there are plenty of resources and information on the Internet which could be downloaded free such as e-books and movies, and we can watch them in some electronic devices like MP4 or computers.

To sum up, the conveniences and efficiency that technology brings to people, the negative consequences that printed book exercises to our environment together with the economic factor, directly or indirectly, contribute to the disappearance of printed book. I therefore reinforce my standpoint that printed book will vanish in the future.

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