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发表于 2007-4-3 10:24:58 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

Issue150"Becauseof television and worldwide computer connections, people can now becomefamiliar with a great many places that they have never visited. As a result,tourism will soon become obsolete."
反对观点
1电视和网络促使人们了解更多不同地方的风景，文化。
2电视和网络促进人们想去旅游。
3 其他手段促使旅游业不会过时。（交通，富裕的生活，闲暇。）
（写完后又想到旅游主要是为了获得亲身感受，这是电视和网络代替不了的所以电视和网络不会阻碍旅游的发展。）

According to the title of the statement, the speaker assertsthat computer connections and television make people become familiar with alarge amount of places they have never been, because of this, people willinclined not to choose tourism, and tourism will soon be out of time. I admitthat the wide use of television and computer connection give people morechances to see different places they have never been, but this will not resultin the obsolete of tourism.

First of all, living in the modern world, more an morepeople use television and  internet tosee different places where they have not been or will never been. From thecoming out of the first television and first television station, the TVprograms broadcasted become more and more colorful. For instance, people canwatch beautiful sceneries of Africa which is a mysterious continent that fewpeople have ever been because of dangerous environment, wars, short of moneyand so on. Now watching TV can make people become familiar with Africanscenery, culture, food. Besides television, internet is a more convenient toolfor people to realize different places in the world. Because on the internet,people can choose which kind of information they want to see, a large amount ofinformation about scenery of different places in the world can satisfied people'sneed of seeing places they have ever been.

Second, I hold that using television and computer connectionwill not result in tourism become out of date. On the contrary, TV and internetwill help tourism become flourish. The reason is that television and internetmake people realize places they have ever been as discussed above, then thisrealization will arouse people’s interest to have a visit to that place. Forexample, if a person did not get any information about Australia  from TV or internet, he will not have anyinterest to visit that place. However, after getting some information aboutAustralia like the famous theater in Sydney, some interesting animals living inAustralia and so on, he will have great interest in this country and may planto travel to there. In short, what I had discussed in this paragraph come to aconclusion that when a person get some information of a place, they may havesome interest in that place then may have plan to travel to there. In thisprocess, TV and internet play a important role which help people to get lots ofinformation of different areas in the world.

Finally, Because of many other reasons, the tourism in theworld will not obsolete but flourished. First, with the development of society,people need not to work day and night to gain enough food. Then they have moreleisure time to travel. Second, with the development of economy, more peoplebecome rich, so they have more money to pay the fees in traveling. Third,compared to ancient people, modern people can use different kinds of vehiclesto travel. For example, modern people can driving cars by themselves to travelto some places, or they can take trains and planes to more places where theycan not drive to. However, ancient people can only walk or ride horse to go tosome limited places. In addition, some data told us that the tourism indeedbecome more popular than ever. In 2006, the whole number of  tourists in the world was 842 million, andthe tourism traveled to Asia increased by 6.7%, to Sub-Sahara increased by 8%.

To sum up, from what had been discussed above, we can cometo the conclusion that because the wide use of TV and internet will not resultin obsolete of tourism but will help to make tourism more popular.

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发表于 2007-4-4 12:35:33 |只看该作者

According to the title of the statement, the speaker asserts that computer connections and television make people become familiar with alarge amount of places they have never been, because of this, people will inclined not to choose tourism, and tourism will soon be out of time. I admit that the wide use of television and computer connection give people morechances to see different places they have never been, but this will not result in the obsolete of tourism.(问一下楼主，为什么你的帖子老是把单词合在一起呢，呵呵)

First of all, living in the modern world, more an more people use television and  internet to see different places where they have not been or will never been. From the coming out of the first television and first television station, the TV programs broadcasted become more and more colorful. For instance, people can watch beautiful sceneries of Africa which is a mysterious continent that few people have ever been because of dangerous environment, wars, short of moneyand so on. Now watching TV can make people become familiar with Africanscenery, culture, food. Besides television, internet is a more convenient tool for people to realize different places in the world. Because on the internet,people can choose which kind of information they want to see, a large amount ofinformation about scenery of different places in the world can satisfied people'sneed of seeing places they have ever been.(论述的不错)

Second, I hold that using television and computer connection will not result in tourism become out of date. On the contrary, TV and internetwill help tourism become flourish.（感觉把这两句合成一句吧） The reason is that television and internet make people realize places they have never been as discussed above, then this realization will arouse people’s interest to have a visit to that place. For example, if a person did not get any information about Australia  from TV or internet, he will not have any interest to visit that place. However, after getting some information about Australia like the famous theater in Sydney, some interesting animals living in Australia and so on, he will have great interest in this country and may planto travel to there. In short, what I had discussed in this paragraph come to a conclusion that when a person get some information of a place, they may have some interest in that place then may have a不确定 plan to travel to there. In this process, TV and internet play an important role which help people to get lots of information of different areas in the world.

Finally, because of many other reasons, the tourism in the world will not obsolete but flourished.感觉这个ts写得不好 First, with the development of society,people need not to work day and night to gain enough food. Then they have more leisure time to travel. Second, with the development of economy, more peoplebecome rich, so they have more money to pay the fees in traveling. Third,compared to ancient people, modern people can use different kinds of vehiclesto travel. For example, modern people can driving cars by themselves to travel to some places, or they can take trains and planes to more places where they can not drive to. However, ancient people can only walk or ride horse to go tosome limited places. In addition, some data told us that the tourism indeedbecome more popular than ever. In 2006, the whole number of  tourists in the world was 842 million, andthe tourism traveled to Asia increased by 6.7%, to Sub-Sahara increased by 8%.

To sum up, from what had been discussed above, we can come to the conclusion that because the wide use of TV and internet will not result in obsolete of tourism but will help to make tourism more popular.

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