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发表于 2007-5-5 01:03:40 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

No.72
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Grades (marks) encourage students to learn. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Major of schools adopt grades system as the most important way to judge their students. I concede it’s a comparatively equitable and effective mean for most of us. Also taking grades system is very convenient to manage a school and remind students of progress in their studies. But I don’t agree that marks encourage students to learn.
Students who don’t do very well in their courses will lose their confidence, not be encouraged as teachers believed, if they get a very disappointing score . One of my high school classmate is a good example. She did very well in her biology course in our first year, I believed that she learned a lot in the class , but unfortunately she didn’t get a good mark in her final exam of this curriculum, and from then on, she felt upset when she met biology teacher and was not confident of biology class, she gave it up at last, it’s a little ridiculous, but she was a victim of grades.
Another severe problem that grades bring us is a suggestion of “Grades is everything”. Considerable numbers of students focus on score itself but not the nature of course. It’s especially obvious in universities. Some students even cheat in exams for a good grade, or some just stay up for preparing during the last week before the final exams, and they may get a satisfied result for themselves, but who dare saying that those really understand or master the real content of that exams? Easy come and easy go , I consider the students only get grades for grades itself will surely forget what they had remembered for days and nights in a week.
As a whole, grades as a relatively fair and convenient way to support teachers’ judgment of students. However, it’s not a best judge for its negative affections, such as depress those inferior students and give a wrong direction to students of what they really need to seize during their studies.

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发表于 2007-5-5 03:40:21 |只看该作者

已经简单修改请指正
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发表于 2007-5-5 09:12:48 |只看该作者

多谢poler！你的建议对我很有用呵，我会再发的

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发表于 2007-6-21 23:04:46 |只看该作者

修改几处语法错误, 请参考

1. It is very convenient to manage school or remind student of their progress by using grading system.
2. A disappointing score will reduce students' confidence in stead of encouraging them to learn.
or In stead of encouraging student to learn, a disappointing score can only serve to frustrate students and diminish their confidence.
3. However, it is not the best creterion for judging students, mainly due to its negative effects such as discouraging the inferior students and causing students to study only for the sake of achieving high score.

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发表于 2007-8-2 12:22:37 |只看该作者

加油我觉得写的挺不错的虽然有些很小的问题
第一句是不是应该改成
The majority of schools...

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[未归类] 第一次发作文，请好心的人批改，先谢过^^ [复制链接]

改了一下,水平有限不要见笑

修改几处语法错误, 请参考