[i习作temp] issue41 非主流迷信的意义请大家提意见，留下连接回拍（GREAW)小组第8次作业 [复制链接]

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发表于 2007-8-14 11:31:29 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

Issue41"Such nonmainstream areas of inquiry as astrology, fortune-telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits play a vital role in society by satisfying human needs that are not addressed by mainstream science."．一些非主流的领域，如占星、算命以及偏执在社会中扮演着非常重要的角色，它们满足了人们的那些主流科学满足不了的需要

I agree with the speaker that some nonmainstream areas play a vital role in society because people need it. However, These areas has more disadvantage than their benefits. People should keep a cool brain to face the nonmainstream areas.

We have to admit that nonmainstream areas has the ability to satisfy people's spiritual requirement. In fact, many of us have the experience to have recourse to the nonmainstream areas. For example, when people fall in frustration with a bad mood, some of us may go to have a fortune-telling in order to comfort themselves. Because the result of fortune-telling will be some ambiguous telling, so when people get some good words which indicate they will have good luck they will fell happy again. the reason of augur's telling always efficacious is him ambiguous words. they tell not only the good words but also the bad words, so people's destiny always in his telling. After breaking off from their partner, some people will take a checking of their astrology. If their astrology indicate they are not suitable to each other, they will think it attribute to the destiny and feel less agony. When someone lose their relative, they would like to trust the preternatural exist such as soul and wish to meat each other in future life. So, nonmainstream areas do have some use, at least it can console people's heart.

Although nonmainstream areas can satisfy people's spiritual requirement, it has more disadvantage than its benefit. As to individual, if someone addict to fetish they will lose their ability of critical thinking and has little passion to explore the unknown world, even hurt others. Consider it in the view of society, it is dangerous to people if politician trust the fetish. There is a possibility that witch-hunting will happen because of the different world view politicians have. What is more dangerous, if evil religion make use of people's superstition, our society will be badly damaged. For example, in the year of 2000, the fortune-telling that the big disaster will come to the earth is popular in the world. People's scared mentality have made the chance which evil power would be increased. Tokyo subway's toxic gas event is the evidence, the toxic gas which made by the evil religion injured many people. Each coin has two sides, we have to consider more about the bad fact of the fetish.

People should face to fact, the nonmainstream areas should not be encouraged. We have reasons to trust that along with the development of the science more and more superstition will be defated. For example, In the old China, people believe the rain is made by the dragon, nowadays however everybody know that rain is the result of the encounter of the cloud and cold air.

People need nonmainstream areas to satisfy people's spiritual requirement, however it has more disadvantage than its benefit. What is more, fetish should not be encouraged and people should have the confidence to face the fact. Because along with the development of the science more and more dinkum will be discovered.

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发表于 2007-8-14 15:22:24 |只看该作者

I agree with the speaker that some nonmainstream areas play a vital role in society because people need it. However, These areas has more disadvantage than their benefits. People should keep a cool brain to face the nonmainstream areas.

We have to admit that nonmainstream areas has the ability to satisfy people's spiritual requirement. In fact, many of us have the experience to have recourse to the nonmainstream areas. For example, when people fall in frustration with a bad mood, some of us may go to have a fortune-telling in order to comfort themselves. Because the result of fortune-telling will be some ambiguous telling, so when people get some good words which indicate they will have good luck they will fell happy again. the reason of augur's telling always efficacious is him ambiguous words. they tell not only the good words but also the bad words, so people's destiny always in his telling. After breaking off from (breaking up with)their partner, some people will take a checking of their astrology. If their astrology indicate they are not suitable to each other, they will think it attribute to the destiny and feel less agony. When someone lose their relative, they would like to trust the preternatural exist such as soul and wish to meat each other in future life. So, nonmainstream areas do have some use, at least it can console people's heart.(觉得这段中间对fortune teller的手法揭露没有太大必要)

Although nonmainstream areas can satisfy people's spiritual requirement, it has more disadvantage than its benefit. As to individual, if someone addict to fetish they will lose their ability of critical thinking and has little passion to explore the unknown world, even hurt others(意思有点不连贯). Consider it in the view of society, it is dangerous to people if politician trust the fetish. There is a possibility that witch-hunting will happen because of the different world view politicians have.不太理解这个例子 What is more dangerous, if evil religion make use of people's superstition, our society will be badly damaged. For example, in the year of 2000, the fortune-telling that the big disaster will come to the earth is popular in the world. People's scared mentality have made the chance which evil power would be increased. Tokyo subway's toxic gas event is the evidence, the toxic gas which made by the evil religion injured many people. Each coin has two sides, we have to consider more about the bad fact of the fetish.

People should face to(face) fact, the nonmainstream areas should not be encouraged. We have reasons to trust that along with the development of the science more and more superstition will be defated. For example, In the old China, people believe the rain is made by the dragon, nowadays however everybody know that rain is the result of the encounter of the cloud and cold air. (这段可以再拓展,例子好象不太合适，但我也只能想到这样的)

People need nonmainstream areas to satisfy people's spiritual requirement, however it has more disadvantage than its benefit. What is more, fetish should not be encouraged and people should have the confidence to face the fact. Because along with the development of the science more and more dinkum will be discovered.
觉得既然主要是反对就可以写得更多一点，前面同意得少一点。使重点更突出。

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