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发表于 2008-3-13 12:27:00 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

83． Government should preserve publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural state, even though these areas are often extremely remote and thus accessible to only a few people 政府应该保留国家领土中公共拥有的荒野地区，即使这些地区往往人迹罕至。

政府之领土

完全赞同。
1 荒野地区值得保护：因为第一，荒野地区有丰富的动、植物资源，具有很高的研究价值第二，荒野自然地区的状况对于环境、气候影响也有影响；如果我们不重视对其的保护，一旦荒野变成沙漠，失去的不仅仅是宝贵的资源，我们自身的生活环境迟早也会受到影响。
2、荒野需要保护：荒野地区在影响着周围环境与气候的同时反过来也容易受到它们的影响。而且，某些人的行为也造成了荒野地区资源的破坏，政府有责任制止这种行为。
3、政府是有效的保护手段。如通过法律，很多国家都有相关的规定来保护；通过法律的威慑作用，阻止了很多破坏荒野地区环境的行为。当然，我们也可以呼吁民众自觉的保护环境。

I totally agree with the assertion that Government should preserve the wilderness areas in their natural state no matter how many people will access there because these areas deserve and have the necessity to be protected and government is a powerful organization to gain this ends.

Firstly, wilderness areas are worthy of preserving. On the one hand, there are abundant resources of animals and plants in these areas which are valuable for research. For example, Australia is one of the countries that still maintain wilderness areas in their original state in the world. The natural scenery and several precious animals are very deserved to be protected, especially the wombat and kangaroo, which are in a class by themselves in the world. The value of them is self-explanatory; On the other hand, the wilderness areas also have influence to the environment and climate. If we do not take the protection of it into account, once these areas turn into deserts, we would not only lose the invaluable resources but also be hurt by this consequence. The north-west China is an example in point. Nowadays the desertification of the wilderness areas there is more and more serious, results in the sand storm attacks many cities including Beijing several times a year, effecting people’s daily life greatly. If we let matters slide, the consequence would be grievous.

Secondly, wilderness areas need human being to protect. They not only have influenced the environment and climate around but also are easily influenced by them. The excess release of CO2 causes the rising of temperature in the whole world, which changes a lot of wilderness areas’ climate in the North European. Numerous animals which have lived there for thousands of hundreds of years have to move northward. Plants and animals which could not apply to this change suffered a great calamity. Moreover, the actions of some people also destroyed the resources of the wilderness, and the government has the responsibility to deter these deeds. For instance, the antelopes lived on Qinghai Tibet plateau are once very hackneyed/familiar animals which, sadly, are close to extinct now because of the illegal arresting. The government must take effective steps to prevent this kind of animals from extinction.

As we all know, the most powerful organization of protecting the wilderness is government. Through enacting laws, we can deter the illegal deeds of destruction. In America, government forbids anybody stepping on the virescence on the deserts, which prevented the trend of desertification. They also made the law of Wilderness Act in 1964, establishing the natural reserve to preserve wilderness areas. Of course, we can call for all the people to protect wilderness self-consciously. For example, the “Green Peace” is the biggest civilian environment protection organization in the world. They take advantage of “Public opinion” to evocate people to against pollution and protect environment, urge government to take effective measures of controlling pollution and preserving wilderness areas.

In sum, if we confess the necessity and worthy meaning of preserve wilderness areas and we have the ability to do so, then there is no excuse to refuse this assertion.

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发表于 2008-3-15 14:15:07 |只看该作者

83．Government should preserve publicly owned wilderness areas in theirnatural state, even though these areas are often extremely remote andthus accessible to only a few people 政府应该保留国家领土中公共拥有的荒野地区，即使这些地区往往人迹罕至。

这句话翻译没有错误,呵呵~只是提供一个相对更权威的中文翻译,帮助作者把握题意呵呵~

政府应该保护那些疆域范围内的偏远地带,保持他们的原始状态,尽管这些地区一般来说非常偏僻,很少有人能够到达.

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I totallyagree with the assertion that Government should preserve the wildernessareas in their natural state no matter how many people will accessthere(这个短语结构不明白什么意思呀~) because these areas deserve and have the necessity to beprotected and (the) government is a powerful organization to gain this ends.

Firstly, wilderness areasare worthy of preserving. On the one hand, there are abundant resourcesof animals and plants in these areas which are valuable for researching.For example, Australia is one of the countries that still maintainwilderness areas in their original state in the world. The naturalscenery and several precious (kinds of) animals are very deserved to be protected,especially the wombat and kangaroo, which are in a class by themselves(独一无二的意思吗？这个词组很好呢~学习)in the world. The value of them is self-explanatory（明显的意思，又学了个词组，呵呵~）; Onthe other hand, the wilderness areas also have influence to theenvironment and climate. If we do not take the protection of it intoaccount, once these areas turn into deserts, we would not only lose theinvaluable(valuable) resources but also be hurt by this consequence. Thenorth-west China is an example in point. Nowadays the desertification ofthe wilderness areas there is (have been) more and more serious, results in thesand storm attacks many cities including Beijing several times a year,effecting people’s daily life greatly. If we let matters slide, theconsequence would be grievous.
这一段，作者通过强调原始环境对生态和气候的影响来突出保护的重要性。分析得很有道理。

Secondly, wilderness areasneed human beings to protect. They not only have influenced theenvironment and climate around but also are easily influenced by them.The excess release of CO2（carbon dioxide） causes the rising of temperature in the wholeworld, which changes a lot of wilderness areas’ climate in the NorthEuropean. Numerous animals which have lived there for thousands ofhundreds of years have to move northward. Plants and animals whichcould not apply to this change suffered a great calamity. Moreover, theactions of some people also destroyed the resources of the wilderness,and the government has the responsibility to deter these deeds. Forinstance, the antelopes lived on Qinghai Tibet plateau are once veryhackneyed/familiar animals which, sadly, are close to extinct nowbecause of the illegal arresting. The government must take effectivesteps to prevent this kind of animals from extinction.
这一段的内容稍微有一点点乱。至少第一句的论据没有抓住整个段落的要点。段落中的事例似乎都在证明人为导致的温室效应造成的危害，却没有提到与保护原始地区的必要性的必要关系。

As we all know, the mostpowerful organization of protecting the wilderness is government.Through enacting laws, we can deter the illegal deeds of destruction.In America, government forbids anybody stepping on the virescence onthe deserts, which prevented the trend of desertification. They alsomade the law of Wilderness Act in 1964, establishing the naturalreserve to preserve wilderness areas. Of course, we can call for allthe people to protect wilderness self-consciously. For example, the“Green Peace” is the biggest civilian environment protectionorganization in the world. They take advantage of “Public opinion” toevocate people to against pollution and protect environment, urgegovernment to take effective measures of controlling pollution andpreserving wilderness areas.（好的理由~）

In sum, if we confess thenecessity and worthy meaning of preserve wilderness areas and we havethe ability to do so, then there is no excuse to refuse this assertion.

520 耗时：9：11-10：20
3.13.2008
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个人意见：
这篇文章写得非常好，值得学习~~^_^
文章最大的优点就是论据和理由非常地具体，我是绝对做不到这一点的，呵呵~真想请教一下作者怎么在1个小时的时间里想出这么多具体的例子的^_^

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