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发表于 2008-7-30 12:08:46 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and televisions make more negative effects than positive effects on young people’s behavior. Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

Watching movies or televisions are two of the most popular forms for entertainment. Many people like them and different people have their own favorite programs. It is different for them to live without TV or movies. However, some other people dislike these two things and regard watching them as a waste of time. I agree with the later group. Although I watch them sometimes, I deem their negative effects overweight the positive ones.

First, it is the undoubted fact that movies nowadays are filled with more and more negative things about sex, violence, which are harmful for the audience, especially the juvenile. A recent survey show a worrying result that more that eighty percent young people have been affected by the content of movies they had watched, and about 40 percent of people in this group admitted that their behavior were changed somehow after watching movies with negative content. This result raises our attention to the harmful effects of watching movies again. Although we can not deny the merit of some good movies, what is more important is to realize the harmful results and try to avoid it before it become worse.

Second, many people consider watching movies or TV as a good way of killing time, which is also harmful. For a point view of medicine, sitting in sofa to watch TV for a long time, usually referring to more than one hour can bring about several bad results. For example, someone watches program on TV over night, the blood stream will slower and maybe the blood pressure raise, which can lead to heart attack or disease of brain. Also, as everyone known, watching TV for a long time is one of the main reasons of myopia in children. Now that few people can assert that they can control themselves to walk around after watching TV for every hour, I have to regard that the negative effects are overwhelming.

Last, movies and TVs may disturb the normal communication with others. Communication is an indispensable part of people's daily lives. But experiences tells us that, both of movies and TV can isolate the audience from others. People loving watching these two things usually become reluctant to talk with others. They prefer to staying in the world set up by the movies or in the TV. This effect will be more and more harmful unless the reason can be resolved.

In conclusion, I maintain that the negative effects of movies and TVs overweight the positive ones. I think people should pay more attention to this issue and do more things to change the current situation.

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发表于 2008-7-31 20:55:59 |只看该作者

Watching movies or televisions are two of the most popular forms for entertainment. Many people like them and different people have their own favorite programs. It is different for them to live without TV or movies （这样的表达不准确，改为： Life without these great inventions would be different.）. However, some other people dislike these two things and regard watching them as a waste of time. I agree with the later group. Although I watch them sometimes, I deem their negative effects overweight the positive ones(好！).

First, it is the （an） undoubted fact that movies nowadays are filled with more and more negative things about sex, violence, which are harmful for the audience, especially the juvenile. A recent survey show(s) a worrying result that more that eighty percent young people have been affected by the content of movies they had watched, and about 40 percent of people in this group admitted that their behavior were changed somehow after watching movies with negative contents. This result raises our attention to the harmful effects of watching movies again. Although we can not deny the merit of some good movies, what is more important is to realize the harmful results and try to avoid it before it become worse.
(这个中间段落本身写得比较出色，这里我重写一个中间段，便于你比较修改。
First, negative information, including violence, horrible stories and porn, do harm to the audiences, especially the young generation, both physically and mentally. It would suffice to mention a recent survey concerning movies and their effects, with nearly 40 percent participants claiming the negative effects resulted from seeing bad movies or TV programs…. )

Second, many people consider watching movies or TV as a good way of killing time, which is also harmful. For a point view of medicine, sitting in sofa to watch TV for a long time, usually referring to more than one hour can bring about several bad results. For example, someone watches program on TV over night, the blood stream will slower and maybe the blood pressure raise, which can lead to heart attack or disease of brain. Also, as everyone known, watching TV for a long time is one of the main reasons of myopia in children. Now that few people can assert that they can control themselves to walk around after watching TV for every hour, I have to regard that the negative effects are overwhelming.

Last (last but not least), movies and TVs may disturb the normal communication with others. Communication is an indispensable part of people's daily lives. But experiences tells us that, both of movies and TV can isolate the audience from others. People loving watching these two things usually become reluctant to talk with others. They prefer to staying in the world set up by the movies or in the TV. This effect will be more and more harmful unless the reason can be resolved.

In conclusion, I maintain that the negative effects of movies and TVs overweight the positive ones. I think people should pay more attention to this issue and do more things to change the current situation.

先要经过苦训的试练。
流光所有汗水，用尽所有力气。
别让身体停下，
把训练的目标定在永远达不到的地方。
但还是要达到。
你会感到疲惫，犹豫，甚至沮丧。
但你不许放弃。
因为胜利不会是奇迹。
有一种天才，只从坚定不移的信念中诞生。

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