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发表于 2009-3-28 21:52:09 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

本帖最后由网兜妮妮于 2009-4-11 18:24 编辑

With the rapid development of economy and technology, many new things crash into our daily life,and we are dealing with more things than before to keep in pace of the world.In today's world, some people argue that it is impossible to do things well when we busy doing different things.Because we can not concentrate on one thing and hardly succeed. Although I agree that two or more things at hand sometimes make chaos,I still hold the opinion that doinging more things are helpful to the major thing,as well as to one’s success.

The first reason is that things are connected with each other,that means one can do one thing better when they have a large ken of knowledge.For example,one of the most famous contrubuter in media study is a professior of psychology in Yale.He uses methods once used in psycholocial experiments to the audiences study, which make a breakthrough in media study.So, the experience in doing other things sometimes make a brainstorm in ourselves and then we get a better way to accesss the major thing.

Secondly,doing a same thing with a long time is a kind of bore, by doing other things, one can relex and act as a more active role in the major thing.Take me as an example,my major is law,and this is a subject which need a high score in logical.But no one can analysis one question all day long,it is a hard task and sometimes with no result.So, my way to relax is darwing pictures,which is helpful to relieve stress and then,I can think my logical questions more efficently.

On the other hand,doing different things is helpful in arranging time, which is very important in morden life.A person who can make a proper timetable for himself will have a healthy life.When a day start,he knows when to work, leaves time to do sports and saves night hous to live with family.If he is good at arranging time,he can easily do everything well.Of course, sometimes it is really chaos to deal with two or more things,but with the time goes,he will find a way to arrange his time and do things well.

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发表于 2009-3-28 22:15:11 |只看该作者

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are busy doing different things that they can do few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

感觉作文题是说，人们总是忙于做不同的事所以很少的事能做好，而不是说是不是该集中精力做一件或者做很多件事，感觉很难写，如果理解有误，原和楼主探讨

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板凳

发表于 2009-3-28 22:26:41 |只看该作者

嗯，题目是很难写。其实这个题目可以替换成“忙是不是就会不精？”
我的论证结构是，
1不同的事之间有联系，反而有助于做好一件事。
2如果只做一件事的话太无聊，做不同的事可以帮助放松，反而能把事情做好。
3做不同的事需要管理时间，若果能管理好时间，时间计划内的每件事都能做好。
不能说明观点吗？应该可以说明做不同的事也能把事情都做好吧。

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地板

发表于 2009-3-28 22:33:35 |只看该作者

恩恩，这么一解释好像可以写了

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发表于 2009-3-29 18:28:59 |只看该作者

With the rapid development of economy and technology, many new things crash into our daily life,and we are dealing with more things than before to keep in pace of the world.In today's world, some people argue that it is impossible to do things well when we（少了个are吧） busy doing different things.Because we can not concentrate on one thing and hardly succeed. Although I agree that two or more things at hand sometimes make chaos,I still hold the opinion that doinging more things are helpful to the major thing,as well as to one’s success.（LZ的开篇写得很好啊）
The first reason is that things are connected with each other,that （which）means one can do one thing better when they have a large ken of knowledge.For example,one of the most famous contrubuter in media study is a professior of psychology in Yale.He uses methods once used in psycholocial experiments to the audiences study, which make a breakthrough in media study.So, the experience in doing other things sometimes make a brainstorm in ourselves and then we get a better way to accesss the major thing.
Secondly,doing a same thing with （是不是应该改成doing the same thing for）a long time is a kind of bore（boring就好了）, by doing other things, one can relex and act as a more active role in the major thing（觉得这句的表达有点问题大意是明白了就是觉得别扭）.Take me（myself？） as an example,my major is law,and this is a subject which needs a high score in logical（用score好么？ability之类会不会好些）.But no one can analysis（这个是名词应该用analyse） one question all day long,it is a hard task and sometimes with no result.So, my way to relax is darwing pictures,which is helpful to relieve stress and then,I can think my logical questions more efficently.

On the other hand,doing different things is helpful in arranging time, which is very important in morden life.A person who can make a proper timetable for himself will have a healthy life.When a day start,he knows when to work, leaves time to do sports and saves night hous to live with family.If he is good at arranging time,he can easily do everything well.Of course, sometimes it is really chaos to deal with two or more things,but with the time goes,he will find a way to arrange his time and do things well.

LZ写得挺好的逻辑结构都挺清晰的~~~~

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