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发表于 2009-6-4 00:45:09 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

本帖最后由草木也知愁于 2009-6-8 00:08 编辑

有感G报名之后，当下决心发狠认真时，到了某个状态一切都是那么美好！每天充实的，昂扬的，阳光的！
这里将见证我的10G之路，无论有多么艰辛，困苦，迷茫，动摇，我都要坚持下来，这是人生的磨炼，不经历风雨曾能见到彩虹！！
      可以不吃饭                      可以不打球
                    可以不午睡         可以不赖床
                                 什么都可以
   但是绝不能放下红宝、不能放下AW、、、不能放下G！！！！

既然自己要得更多，就要比别人付出的更多。。。。。

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发表于 2009-6-4 22:02:20 |只看该作者

刚做完第一次BS
180"Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system because moral behavior cannot be legislated.
总结：1从题干开始·moral behavior(MB)不能立法--->现代社会问题不能解决，不要凭感觉开始。
   2从题干分析里可以看出来MB是一个要定义的东西。社会问题也是必须分清楚的问题。从这两个下手，用那20问的思路过一下。
   3MB的定义，这里是moral behavior，不是moral or ehtics。
moral – adj. 1 a : of or relating to principles of right and wrong in behavior  : ETHICAL  <moral judgments>  b : expressing or teaching a conception of right behavior  <a moral poem>  c : conforming to a standard of right behavior  d : sanctioned by or operative on one's conscience or ethical judgment  <a moral obligation>  e : capable of right and wrong action  <a moral agent>
2 : probable though not proved  : VIRTUAL  <a moral certainty>
3 : perceptual or psychological rather than tangible or practical in nature or effect  <a moral victory>  <moral support>.
题干中MB所对应的是social problem，应该用这个意思
3 : perceptual or psychological rather than tangible or practical in nature or effect  <a moral victory>  <moral support>.
如果按照所谓的善恶判断标准的话，带回原题是不能够顺利理解意思。因为如果是按照善恶的标准的话为什么要通过立法呢？法制本来就是道德的一种表示而已。具体点：金融危机（失业…）、全球变暖、朝核问题、圣战。m1+b =正确行为。正确的就不要用法律规范了。因此MB定义是选3不是选1。这里的Moral是一个中性的意思。
   4仔细看题，把because先扔了。单独的看两个论断。
moral behavior cannot be legislated
Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system 。
这两个单独存在都是成立的。两个句子的联系在于solved by laws and the legal system和legislated。区别在于MB 和SP。仔细断清楚联系和区别。这道题也就差不多了
      5举出10个左右现存的sp，并把把其中不能通过法律解决的提出来。IN（人口问题，生态环境，劳动就业，经济危机，老龄化。基本上都是要通过法律宏观调控+其他手段调节的，比如说经济方面要考虑市场自发性，环境问题还要靠公众意识，青少年犯罪还要考虑教育因素，没有固定的是可以单考其中一个因素真正解决的）注意moral behavior的地域性，sp很泛。很多。sp 根据MB 和SP 分类，立足于题目。eg：global warming，psychological，比如说我想揍你一顿。但是我没揍。这样的问题法律就管不着。对这题的理解就是由于法律不能对人们的思想加以限制所以导致现在那么多不能解决的问题。
对sp的三个分类：第一类是MB涉及，法律边缘：金融危机（失业…）、全球变暖、朝核问题、圣战。第二类是违法：盗版、枪击、恐怖袭击。第三类是挑战法律的：辛普森（钻空子）、米兰达（建立新法律）。
也就是说前两类是正常解释，第三类是升华。就算有法律也不能解决问题。因为法律不一定完善。不是所有问题都能通过立法解决。最后再升华一下法律的目的现实意义啥的。重点在于because的由来上

批评：你们的讨论在于，看到题目全都不冷静。爱怎么想怎么想，想到最后完全忽视了题目限定的东西。急功近利不好。题目的逻辑层次先分清楚，再定义好范围，限定好自己发散的东西。再开始展开思想。这样才是有目的的，针对题目的。不然就是漫天开花。一个子儿都没打到猎物上。你们的问题就在于每次看到题目就开始了。分清里面的逻辑。找到要针对的重点。

这里有几题类似的：

174"Laws should not be rigid or fixed. Instead, they should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places."

178"It is possible to pass laws that control or place limits on people's behavior, but legislation cannot reform human nature. Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts and minds."

17"There are two types of laws: just and unjust. Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and, even more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust laws."

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发表于 2009-6-5 19:42:40 |只看该作者

今天刚完成同主题写作第二期的第一篇argument，按照斑竹的问题，思路果然扩展很多，不过那些问题也不知道我回答的是不是按照斑竹的思路来的……囧……
REASON1 Our poorest-selling magazine issues over the past three years were those that featured international news stories on their front covers.

Q:
1、cover stories count how much in the process of selling?
May be count a small part in the process of selling
2、selling is affected by what other than cover story?
Its content, celebrity, price
3、 what may lead to poor-selling?
Its quality decreases, and ability of distribution is weakened, company cut in the capital on advertising, much higher selling price.
4、what about the degree of "poorest-selling"?
It is the severely and drastically poor selling
5、what are the whole scope of three-years selling?
May be the poorest year is the first year of past three years. However, the next two years, selling is improved.
6、the overall international environment? as well as this type of magzines' selling
environment
International environment becoming better as there is little world-shaking affairs happen, which make this type of magzines’ selling decreased

REASON2 Over the same period, competing news-magazines have significantly decreased the number of cover stories that they devote to international news.

Q:
1、why they decreased the number?
(这个很能扯淡开来的。。商业转型/ 资金不足。。大家自由发散即可)
Its business mode changed from focusing on the international news to the sports news. Moreover, it is the scarcity of capital compel the competing news-magazines decreased the number.
2、what about their situations before the transition?
转型之前可能情况并无好转

3、do they get profit from it after that?
It doesn’t mention whether they get profit from it after that. May be they loose a large amount of money
4、how much their down-sizing mean to us? we dominated this field or we can not sustain?
他们降低销量可能是因为竞争不过我们，所以退出市场，我们就在这块领域其实是支配地位
5、 what are their status in this field compared with ours?
不能跟我们相竞争，想匹敌
REASON3 Moreover, the cost of maintaining our foreign bureaus to report on international news is increasing.

Q:
1、 how much increased in the payment?
增加的费用对于支付的整体其实是很小的，可以忽略不计
2、these money used in which way?
这些钱的用处或许正是改善公司情况的关键，使得在international领域有竞争力的
3、what are their profits? especially when compared the pay and income?
利润是又收益和支出构成的，支出增加了，但是收益增加的比支出打得多，其实是赢利的
4、the overall environment? how much do competitors pay in this field? what is the economic environment?
其他竞争单位也是需要这样支出的，每个竞争者在这个领域的支出可能更多，可能出现了金融危机，外币贬值，而支出的费用相对于本币其实更加划算了
5、which role of international news plays in our magazine?
International news可能在我们杂志中的份额是最大的，也是我们杂志的重点之一，缩减开支显然对杂志发展不利

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发表于 2009-6-5 19:54:44 |只看该作者

加油！哈哈，加菲，真巧！

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发表于 2009-6-6 23:05:04 |只看该作者

加油加油，同为加菲~嘿嘿！
今天一天人不舒服~上午看了1个List，下午和晚上分别改了别人的两篇A173，改的过程对自己启发特别大的就是：语法，effective writting 真的很重要~嗯，一定要好好把草木斑斑和di的语法贴和ew坚持看完~:loveliness:

马上就要考试了啊啊啊~第一门开始考试将于5天后，老师没有重点，我上课没听，这回疯了~GPA，红宝，AW一个都不能落下~加油！！！

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