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还有12天就考试了,今天才开始练第一篇作文!反省的同时,跪求大家帮我修改!感激不尽啊!
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In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regards this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience ,important for leaning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this ?
This issue of children’s education has always been a hot topic. Focused on whether children should do some paid work, this controversial issue is once again worth to be considered deeply. As far as I concerned , getting the children some paid work to do is beneficial for them as long as those works are not overloaded. There are many reasons to support my idea and here I list some of the most important.
What comes first is doing paid works do contribute a lot to the children’s growing up. It teaches children hard-working ,responsibility and independence. Nowadays, most children regards it nature to get money from their parents and the think making money is easy. However , when they become “workers” and use their working to exchange for money, they are getting to know money is not easy to make and they need to pay hard-working. At the same time , when they learn they need to work to get paid , they also learned that they should be responsible for what they do . That’s to say , the responsibility is taught to them during this progress. In addition, finishing work individually and getting paid is sculpture children’s personalities. Doing such work could make them grow to be more mature.
Besides the three important characters mentioned above, I do think that paid work is necessary to children because it expands their life experience and social contacts at the same time. Working ,even simple works that children do could improve their ability from various aspects . As everyone knows, communications skills and team work spirit are two key factors in today’s society , especially for children learning in schools. Working for paid is an effective way to learn these two abilities . I think such experience could not gained in class . So, paid work is positive to do .
However , as most people consider , I am a little bit worrying the negative factor of working for paid. For instance , it’s easy to appeal children’s attention from school studies. Many children are too young to arrange their time properly . Or works are over heavy which give children more pressure. Those are some serious problems we can not ignored. But , I don’t think children should not be allowed to learned more things as well as experience more colorful life just because of these reasons.
To sum up, I do support that children should do some proper paid work not only to learn more things that they cannot learn in school but to train themselves more responsible and independent. At the same time, children need to make a reasonable timetable for studies. Only when their works and studies reach to a balance , they can make their life successful. |
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