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各类精华汇总

(1)Fundamental Course Of Writing  

https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=931474&highlight   (第一遍)


(2)追星剑特训  

https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=203735&extra=page%3D1%26amp%3Bfilter%3Dtype%26amp%3Btypeid%3D50


(3)范文分析

(4) awintro 学习

(5) pooh百宝箱总结


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SPECTACULAR 之【SU & SY SO】语法     https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=959505&highlight

(暂不学习。自己看语法书去咯~)

SILENTWINGS教你写GRE句子                     https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=328073

米饭的debate学习                               https://bbs.gter.net/thread-949685-1-1.html


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awintro 学习贴 (一)


1.25   intro简介部分和issue部分



Overview of the Analytical Writing Section



You will be given a choice between two Issue topics. Each states an opinion on an issue of broad interest and
asks you to discuss the issue from any perspective(s) you wish, so long as you provide relevant reasons and examples to explain and support your views.



Preparing for the Analytical Writing Section



The responses were varied in content and in the way the writers developed their ideas.



Test-Taking Strategies for the Analytical Writing Section


Although an occasional spelling or grammatical error will not affect your score, severe and persistent errors will detract from the overall effectiveness of your writing and thus lower your score. 严重的重复的错误会损害文章的印象导致分数降低




How the Analytical Writing Section is Scored


Each response is holistically scored on a 6-point scale according to the criteria published in the GRE analytical writing scoring guides (see pages 27 and 28). 这次还没看到.下次注意看这里



Instead, readers assign scores based on the overall quality of the response, considering all of its characteristics in an integrated way. Excellent organization or poor organization, for example, will be part of the readers' overall impression of the response and will therefore contribute to the score, but


organization, as a distinct feature, has no specific weight. 结构虽然没有列在评分标准里,但是会影响读者的整体印象从而影响分数.



The scores given for the two tasks are then averaged for a final reported score. The score level


descriptions, presented on page 29, provide information on how to interpret the total score on the analytical writing section. The primary emphasis in scoring the analytical writing section is on critical thinking and analytical writing skills.



关于雷同的问题


Your essay responses on the analytical writing section will be reviewed by ETS essay-similarity-detection software and by experienced essay readers during the scoring process. In light of the high value placed on independent intellectual activity
within United States graduate schools and universities, ETS reserves the right to cancel test scores of any test taker when there is substantial evidence that an essay response includes, but is not limited to, any of the following:



text that is substantially similar to that found in one or more other GRE essay responses;


quoting or paraphrasing, without attribution, language or ideas that appear in published or unpublished sources; 有注明出处的引用


unacknowledged use of work that has been produced through collaboration with others without


citation of the contribution of others;


essays that are submitted as work of the examinee when the ideas or words have, in fact, been


borrowed from elsewhere or prepared by another person.


No record forfeit of the score cancellations, or the reason for cancellation, will appear on their future score reports sent to colleges and universities. 不会出现在成绩单上



Present Your Perspective on an Issue Task



Understanding the Issue Task



The "Present Your Perspective on an Issue" task assesses your ability to think critically about a topic ofgeneral interest and to clearly express your thoughts about it in writing. Each topic, presented in quotation marks, makes a claim about an issue that test takers can discuss from various perspectives and apply to many different situations or conditions. Your task is to present a compelling case (令人信服的)for your own position on the issue. Be sure to read the claim carefully and think about it from several points of view, considering the complexity of ideas associated with those perspectives. Then, make notes about the position you want to develop(标记自己要发展说明的点) and list the main reasons and examples that you could use to support that position.



The Issue task allows considerable latitude in the way you respond to the claim. Although it is important that you address the central issue, you are free to take any approach you wish. For example, you might


在抓住中心的同时可以有一定的自由范围


agree absolutely with the claim, disagree completely, or agree with some parts and not others


question the assumptions the statement seems to be making


qualify any of its terms, 限制或定义一些术语 especially if the way you define or apply a term is important to developing your perspective on the issue


point out why the claim is valid 有效的 in some situations but not in others


evaluate points of view that contrast with your own perspective


develop your position with reasons that are supported by several relevant examples or by a single extended example几个相关例子或者一个详细展开的例子



The GRE readers scoring your response are not looking for a "right" answer—in fact, there is no correct position to take. Instead, the readers are evaluating the skill with which you articulate and develop an argument to support your position on the issue. 评估写作者的表达能力和论述支持自己观点的能力




Understanding the Context for Writing: Purpose and Audience



The Issue task is an exercise incritical thinking and persuasive writing. The purpose of this task is to determine how well you can develop a compelling argument supporting your own perspective on an issue and to effectively communicate that argument in writing to an academic audience. Your audience consists of college and university faculty who are trained as GRE readers to apply the scoring criteria identified in the scoring guide for “Present Your Perspective on an Issue" (see page 27).




Preparing for the Issue Task



Because the Issue task is meant to assess the persuasive writing skills that you have developed throughout your education, it has been designed neither to require any particular course of study nor to advantage students with a particular type of training.



Many college textbooks on composition offer advice on persuasive writing that you might find useful, but even this advice might be more technical and specialized than you need for the Issue task. You will not be expected to know specific critical thinking or writing terms or strategies; instead, you should be able to use reasons, evidence, and examples to support your position on an issue.



It is not your position that matters so much as the critical thinking skills you display in developing your position.



No matter which approach you take when you practice the Issue task, you should review the task directions, then



carefully read the claim made in the topic and make sure you understand the issue involved; if it seems unclear, discuss it with a friend or teacher


think about the issue in relation to your own ideas and experiences, to events you have read about or observed, and to people you have known; this is the knowledge base from which you will develop compelling reasons and examples in your argument that reinforce, negate, or qualify the claim in some way


decide what position on the issue you want to take and defend—remember you are free to agree or disagree completely or to agree with some parts or some applications but not others


decide what compelling evidence (reasons and examples) you can use to support your position



Remember that this is a task in critical thinking and persuasive writing. Therefore, you might find it helpful to
explore the complexity of a claim in one of the topics by asking yourself the following questions:



审题时应思考的问题


What, precisely, is the central issue?


Do I agree with all or with any part of the claim? Why or why not?


Does the claim make certain assumptions? If so, are they reasonable?


Is the claim valid only under certain conditions? If so, what are they?


Do I need to explain how I interpret certain terms or concepts used in the claim?


If I take a certain position on the issue, what reasons support my position?


What examples—either real or hypothetical—could I use to illustrate those reasons and advance my point of view? Which examples are most compelling?



Once you have decided on a position to defend, consider the perspective of others who might not agree


with your position. Ask yourself: 确定立场之后应该思考的



What reasons might someone use to refute or undermine my position?



How should I acknowledge or defend against those views in my essay?




Deciding Which Issue Topic to Choose



Instead, try to choose fairly quickly the issue that you feel better prepared to discuss.



The Form of Your Response



You are free to organize and develop your response in any way that you think will effectively communicate your ideas about the issue.  in fact, when GRE readers are trained, they review hundreds of Issue responses that, although highly diverse in content and form, display similar levels of critical thinking and persuasive writing. Readers will see, for example, some Issue responses at the 6 score level that begin by briefly summarizing the writer's position on the issue and then explicitly announcing the main points to be argued. They will see others that lead into the writer's position by making a prediction, asking a series of questions, describing a scenario, or defining critical terms in the quotation. ??什么意思?? 是说两种开头都很好吗?下次脑袋清醒的时候再看看



You should use as many or as few paragraphs as you consider appropriate for your argument—for example, you will probably need to create a new paragraph whenever your discussion shifts to a new cluster of ideas. What matters is not the number of examples, the number of paragraphs, or the form your argument takes but, rather, the cogency of your ideas about the issue and the clarity and skill with which you communicate those ideas to academic readers.切题,中肯,有说服力. 主题的选择标准




小结:

1) 选择主题,可以在一定范文内根据自己的擅长有所侧重,但是要在分析题目的基础之上,抓住claimcentral issue!! critical thinking
2) 文章没有对错之分,重点在于你如何利用材料论据和论证过程,强有力的支持自己的观点.
persuasive writing
这两点很重要!!
3) 语法,单词拼写和结构也不能忽略

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awintro 学习贴 (二)

1.26


()argu考察的能力

ability to understand, analyze, and evaluate


()Argu时应关注的点:

1)提供的证据,论据
2)作者提出的明确的主张和结论
3)没有任何正当理由和论据,所做的猜想和假设
4)作者没有说的,但是从作者给出的陈述可以推理得到的


注意: argustructure结构,还有作者的line of reasoning推理过程,明确每个部分以及它暗含的意思对整个过程的影响.注意transition words

what is offered as evidence, support, or proof
what is explicitly stated, claimed, or concluded
what is assumed or supposed, perhaps without justification or proof
what is not stated, but necessarily follows from what is stated

In addition, you should consider the structure of the argument—the way in which these elements are linked together to form a line of reasoning; that is, you should recognize the separate, sometimes implicit steps in the thinking process and consider whether the movement from each one to the next is logically sound. In tracing this line, look for transition words and phrases that suggest that the author is attempting to make a logical connection (e.g., however, thus, therefore, evidently, hence, in conclusion).

()关于评分
"Analyze an Argument" is primarily a critical thinking task requiring a written response. Consequently, the analytical skills displayed in your critique carry great weight in determining your score.
The readers' commentaries discuss specific aspects of analytical writing, such as cogency of ideas, development and support, organization, syntactic variety, and facility with language.


()Preparing for the Argument Task

You will not need to see that the principal has committed the post hoc, ergo propter hoc fallacy; you will simply need to see that there are other possible explanations for the improved attendance, to offer some common-sense examples, and perhaps to suggest what would be necessary to verify the conclusion.
1) alternative explanation是否有其它因素导致了结果的发生
2) analysis 分析以及分析结果
3) argument论据
4) assumption假设
5)conclusion 结论
6) counterexample反例

关于应用例子的问题
Similarly, you might want to use examples if they help illustrate an important point in your critique or move your discussion forward (remember, however, that, in terms of your ability to perform the Argument task effectively, it is your critical thinking and analytical writing, not your ability to come up with examples, that is being assessed).

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fundamental course of writing 学习贴(一)

1.25 第一讲~第五讲



120 Questions for Writers    写作前20问

1. What does X mean? (Definition)
2. What are the various features of X? (Description)
3. What are the component parts of X? (Simple Analysis)
4. How is X made or done? (Process Analysis)
5. How should X be made or done? (Directional Analysis)
6. What is the essential function of X? (Functional Analysis)
7. What are the causes of X? (Causal Analysis) BE EACW
8. What are the consequences of X? (Causal Analysis)
9. What are the types of X? (Classification)
10. How is X like or unlike Y? (Comparison)
11. What is the present status of X? (Comparison)
12. What is the significance of X? (Interpretation)
13. What are the facts about X? (Reportage)
14. How did X happen? (Narration)
15. What kind of person is X? (Characterization/Profile)
16. What is my personal response to X? (Reflection)
17. What is my memory of X? (Reminiscence)
18. What is the value of X? (Evaluation)
19. What are the essential major points or features of X? (Summary)
20. What case can be made for or against X? (Persuasion)


2Writing Anxiety & 3Writer's Block  写作的焦虑和一些我摘抄的认为对自己有效的解决办法~

Symptom        You are anxious about writing the paper...  (写作前焦虑)
Coping Strategies     
*Focus your energy by rehearsing准备 the task in your head.
*Consciously stop the non-productive comments(没用的思路) running through your head by replacing  them with productive ones.
*If you have some "rituals(仪式)" for writing success, use them.
Symptom       You have attempted to begin a paper without doing any preliminary work such as brainstorming or outlining...
Possible Cures
*Write down all the primary ideas you'd like to express and then fill in each with the smaller ideas that make up each primary idea. This can easily be converted into an outline (这点不仅可以用在解决焦虑,也可以在没思路的时候用用~丰富自己的论证段落~很好啊!!!)

Symptom
You're self-conscious about your writing, you may have trouble getting started. So, if you're preoccupied with the idea that you have to write about a subject and feel you probably won't express yourself well...
Possible Cures
         *assure yourself that the first draft doesn't have to be a work of genius, it is something to work with.
         *Force yourself to write down something, however poorly worded, that approximates your thought (you can revise this later) and go on with the next idea.
       *Break the task up into steps. Meet the general purpose first, and then flesh out the more specific aspects later.
       *Try one of the strategies on the next page of this resource.

以下两点在没思路的时候也很好用哦~
(1) 改变你文章的读者群 想象成是需要你教的孩子,你的朋友,老师.父母或者与你意见完全相反的人.
Change the Audience Pretend that you're writing to a child, to a close friend, to a parent, to a person who sharply disagrees with you, or to someone who's new to the subject and needs to have you explain your paper's topic slowly and clearly. Changing the audience can clarify your purpose and can also make you feel more comfortable and help you write more easily.

(2) 假设你是另外的人在写这篇文章,有助于开拓思路.了解反对的意见等,完善文章的内容~ 好用好用吖!
Play a RolePretend you are someone else writing the paper. For instance, if you have been asked to write about sexist advertising, assume you are the president of the National Organization of Women. Or, pretend you are the president of a major oil company asked to defend the high price of oil. Consider being someone in another time period, or someone with a wildly different perspective from your own. Pulling yourself out of your usual perspective can help you see things that are otherwise invisible or difficult to articulate, and your writing will be stronger for it.

4start to write

when you start to write
You can try the textbook formula:


I. State your thesis.
II. Write an outline.
III. Write the first draft.
IV. Revise and polish                              . . . but that often doesn't work!!!   
这真是句大实话~!!


Instead, you can try one or more of these strategies:

Ask yourself what your purpose is for writing about the subject.
There are many "correct" things to write about for any subject, but you need to narrow down your choices.

Ask yourself how you are going to achieve this purpose

Start the ideas flowing
*Brainstorm. Gather as many good and bad ideas, suggestions, examples, sentences, false starts, etc. as you can. (尽可能的多想一些意见和观点)
*Jot down everything that comes to mind, including material you are sure you will throw out. Be ready to keep adding to the list at odd moments as ideas continue to come to mind. (罗列你想到的,包括一些素材等.)
*if possible (to give yourself the opportunity of considering a subject from several different points of view). What questions would the other person ask? You might also try to teach the subject to a group or class. (这还是在说换角色拓宽思路)
*See if you can find a fresh analogy that opens up a new set of ideas. Build your analogy by using the word like. For example, if you are writing about violence on television, is that violence like clowns fighting in a carnival act (that is, we know that no one is really getting hurt)? (在上一点,发现了反对你观点一方的想法,利用到自己的反证中)

Take a rest and let it all percolate.
Nutshell your whole idea.
Tell it to someone in three or four sentences.

Diagram your major points somehow.
Make a tree, outline, or whatever helps you to see a schematic representation of what you have. You may discover the need for more material in some places.

Write a first draft.
You may find yourself jumping back and forth among these various strategies.
You may find that one works better than another. You may find yourself trying several strategies at once. If so, then you are probably doing something right!

5Writing With Computers

Planning freewriting   关掉屏幕~一个很特别的想法~
Some writers find that they can freewrite more easily by turning down the computer screen, so they cannot see what they type.

planning visually   利用图和一些类似支撑树的东西来拓宽自己的素材~!又是个拓宽思路的方法~
Use a drawing or painting program to do some visual planning. To do some clustering, put a topic word or phrase in a circle in the middle of the page and then surround that circle with clusters of related ideas (also in circles). Use lines to connect these ideas to the main idea or to other sub-ideas. To try branching, another visual planning strategy, put the main idea at the top of the page and then list sub-ideas underneath the main idea with related points for each sub-idea branching off.

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fundamental course of writing 学习贴(二)

1.26 第6讲~第11讲


(6) 关于thesis –文章的主题

1. 什么是主题句---主题句说明你的观点和要论证的论点,而不是事实和论据
开头段前面的部分是主题句的内涵,主题句一般出现在开头的最后一两句,阅卷人一定会在你的Introduction里边的最后一两句找你的Thesis, Make it clear, strong, and easy to find.
我需要做的: 确保首段最后出现主题句,主题句清晰有力.

2. 好的主题句
Dos:
表明立场,具体,并且中心明确,表明自己的观点和结论,出现在开头段的末尾,同时提示读者作者的行文思路.
Don’ts:
不要说废话,说空话,说大话,不要出现第一人称(I believe…,in my opinion),不要含糊不清(it seems…)


公式:
Specific topic + Attitude/Angle/Argument = Thesis
What you plan to argue + How you plan to argue it = Thesis

3. 检验主题句是否合格


是否能吸引读者思考 why? How?
避免出现so what, who cares的问题
避免绝对的论调 all, none, every
主题句是否引导了下文的分论点或者段主题?主题句的逻辑顺序与后文的论述顺序
主题句是否可以适合被展开论述?

4.写主题句的思维步骤
Select a topic
Ask an interesting question
Revise the question into a thesis
这里形成的是preliminary thesis

(7)段落的逻辑顺序问题


1.并不是所有的文章都是要按照ascending orders的,其实别的顺序都可以接受,包括descending的。主要是按照合理的顺序,说清楚意思就好。
2.实际的文章写作,没有这么单纯的顺序,Issue题目中,许多复杂的问题远不能拿这些逻辑顺序概括。实际上,我们把这种复杂的顺序叫做the flow of mind,根据论证的思路排序
3.补充一种顺序:IMRaD: Introduction- Materials and Methods -
Results – Discussion


(8)段落topic sentence & 逻辑顺序标志词 signpost

topic sentence ---- Sometimes are actually two or even three sentences long.
1) Complex sentences. (利用复合句,联系上下文的作用)always move from old to new information.
2) Questions.
(提问)Questions are by definition a form of inquiry, and thus demand an answer. Good essays strive for this forward momentum.


(9)段落内部句子结构问题
1.段落的概念
1)段落基本的三要素:
一个独立的观点-和Thesis密切相关
一个合理的逻辑顺序
没有无关细节

2) 段落的长短问题: 没有一个绝对的标准的,长短适度,根据话题和论述的需要。
过短的段落说明你信息不足,论证不充分,观点的选择比较肤浅,论述的范围比较窄。
过长的段落说明你信息冗余,或者不相关细节过多,讨论过宽。


2.段落的结构
1)The topic sentence:
TS
的两个作用:

是你本段话题的Thesis,起到和全文的Thesis一样的作用.
注意: TS总是在文章的开头的第一或者第二句话, 很少可以见到在文章的最后出现,并且最好不要这样使用!
它是全文的Thesis的进一步的推广和具体化;

2)Supporting evidence/analysis:
由论据和论证组成,为了合理的论证观点TS.必须在论据和论证之间找到一个平衡!


3)The conclusion(observation):
结论句总是在文章的最后一句或者倒数第二句!结论句除了总结上文的论述,还要在此总结上做好向下一个分论点的过度。


3.段落的内容
1)内容基本原则:
Orient your reader to the subject. 让读者知道你的下一步怎么写
Tie your ideas together.
Take it easy through technically dense passages.
Arrange your ideas in a logical sequence.

2) 如何让读者知道你下一步想写什么
Whenever you introduce a new idea, your readers will appreciate definitions, examples and comparisons with things they already know. They will feel more comfortable with your new information if they have a familiar reference to hang on to.


三种方法:
use orienting words and phrases :
of course ,as you know ,until now , obviously ,normally ,

previously ,everyone is familiar with ,remember that
let the old amplify the new 列出新事物比老的先进的点,而不是先说老事物的缺点然后再引出新的事物.
add explanatory words and phrases: when you are introducing new ideas, you will have to expand and clarify them with definitions and explanatory material.

4.段内句子的连接
1) 三个原则:

Unity-所有句子讲同一个主题

Coherence-句子之间相互关联,
共同构成有机整体Connection-适当的连接句子


2)方法:
利用连接词connectives 连接段落 (peter的语言总结里有详细的介绍)
Connective words that describe relationships:
also, however , although, incidentally, therefore, besides, likewise, thus, meanwhile, moreover, usually, furthermore, next, whatever, generally, yet, accordingly, nevertheless, instead, in contrast, for example

Connectives that give a sense of time:
first, secondly, finally , now, once , when, ultimately , eventually, lastly, later ,meanwhile, previously, then , soon, formerly, sometimes

Other Connective phrases:
to begin with, on the other hand, in brief, in general, in summary, more specifically, instead of, in addition to, in other words, another way to, for the same reason, no matter what, such a, that's what (why),in fact, what's more, in the same way, on the contrary, conversely, as a result, summing up, if so / not

利用重复 :try to have a word or phrase somewhere in each sentence that refers to something in a previous sentence.
利用人称和其他代词指代。
核心词重复(或者改写重复)
利用强调词intensives!!! Use them like garlic -- sparingly
especially, as much as , even if/though, increasingly, by far, so...that, more importantly, highly, only, particularly, in fact , very, significantly, quite , such, most , unique, at all, above all, indeed, in any case

(10)如何有效论证
为了使这些论据流畅的结合在一起,应该:
1) State your claim.
2) Give your evidence, remembering to relate it to the claim.
3) Comment on the evidence to show how it supports the claim

(11)怎么写conclusion
1. A conclusion should
1)stress the importance of the thesis statement, (重现主题句)
2)give the essay a sense of completeness, and (完善全文)
3) leave a final impression on the reader.(给读者一个深刻的印象)


2. Strategies
1) Echoing the introduction: (呼应开头)
2) Challenging the reader:(挑战读者)在以后的生活中应该
3) Looking to the future:(展望未来)
4) Posing questions:(提出问题)

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fundamental course of writing 学习贴(三)

1.27  第12讲~第16讲


12Conciseness简洁: Methods of Eliminating Wordiness

1. Eliminate unnecessary determiners限定词and modifiers修饰语   去掉不必要的限定词和修饰语
kind of, sort of, type of, really, basically, for all intents and purposes,
definitely, actually, generally, individual, specific, particular

2. Change phrases into single words
3. Change unnecessary that, who, and which clauses into phrases

4. Avoid overusing expletives感叹词 at the beginning of sentences
Expletives的形式 it + be-verb 或者 there + be-verb
Such expressions can be rhetorically effective for emphasis in some situations, but overuse or unnecessary use of expletive constructions creates wordy prose.
The most common kind of unnecessary expletive construction :
a noun + a relative clause beginning with that, which, or who. 类似于强调句型?还是同位语从句?等搞懂了语法再来看看!


5. Use active rather than passive verbs 用主动形式而不是被动形式
6. Avoid overusing noun forms of verbs
Sentences with many nominalizations usually have forms of be as the main verbs. Using the action verbs disguised in nominalizations as the main verbs--instead of forms of be--can help to create engaging rather than dull prose.
尽量使用动词而不是be动词作

7. Reword unnecessary infinitive phrases 改述不必要的不定式短语
Some infinitive phrases can be converted into finite verbs or brief noun phrases. Making such changes also often results in the replacement of a be-verb with an action verb.

8. Replace circumlocutions with direct expressions 用直接的表达替代迂回的叙述
Of course, occasionally you may for rhetorical effect decide to use, say, an expletive construction instead of a more succinct expression. These guidelines should be taken as general recommendations, not absolute rules.
为了修饰的作用可以适当的使用

可以互相替代的部分短语和词汇

because, since, why=
the reason for
for the reason that
owing/due to the fact that      

in light of the fact that
considering the fact that
on the grounds that
this is why


when=
on the occasion of
in a situation in which
under circumstances in which


about=
as regards
in reference to
with regard to
concerning the matter of
where ________ is concerned


must, should=
it is crucial that
it is necessary that
there is a need/necessity for
it is important that
cannot be avoided


can=
is able to
has the opportunity to
has the capacity for
has the ability to


may, might, could=
it is possible that
there is a chance that
it could happen that
the possibility exists for


9. Omit 删掉 words that explain the obvious or provide excessive detail
If you find passages that explain or describe in detail what would already be obvious to readers, delete or reword them.

10. Omit repetitive wording 删掉重复的词语

Redundant Pairs  Many pairs of words imply each other.
past memories, various differences, each individual _______,
basic fundamentals, true facts, important essentials, future plans, terrible tragedy,
end result, final outcome, free gift ,past history, unexpected surprise, sudden crisis

Redundant Categories
Specific words imply their general categories, in each of the following phrases, the general category term can be dropped, leaving just the specific descriptive word:
large in size, often times, of a bright color, heavy in weight, period in time,
round in shape, at an early time, economics field, of cheap quality, honest in character,
of an uncertain condition, in a confused state, unusual in nature, extreme in degree, of a strange type



13-15Proofreading 校对问题
Proofreading for Commas
Compound Sentence Commas 复合句中正确添加逗号

1. Skim your paper, looking only for the seven coordinating conjunctions:   and, nor, but, so, for, or, and yet.
2. Stop at each of these words to see whether there is an independent clause (a complete sentence), on both sides of it.
3. If so, place a comma before the coordinating conjunction.

Comma Splices 逗号的误用
1. Skim your paper, stopping at every comma.
2. See whether you have an independent clause (a sentence) on both sides of the comma.
3. If so, change the sentence in one of the following ways:
1) 将后面的一句变成从句形式
2) 在逗号后面添加一个连接词 and
3) 用分号代替逗号

Introductory Commas 引导性的逗号
Introductory commas after dependent clauses 状语从句后的逗号

1. Skim your paper, looking only at the first two or three words of each sentence.
2. Stop if one of these words is a dependent marker such as while, because, when, if, after, when, etc.
3. If necessary, place a comma at the end of the introductory dependent clause.

Other introductory commas
1. Skim your paper, looking only at the first word or two of each sentence.
2. Stop if the word or phrase . . .
ends in -ing   
动名词

is an infinitive (to + verb)    介词短语
is an introductory word (well, yes, moreover, etc.)
3. Place a comma at the end of the introductory phrase.
4. If the sentence begins with a prepositional phrase (a phrase beginning with in, at, on, between, with, etc.), place a comma after the prepositional phrase if it is longer than three words or suggests a distinct pause before the main clause.

16Metaphors 比喻的运用
看了一下..我的写作还没达到开始运用的程度呢..等过过再回来看看把!

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追星剑特训  学习贴(一)


1.28  第一章 基本元素           (受益匪浅呐~~练习下次再看的时候做~)

追星剑特训之一 Terminology 关键字眼
1)关键字下定义
2)识别题目的关键字至少有两点基本作用:
其一,阐明和确立所进行讨论的前提,不仅是为了在文章中明确体现自己的认识,更同时是给自己明确自己的认识——免得因为对关键词的认识从一开始就模糊摇摆然后写到后半背叛前半;
其二,明确了关键字,也就抓住题目的核心问题和关系所在,从关键字入手进行思考,自然是打开思路源泉的首选。
3) 练习: issue15, issue144,issue17,issue176

追星剑特训 Chapter1.2 More 比较级
1) more的题目,目的就是让你来比较,所以一定要写出对moreresponse

2) 如果AB,
可以先写A的优势,
然后写B的优势,
最后一定要对比,什么时候AB,什么时候BA,(或者写只有A没有B强调necessary)然后给出balance结论.
说到底就是各自有各自用处,这种一概而论的观点是不可靠的,应该从完整的角度去看待得出equal这个结论云云

3)如果是旗帜鲜明的文章要注意: 如果不是一边倒而是有让步的话,注意不要让让步抢了正文的风头;如果是一边倒,那就只管去发挥好了。原则仍然是:要把contrast体现出来,把contrast做足了。
4)练习:issue2, issue 12, issue 56, issue 73, issue 192

狒狒的破题思路:
174. "Laws should not be rigid or fixed. Instead, they should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places."
(题目大体看来是个倾向性的题目,从特训角度来看。破题:法律不应当a,相反,法律应当b[a的对立面]来满足1.2.3。思考:现状[事实性]——法律是否是a, a,则如何不能满足1.2.3;不是a[b]则如何能够满足1.2.3[倾向性]——情况1:事实a的话不能满足1.2.3所以采取b;事实b的话,如果a则不能满足1.2.3,所以采取b正确)


追星剑特训 Chapter1.3 1+1 得寸进尺
1)类型的定义:所谓1+1与得寸进尺者,指的就是具有类似结构的题目:可以分为前后两半部分,并且可以看出作者认为两部分间有一定程度的递进关系(例如因果)。


2) 破题思路:作者认定了递进不等于我们就同样首肯这一关系,加上前后半各自的claim,这样结构的题目,实际上是具有丰富的入手点的。
第一: 对题目做出正面回应. 是否同意Claim所陈述的事实: /不是/取决于xx.xxx;这里可以用到cha1.1里面的Terminology,对于关键词的定义不同,自己的观点也就随之不同了.
第二: 前一部分和后一部分的关系是否成立? 成立/不成立/在某些条件下成立

实际上我认为这类题目除了前后均同意原题的时候可能展开还略费心神之外,只要前后出现一处反对或者拆分关键字,那就根本不愁展开了,明确论点例证(或理证)支持一篇文章很轻松就能出来。

3) 练习: issue41,issue43,issue52,issue93,issue98,issue196,issue226

追星剑特训 Chapter1.4 Is vs should 事实与倾向
1) IS 事实性问题: 目前的状况如何,xxx的状态是什么样的
思路:题目提出的是一个状态,而自己的文章立论无非是要论证题目提出的这个状态是对的,是错的,或者不一定的,或者etc.

2)Should倾向性问题: 我们应该如何,即不管xxx现状如何,应该如何做才能
论点可以为:目前状况如何,is问题,导致了问题..所以we should

3) imong的总结观点:
a.倾向不能拿来证明事实
b.不涉及价值判断的事实不能拿来证明倾向

4)练习: issue30should),issue53(should)issue65(is), issue146(is), issue219(is)

追星剑特训 Chapter1.5 Not but 选择题
1) 动笔之前明确自己对两个端点关键字的认识自然必不可少——又回到Terminology这一贯穿始终的写作元素上面去。
2) 为全文设定一个价值标准,既要达到的目标
3) A对完成目标有什么作用, B对完成目标有什么作用,如果单用AorB都无法解决问题,所以应当是一个合理的两者之间的协同作用.

取舍源于判断标准。通过明确自己的判断标准,帮助破解和展开题目——今天所谈到的主观选择题,无论倾向性题目还是事实性题目和1+1题目的前后层次不同,not but题目给出的是两个处在平行位置关系的端点概念,都是一样的。

4)练习: issue51, issue56, issue93, issue213, issue223

追星剑特训 Chapter1.6 Conditioning 拆分
1) Terminology讲的是对题干的进行识别分析拆分定义etc,而如果题目里面出现了详细的展开(有破折号,such as等),直接照着这个展开继续下去是个不错的思路,尤其是出现了every aspectany field的时候。当然,手头的准备和素材要够用才行,如果没把握洋洋洒洒的展开下去,可能还是要另找入手点,把原因说清楚。

2) 绝对化的题目的信号词有很多,题目中的No field of study, no matter what the situation, any field of inquiry…,例如No matterin any, all, must, best, only等等。用拆分,指明决定因素的划分来写case by case,是对绝对化倾向题目回应的一个办法——再次提醒,不是普适的办法,有些题目未必能写。

3) Conditioning其实就是这样:如果说写balance写两者都必须两者都不可少比较绕的话,conditioning无疑写起来又方便又舒服。哪些条件下A成立,哪些条件下A不成立,前面这个分支一搭好了,务必把这个哪些条件什么条件给说清楚了,后面就只管往里填就是。找到的入手点,一下子展开到多个方面的考虑,在保证论证的基础上文章会相当的完整和充实的。
4) 练习:issue4, issue35, issue84, issue87, issue116, issue118, issue186, issue217

追星剑特训 Chapter1.7 Supreme 练习
                                                              
issue108. "In many countries it is now possible to turn on the television and view government at work. Watching these proceedings can help people understand the issues that affect their lives. The more kinds of government proceedings --- trials, debates, meetings, etc --- that are televised, the more society will benefit."
在很多国家,从电视上看到政府人员办公的场景已是可能。观看这些过程有助于人们理解影响他们生活的问题。政府办公如审判、辩论、会议等的各个场景,转播得越多,对社会越有益

issue110. "When we concern ourselves with the study of history, we become storytellers. Because we can never know the past directly but must construct it by interpreting evidence, exploring history is more of a creative enterprise than it is an objective pursuit. All historians are storytellers."
当我们研究历史时,我们变成了讲故事的人。因为我们无从直接知道过去发生的事情,必须通过一些证据来构建,所以历史研究是一个有创造成分的领域,而并非一个客观的学科。所有的历史学家都是讲故事的人(storyteller)。

issue114. "Humanity has made little real progress over the past century or so. Technological innovations have taken place, but the overall condition of humanity is no better. War, violence, and poverty are still with us. Technology cannot change the condition of humanity."
人道主义在上个世纪并没有真正的发展。科技发展,但是人道主义的整体面貌并没有得到改善。战争、暴力、贫穷一直困扰着我们。科技不能改变人道主义状况。

issue199. "Truly innovative ideas do not arise from groups of people, but from individuals. When groups try to be creative, the members force each other to compromise and, as a result, creative ideas tend to be weakened and made more conventional. Most original ideas arise from individuals working alone."
真正创新的思想不是来自群体,而是来自个人。当一个群体试图创新时,群体中的成员使得彼此相互妥协,最终削弱集体的创造性,趋向遵循传统。大部分创造性思想来自于个人的独立工作。

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这个……LZ总结的狠好, 让我抱走吧,谢谢。
好好加油啊

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本帖最后由 chalia 于 2010-2-1 12:19 编辑



Raccoon 如何写argument (一)(二)(三)    学习贴

1.作者的文章,首先要分成 [结论] [前提] [论据]

2.它们之间的关系可以理解为:
“因为[前提]的存在,所以我的[结论]是…那为什么说这个[前提]是正确的呢?因为…[论据]”

3.3者间的逻辑关系
:
1)前提和结论  —— 可以说是一个因果关系 (至少作者想体现出一种因果关系)

2)论据和前提 —— 也可以说是一个因果关系,因为这里的论据是用来证明前提的


4.但是,究竟哪个逻辑关系是主关系呢?
显然应该是前提和结论的因果关系,如果你承认这点,那么就应该在你的第一攻击点,首先考虑攻击这个关系.

大前提——小前提——论据

注意: 攻击是有主次的,攻击不同的逻辑层次产生的效力也是完全不一样的。
1)不要觉得什么地方好写,就多写。
2)什么错误先出现就先写。很有可能最后出现的错误就是最致命的错误。

同时也请大家注意读题目,先要把题目句子间的逻辑顺序搞清了,前提和结论都好好的仔细读。总会有收获的。

5.racoon提纲里的几个原则:
1)从攻击力最强的地方开始
2)争取在段首就能给出自己的逻辑判断,要能一针见血的指出作者的问题
3)找一个点,反过来说明作者如何论证才能加强效果,而不总是一直攻击到底





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