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发表于 2010-2-11 23:14:30 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

2月11号 issues： 130"How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."
It is increasingly accepted that peple consider that how children are socillized determines the destiny of our community, they aslo maintain that nowadays,we have no idea of cultivating our kids well. At the first glance, the argument seems plausible , but further considerration reveals that I could not agree with the statement absobutely for the following reasons.

The fist reason could be illustrated as the development of our society is a entire objective ,which is determined by many factors instead of unilateral factor. The society is a complex combination of human ,natural envirement, climate and so on , the other aspects aslo carry an extremently influence on our society in common. For instance, our human now were in faced with a urgent climate incidence called I E phenomemon. It is conspicuous that the sort of devastating weather problem brought about a significant negative effect to our life by elevating the temprature of ocean. Futhermore, it made green-house effect take palace more frequently such as the icebergs melted more quickly and earlier than last years,the average temperature in winter is obscure higher than before. In additon, the disastrer such as eathequake, strom ,flood,attacked people time and time again, which aslo gave rise to a serious of new crises.All of these spcific issues determined our future not just the problem of how to teach our adolecent.

The second point support my opinion is some of our educationists set good examples for the masses of public and these informed us that a great mount of young generation were cultivated very excellent and now are becoming the esscence of our society. It is very conspicurous that we know how to instruct our descedentants thousands years ago.Confucius is among the greatest saints in history and the his well-known advanced policy termimated the molopoly on education.He aslo proposed that different children have different aptitudes,interest ,and learning style ,thus we should eduate according to these characters above.Up to now, we learned experiences from those a lot , so why does the author suggested that we don’t know how to teach our kid? In fact we,do.

Admittedly the educational guideline and measurements are the extremently fundamental policy for our human beings, we should attach much importance on it. however our perspective of society is not determied only by our offprings and their educaional problems, on the contrary it was decide by various issues on enviroment, climate, and so on.It is of some value that good measures were enacted and relied to weather the crises.

In sum,I could not support the writer for unreasonable and unconvincing points exist in the argument to some extent, however, if some more credible and rational reasons were proposed, we could make future discussions.

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