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本帖最后由 lostsunelf 于 2010-8-14 18:36 编辑

8月21号就要考试了，明天开始写第一篇作文！！！先来此地开一个贴，明天的作文题目是：

8月14日上交：
09.08.07NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should allow children to make their own choices rather than determine their children’s future for them.

Although it is responsible and reasonable for parents to guide their children when their offspring are facing the deciding moments or standing at the crossroads during their lives, determining their son and daughter’s future in the way planned and dreamed by adults rather than by the children themselves is definitely improper and short-sighted considering the future of the adolescents’ personal development, especially in the long run.

First of all, it is the children themselves rather than their parents that know exactly what they want and who will be in the future. In the modern society of China, one family usually owns only one child, this special situation results in highly expectation and anticipation of their children, since our generation are burdened with the dreams unfulfilled by our parents. As a result, we are sent to piano school passively by mothers although we actually interested in dancing. Later when choosing a major in the university, fathers choose business for you though biology is your favorite. Since interest plays an important role in one’s life, your future is deemed to be a failure when you are facing such boring things every day.

Secondly, only independent and self-reliance people can succeed in our modern society. As we all know, challenges and chances make our society a fierce place where only successful man can live. Although parents can support you and make decisions to help you in your childhood, there is going to be a day when you grow up to be an adult and find a way to live on your own hands. If the children are used to depend on their parents, this reliance will absolutely resist you to succeed. In other word, only characteristics such as independent and self-reliance which deprived from the habituate of making the choices of the children themselves can survive from the competitive society.

Finally, the experiences, no matter successful or failure, gained from their own choices is more helpful than the choices imposed by their parents. Man should be responsible for their own life, choices included undoubtedly. Successful experience attests the choice you choose and strengths your confidence toward the life and business simultaneously. Bad memories, such as losing experiences, however, are relatively more conductive for the child to grow, especially the choice is made by yourself for you have no chance to blame other people who might be responsible for your failure.

In sum, I hold the opinion that rather than determine their children’s future parents should allow children to make their own choices.

第一篇T的作文啊，希望大家能够多提意见！！谢谢

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发表于 2010-8-15 18:22:08 |只看该作者

姑娘厉害……洋洋洒洒500+..没什么好改的..论据很充分……
就一句In other word, only pocessing characteristics such as independent and self-reliance which deprived from the habituate of making the choices of the children themselves can people survive from the competitive society.
我改了一下……也不太确定正确与否?请指教...

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发表于 2010-8-16 20:42:03 |只看该作者

作文改好了~
楼主写得很不错~！
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