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[求助] 为什么现在没有好心人帮忙改作文啦?呜呜 [复制链接]

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发表于 2012-3-20 16:49:23 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
都传上去好几篇了,却没人帮一下。唉
再来一个吧,有关:是否年轻的人离开家里早独立好?
Wether it is good for the young adults to live with their parents for a long time or not has became a popular issue at present. Some youngs prefer to accompany with the eldly people in order to drive off their feel of lonely. Even so, I think youngs should be independent from their parents as soon as possible.
   There will be more and more complex things to face as we growing up. We have no excuse to depend on our parents to help us solve all these problems.So having the independence from parents enables us to meet with the difficulties in a personal way.For instance,it is possible to work in a strange city when you grow up,you probably ends up starving unless you have the skill of cooking.In light of the consequence,we are supposed to increase our skills in different areas without parents' helps.
The sooner we are independent from parents,the better for personal development.Some experience can only be mastered by taking yourself into practice,which is so significant factor to the employees.you will achieve the attitude to failure and increase your tenacity to meet with the adverse adversity.In these process,you has put yourself at a competitive cutting-edge.
One success of education in America is making children indenpendent from their parents.They teach children by experiecing in child's own.Also,the statement stimulates kids thinking profoundly and creat perfect production such as i pad.  When you have trouble with your friends,the ability of socilazation could put the effect to alleviate the delima. Then you are able to shoulder your responsibility for others.
The behavior of depending on parents has actually become an obstacle to  success for the youngs.Only if the indenpendence can help them find their niche.
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