[i习作temp] ISSUE 87 写过的没写过的都可以来交流哈 [复制链接]

niuniua
UID: 3274179

寄托新兵

Rank: 2

声望: 14
寄托币: 152
注册时间: 2012-3-16
精华: 0
帖子: 18

电梯直达

楼主

发表于 2012-6-2 23:44:43 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

87) Claim: Any piece of information referred to as a fact should be mistrusted, since it may well be proven false in the future.
Reason: Much of the information that people assume is factual actually turns out to be inaccurate.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.

response:

As the writer has stated in the claim and reason, much of the information that people assume is factual actually turns out to be inaccurate so that  writer suggest that any piece of information should be mistrusted since it may well be proven false finally.As far as I am concerned, this claim is not fair because the information cannot be all false .Therefore, I partly agree with the writer's opinion.

In the history of human's civilization, there are a few cases which can demonstrate that we should mistrust the so-called fact which  was  proven false latter.Consider Copernicus,he didn't believe that the earth is the center of cosmos.After years of observations, he finally justify that our earth where we live on is travelling around the sun.This great found  broke the stereotype which has bound people's mind for many years and make people to look the classic theory differently.This is the mistrustion's unbelievable effect ,it instruct intellegent people to find the real truth.

But not any piece of information refered to as a fact must be false.Such facts that  earth is approximately round ,moon goes around earth periodically is  undoubtable.Thus we can infer a conclusion like that any piece of information which have not be subtly scutinized but refered to as a fact should be mistrusted.Former example about  the center of cosmos can be attribiuted into this kind of group since we have never justify  earth is the center of cosmos but believe this is true with no doubt just because a primer famous philosopher had ever said .Once a fact has been prudently scrutinized and it is justified right ,we have no reason to mistrust it.

So we should propose sufficient evidences either when we are giving out a conclusion or when we are mistrusting a given conclusion.The mistrusting to a existed conclusion without evidences cannot be appropriate and convincing.All we need is to turn a fair and objective attitude to the existed information refered to as a fact.

相关帖子 Updated by 2025.03.03

0 0

使用道具举报

rippersean
UID: 2523263

寄托新兵

Rank: 2

声望: 15
寄托币: 260
注册时间: 2008-7-28
精华: 0
帖子: 28

沙发

发表于 2012-6-3 13:24:43 |只看该作者

本帖最后由 rippersean 于 2012-6-3 13:26 编辑

87) Claim:Any piece of information referred to as a fact should be mistrusted, since itmay well be proven false in the future.
Reason: Much of theinformation that people assume is factual actually turns out to be inaccurate.
Write a response inwhich you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim andthe reason on which that claim is based.

As the writer hasstated in the claim and reason, much of the information that people assume isfactual actually turns out to be inaccurate so that the writer suggests that any piece of information should be mistrusted since it may well be proven false finally.As far as I am concerned, this claim is not fair because theinformation cannot be all false .Therefore, I partly agree with the writer'sopinion.
开头中规中矩提出观点。很好
In the history of human's civilization, there area few cases which can demonstrate that we should mistrust the so-called factwhich  was  proven false latter.Consider Copernicus,hedidn't believe that the earth is the center of cosmos.After years of observations,he finally justify that our earth where we live on is travelling around thesun.This great found  broke the stereotype which has bound people'smind for many years and make people to look the classic theory differently.Thisis the mistrustion's unbelievable effect ,it instruct intellegent people tofind the real truth.
你把文章最重要的部分的观点---也就是你同意的，没有说啊。。。整段都是例子。。这一段开头应该论述为什么事实不可靠。哥白尼的例子想办法不要再用了。。已经被前辈们用烂了。
But not any piece of information refered to as afact must be false.Such facts that  earth is approximately round,moon goes around earth periodically is  undoubtable.Thus we caninfer a conclusion like that any piece of information which have not be subtlyscutinized but refered to as a fact should be mistrusted.Former exampleabout  the center of cosmos can be attribiuted into this kind ofgroup since we have never justify  earth is the center of cosmos butbelieve this is true with no doubt just because a primer famous philosopher hadever said .Once a fact has been prudently scrutinized and it is justified right,we have no reason to mistrust it.
同样的，没论述，纯例子，肯定不行啊
So we should propose sufficient evidences eitherwhen we are giving out a conclusion or when we are mistrusting a givenconclusion.The mistrusting to a existed conclusion without evidences cannot beappropriate and convincing.All we need is to turn a fair and objective attitudeto the existed information refered to as a fact.
文章很空洞，纯例子，几乎就没有论述。而且例子都用的一个。。这是很致命的啊。建议楼主写文章前先列个观点提纲，专门针对提纲进行论述。例子只是一个补充说明的东西。我思考的一个提纲：
1、fact不可靠（因为现实中的变数太多，而变数是无法被预测的）
2、但是I、fact也是前人的智慧结晶，如果只是一味的不相信，那么社会怎么发展，科技怎么进步？
   II、目前没有任何一个information是可以accurate描述一个事物的，都只是在不断接近而已，也就是说是一个相对的（经典力学-量子理论-爱因斯坦怀疑量子理论-被现代实验推翻以证明量子理论更能准确描述）
3、建议：努力学习基础知识，扩大眼界和研究领域，与他人交流，才能通过经验更好地分辨什么才是正确的。
自己临时思考的，欢迎抨击补充。

已有 1 人评分	寄托币	声望	收起理由
okqishi	+ 5	+ 3	thx~

总评分: 寄托币 + 5 声望 + 3 查看全部投币

使用道具举报

niuniua
UID: 3274179

寄托新兵

Rank: 2

声望: 14
寄托币: 152
注册时间: 2012-3-16
精华: 0
帖子: 18

板凳

发表于 2012-6-7 12:39:03 |只看该作者

2# rippersean

谢谢！今天修改了一下，请再看看~

87) Claim: Any piece of information referred to as a fact should be mistrusted, since it may well be proven false in the future.
Reason: Much of the information that people assume is factual actually turns out to be inaccurate.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.

关键词列的如下，不知道准不准，提纲是4点，如下
key:any fact mistrusted, may false . much fact inaccurate
1.we should mistrust as the writer said
2.many theories are due to certain reasons and circumstances flase.
3.most cases ,our purpose is to verify the fact
4.technical development need this kind of spirit

Along with human society's progress,people's critical thinking keeps growing uninterruptly that they are able to mistrust the information refered to as a fact since much turns out to be inaccurate.As far as I'm concerned ,this phenomenon is exhilarating .This thinking is seriously needed for human's progess.Therefore, in my point of view,I am on the side of the claim that we should mistrust information which we refered to as a fact,but it's not  because it may be inaccurate, contrarily,our purpose is to certify it is veridical.

Admittedly,over the long history of human's civilization ,lots of examples expressed that these so-called facts were demonstrated as the truth at first,but proven false later.This may due to the certain circumstances and history limitation,then the fact cannot be penetratinigly studied.When the Geocentric Theory is firstly put forward,everyone regards it an indisputable fact exept Copernicus.Copernicus ,a famous astronomer,didn't believe in this recognized fact and proposed that our earth is just a normal planet in the cosmos rather than the center of it,it travels around the sun,after years of observation.This great found broke the steretype which has bound people'mind for many years and help people recognize the real world and true fact.Through this example ,we can see the mistrustion's useful power.

However ,in most cases ,we mistrust the fact not because it may be inaccurate,but want to certify it veridical.Many theories ,or facts are limited to the time when they are born  that they have no chance to be fully justified.We modern people can now help verify the accuracy to make them more convincing with the help of modern technology.Such as the old fact that the earth is round,we now can use the satillite to take photoes of the earth,or even we can fly to the space and have a look  ourselves.Then this fact will be more convincing,and we can use photoes to calculate the accurate size as well.In this way,we make a fact more understandable and accurate due to mistrust about facts.

In addition, human civilization's progress need this spirit of mistrust.Mistrust urges people  to find a more appropriate way to explain the existed theory or
fact,along with this process is the development of our technology.In the process of justifying a fact ,we may come across a new conclusion occasionally. Such as people found the new contents in  the process of proving the earth is round.All this lead to a significant development of human society,and it all attributes to mistrust about the existed fact.

To sum up,whatever the fact is ,mistrust should be encouraged that we donnot know what may be brought forward by it.Once a mistrust is proposed,we need to concentrate on it and devote enough power into it since the way to a clearly verified conclusion is not easy.In a word, we can mistrust facts,but we should pay much energy to justify it as well.

使用道具举报