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发表于 2012-8-11 12:59:41 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

Issue：社会应该加强对年轻人的合作意识培养而不是竞争意识：

The opinion held on this topic is society should  instill the young people with  sense of cooperation but not competition in order to let them to be good leaders in the future. Although it really make sense in some aspects, for cooperation is an important quality for leaders, it can be kind of loss for young people do not be taught to be competitive.
The suggestion made in the topic is kind of correct, since cooperation is very important in not only usual lives but business, goverment and other fields. Cooperation is a skill between people to be kind and helpful to each other, and it can inspire benefits from a whole which are more than each individual has. For example cooperation can focus lots of energies, money and many other aspects of benefits, and in a word cooperation can make things easier to do. Especially in some emergencies, cooperation can help to save people's lives, such as catastrophes like earthquake.
However, the benefits of cooperation do not make the idea in the topic such reasonable, and there are still some disadvantages if the society do so. On the one hand, it may not be realistic fot the society to instill only sense of cooperation but not competition to the young people. The diversity of messages and informations makes it difficult to prevented sense of competition from those young people,  such as television, computer, and even daily life. We can not deny that life is full of competitions, from children's social expriences to wars between countries. How can young people do not have sense of that? In their ages, their developments in emotion and intelligence are faster than any people, which means they are sensitive to what happened around them. So it is not realistic for society to do such an impossible work.
Even if the society can do so, it may not have a good results. We have discussed the importance of cooperation above, but how about the importance of competition
? Can any one deny that? I suppose the answer must be no. Competition  is also a necessary sense of leaders, for it can bring us the hope to improve ourselves and excess others. For a leader, no matter in government , industry or other fields, the responsibilities of him or her may not be only cooperate with others, but more important, can compete with others and get good results, have your country or company get good benefits and big profits. If you can not compete over others, you will lose your people,  the land and  money, even lives of people. Many good leaders in this society know how to led their group to improve, for example, Steven Jobs, who was the leader of Apple, made the whole world crazy about their products. And so does Bill Gates, the leader of Microsoft.
In this society, the abilities leaders should have are not only cooperations, but also competition, and leaders should have good control of them too. You must have a good balance of both senses, so that you can lead your government, industry or others to a bright future. And our society should have a balance of both to inspire our young people. And believe that, they will give us a big surprise!