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  题目是people attend college or university for many different reasons.Why do you think people attend college or university?
Why do people attend college or university? Many people may considerate this question. Different people have various answers. For earning money, for developing their social status or for attaining developed knowledge, what they truly need?
  After stating that everyone's opinion can be different about this, for me honesty, in other words, attending college or university are in order to their career preparation.
  To my mind, I would wish that first of all, most people who study hard are eager to improve their life or make their life become richer to change their life. So they do need career. Furthermore, when someone wants to have a achieve career, they
  need to high education of professional knowledge.
  Later on if they want to acquire more resource, communicating with others who have walk on the same way is a significant thing. In that case, only attending college or university can they contact with each other. That is an opportunity to make them express their hoping and experiment.
  How can people develop their view for their dream. Most peole only can do it through college or university studying. Thus most people have a large motivate to join in college or university learning.
  Although some people are in order to increased knowledge or new experience, university and college only can accept a small group of them. Therefore I think people attend college or university to career preparation.
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