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ecustdreamer 发表于 2012-11-16 19:03
11.16 第一次写issue，写得烂不要介意，还望大家多多交流

劉門第 发表于 2012-11-16 20:16
没关系啦，写了就好。我给你看看哈，下次上传附件加上自己的名字，免得我修改文件名~

ecustdreamer 发表于 2012-11-16 21:03
谢啦，我给你的A看好了，第一篇类型没写过，不知道怎么改，不要介意啊

It seems that the successively advance of technology lead our life more complex. Those who agree this opinion would provide the evidence as a fortress supporting the statement, for example, people in ancient would go through a more simple and relaxed life which the citizen under unimagined pressure in current life.

It seems that the progressive technological advancement has made our lives increasingly complex. Those who agree with (are in favor of) this opinion (contention/argument/statement/viewpoint) would support this statement by pointing out that ancient people adopted a simpler and more relaxed lifestyle whereas people in modern world are suffering the unprecedented pressure that is inconceivable to our predecessors.

Dr_JohnDoe 发表于 2012-11-16 21:58
LZ，虽然不太好意思吐槽，但是貌似我放眼望去全是语法错误哇......比如说前几句：

ecustdreamer 发表于 2012-11-16 22:16
首先，谢谢学长的吐槽，这个问题很致命。其实，我也注意到了这方面的问题，初高中英语就没好好学，导致 ...

Dr_JohnDoe 发表于 2012-11-16 23:42
......你这是诅咒我要二战吗，我现在还是零战阶段

ecustdreamer 发表于 2012-11-16 23:56
。。。我错了，我以为你过几天的就是二战呢。。。那就祝你一次高分通过吧。话说我还有一个月，现在越来 ...

Dr_JohnDoe 发表于 2012-11-17 00:05
相比Verbal，AW更难短期提高。你现在提纲都列好了没有？一个月时间是很紧的，要顾全大局。写好单独几道题 ...

ecustdreamer 发表于 2012-11-17 00:07
我现在还没列啊，之前一直给阅读套住了。。真心无语，你觉得我现在先花几天把提纲都列好，再写全文吗？

ecustdreamer 发表于 2012-11-17 00:07
我现在还没列啊，之前一直给阅读套住了。。真心无语，你觉得我现在先花几天把提纲都列好，再写全文吗？ ...

Dr_JohnDoe 发表于 2012-11-17 00:16
阅读也是我的瓶颈，这点我给不出什么建议，就是多练

填空也不容小视，三空题的难度和阅读是差不多的。 ...