上次托福作文是24,其中独立写作是fair,评语是这样的,有没有高手来解释下
You expressed ideas with reasons, examples, and details, but your response indicated weaknesses such as
you may not provide enough specific support and development for your main points;
your ideas may be difficult to follow because of how you organize your essay or because of the language you use to connect your ideas; and/or
grammatical mistakes or vague/incorrect uses of words may make the writing difficult to understand.
贴一下我的,跟楼主情况一样,综合fair,总分24
You responded to the task, relating the lecture to the reading, but your response indicates weaknesses such as
an important idea or ideas may be missing, unclear, or inaccurate;
there may be unclarity in how the lecture and the reading passage are related; and/or
grammatical mistakes or vague/incorrect uses of words may make the writing difficult to understand.