[优秀习作] issue157 行为类，第一次限时，没想到写这么烂，大家来打击我吧！ [复制链接]

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发表于 2004-8-7 10:00:36 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

第一次限时
这篇对我来说是新题，以前没写过提纲，写BODY用了近30分钟，而且有好多内容还没写，无奈再不写开头结尾没有时间了，只好草草收尾，写的很烂。
感觉是平时一些好的想法和表达在限时的紧张情况下想不出来，而且时间紧迫，问题考虑的也不够深，得出两点结论：
1.把大部分的题目都写一遍提纲是很重要的，可以节省考试时布置文章结构的时间
2.限时应该多练，提早练，熟悉限时情况下的感觉。

总之这次的限时失败，我会继续努力

另外，一些拼写和语法错误已经改正。大家都来打击我一下吧！

Issue157  第1篇让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户    共用时间：45分3秒    557 words
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There is no such thing as purely objective observation. All observation is subjective; it is always guided by the observer's expectations or desires.
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Are all the observations subjective, as the speaker asserts? I concede that in some situations and circumstances it is so, yet others are not.  We have to see both sides of the coin when judging an observation to be subjective or objective; otherwise, our observation of observations would be subjective.

Generally speaking, almost all the observations have something to do with the values, ideas, and thoughts of the observer, for it is essential nature of human beings to analysis and mediate what he or she observes in his or her own way of thinking. As a matter of fact, the behavior of observing is oriented by our spiritual and psychological forces which would bring the outcome of observation subjective colors. It accounts for why the observations of the same incidence vary from individual to individual.  When we behold a car accident, for instance, different people have different views; some one will have his own idea about who is responsible for the accident, yet view of others would contradict his judgment; some will feel worry and sympathetic about the one injured in the accident, while some consider only the brands and prices of the cars destroyed.  All these views are based on the distinctive observations of everyone.  The evidence as well as other similar cases in our everyday life demonstrates that no matter we acknowledge or not, subjective factors such as our desires, values, ideas, expectations and so forth play significant roles in our observation and thereby affect our observation to be more or less subjective.

Aside from it, in the realms of arts including literature, painting, music and the like, it is necessary and justifiable for the observer to employ their subjective ideas and desires unrestrainly into the observation of the world and their works as well.  Art serve to reveal the inner impulses and spirits of the artists.  According to common sense and our everyday experience, almost all the artistic works express the subjective ideas of the artists.  Only by using subjective view to observe the mundane world and then interpret observations into works could the essential nature and aim of art and the imagination and inspirations of artists be achieved and preserved.

Under the circumstances I discussed above, I believe that, no purely objective observations exist.  Although I agree that subjective factors contribute greatly to our observation and make it subjective, there are other situations we should take into consideration.

In the world of science, the world built on the foundation of objective, accurate, and complicated observations and researches, the observations have much less to do with subjective.  It is the spirit and essence of science require the observer in any fields of this realm to be objective.  Moreover, the advanced technologies and sophisticated schedules which scientific observers use in the researches help them to perform the objective observation.  As the case of research in human genome, nearly every step was planed before hand, and industrial methods and machines were borrowed into the research, thus the probability of the scientists who are involved in and observe the research to be subjective is eliminated.

In the final analysis, whether the observation is objective or subjective rely largely on the situation of the observers and the circumstances of the object being observed.  Therefore, no imprudent conclusions should be made before careful consideration of all the conditions.

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