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发表于 2005-8-23 14:28:14 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

Issue 131
"The arts (painting, music, literature, etc.) reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society."

Outline:
Position: agree with reservation
1.the arts function as the way of expression
2.didactic function
3.reveal

The speaker maintains the function of the arts is reflecting the otherwise hidden ideas and impetus of a society. I tend to agree with reservation. As far as I concern, this is one of the function of the arts but not all, therefore to better address the issue, we'd better consider the comparatively thorough functions of the arts.

To begin with, the primary function of the arts, in my view, is to express. Those frescos painted on the wall of caves indicate that people in prehistorical times have use painting as the way to express their happiness and sorrows, ambitions and dreadfulness. Similarly, this is far more evident in contemporary society. Modern arts have more incarnations: painting, music, literature, and film, drama, and so on so forth. They offer artists the best media to express their unique passions and perspectives. For example, painter such as Picasso, Van Gogh and Dali, their either abstract, surrealistic images or splash, vivid contrast between colors serve well to express their deepest inner feelings and their vision of the world. In short, from the primitive time to modern society, the arts serve as tools for people to express their feelings.

Further, another function of the arts is enlightening: they present us with perceptives of the universe, in turn to teach us. Consider two different types arts—literature and film. Shakespeare's Macbeth brought inordinate ambition into focus that instructs us to think in depth; Spielberg’s Schindler’s list calls our attention to the relationship between moral criteria and obedience of laws. In spite of the difference of their forms, both genres induct us to think for ourselves—while we see these characters in plays, we see the representatives of our activities, characteristics, moral dilemma and so on; when we watch the plots, we see our fates and real lives—all of which upset our thoughts pursuing the meaning of moral, humanity and so forth.

Finally, as the speaker says, the arts reveal the otherwise ideas and impulse of a society. Examples can be seen in diverse art forms. For instance, in the music realm, the black music which is now popular throughout the world, it prototype is those song that only be sang among the 19th century's black slaves. In those prior types of songs indicate the willingness of anti-slavery—a prohibited social impetus during that time. It is true in the painting realm as well. Taking Picasso as an illustration again. One of the famous Picasso's pictures the Dove was drawn in 1930s in which period was Spanish Civil War. In this distinguished picture, Picasso use his brush as his weapon fight for the war. Therefore his artistic work represents the enthusiasm of anti-war of many people who suffered the war at his time.

To sum up, I agree with the speaker that the arts do mirror the otherwise hidden spirits and impetus of a society. While it is part-and-parcel of the functions of the arts, the arts provide broader meanings aside from reflection—they offer the expressionism, didacticism as well as echo.

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发表于 2005-8-23 18:58:21 |只看该作者

语言用词都很好，也没什么要改的，值得学习，例子很多，都能很好的证明你的分论点，但是总得来说我觉得是不是跑题了？
这片文章是一个事实性的论述题，具体就是让我们论述The arts (painting, music, literature, etc.)有没有 reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society，所以论述的重点应该放在the art reveal the ideas，而不应该放在art 对于社会的作用上，当然其他作用可以提，但不应该是论述重点
个人意见，我也觉得这种事实论述的题目很头疼，思路打不开，也许是我地思路太窄而你并没有跑

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板凳

发表于 2005-8-23 19:02:44 |只看该作者

思路有点那个，语言没的说。感觉你的文章只有一个论点，就是arts have many functions
没有critical thinking

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地板

发表于 2005-8-24 21:29:51 |只看该作者

我的理解：
1，艺术的首要目的是表达
2，艺术可以启发
3，同意作者观点
你的内容我觉得没有跑题，前提是你能够很好的用你的内容去表达你的观点，但是你并没有论述清楚。你应该把段与段之间的联系说清楚，你只是把艺术的三个作用摆在那里，单看那个段都写的不错，语言也很流畅，但是论述的没有力量。你可以考虑把b3作为首段的让步在说艺术的其他作用也许效果更好一些。
拍的狠了些，有问题再讨论哈~

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发表于 2005-8-24 21:46:16 |只看该作者

to mreal

谢谢，谢谢，谢谢

你理解的是对的，我也觉得有这个问题，不过不知怎么能更好的联系，我觉得我这个有点像是在打外围，因为写不出来，所以股左右言它，所以就有些不不连贯。

我觉得你的建议挺好的，放到前面去，感觉至少先跟题目联系了一下，然后在扯（汗，没办法了，现在时间紧迫，大动来不及了）

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发表于 2005-8-24 21:51:37 |只看该作者

想向大家求助，多谢了

我现在的状况，还是觉得写不出来，一段话总是不丰满，一个观点、例子一两句，在总结一句就写不出来了，干巴巴的
这种情况平时就有，以紧张就更是大脑空白，像今天早上知道无法延期了，心里很着急，一上午只挤出一篇文章--还是在查资料的情况下，总觉得没例子举，又不能举什么牛顿、爱因斯坦，怎么办呢，9月5号就考了，还有一个半星期，时间根本不允许我查很多资料了阿
大家帮帮忙，谢谢了，我真的是不知道该怎么办了

虽然说出来不好意思，也会让大家觉得反感，但是我今天真的急得哭，大家帮我出出主意吧，谢谢了

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