[i习作temp] Issue74..Fantasy同盟站友哈 [复制链接]

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发表于 2005-9-4 06:18:56 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

Issue74
"The most effective way to communicate an idea or value to large groups of people is through the use of images, not language."
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The speaker asserts the most effective way to communicate to a large group of people is to use images, not language. I have the same opinion with speaker that images are quite important and necessary when facing so many people, but what I think the best way to show an idea or value is to use both languages and images.

I agree with the speakers that images are essential for people to show his ideas to others, especially to a large group of people, such as having a client intercourse, a personal presentation or seminar and so on. Using images are much easier for people to understand an idea, when large groups of people are addressed, even those people who come from different countries and have different languages. Language cannot make everyone know what the speaker is saying, while images can be effectively to average. Images are intuitionistic, people could see what the speaker’s idea or value is, contract to language, it is more directly to catch people’s attention rather than those abstracted languages.

However, language is also important when showing one’s idea or value. Suppose that the large group of people are all blinded or short-sighted, they could not see the images and get any information from images, thus language is effected as an irreplaceable aspect. Also, if we meet some complicate problems like design drawing that images could not give us a clear explanation, language is used to illustrate and complement to make the explanation more perfect. Viewing around the world, we can easily found that language has been used in mostly all of the aspects in our daily life: shopping, traveling, entertainment, etc. Language is a mirror of mankind’s spirit world and set up a bridge between each other. There’s a saying that words have a magical power, they can bring either the greatest happiness or deepest despair; can transfer knowledge from teacher to students.

Finally, to have a balanced decision, the most effective way to communicate an idea to large group of people is using both language and images. While images intuitionally showing what is the idea or value, language is making explanations and complementarily. So the audiences could have a clearer, comprehensive understanding of the speaker’s idea and value. It can easily comprehend that television is more preference than radio or silent movie. Either use images or language could not clearly describe the idea or value to the large group of people, and communicate to them.

In sum, images and language are like the two hands of human beings that both of them are essential and neither of them could be missed, as one was communicate his ideas or values to large groups of people.

还是没有限制时间来写, 字数也额少: 450个
砖头大家砸哈......对了,ISSUE17 看了之后实在是没思路,一点感觉都没有的,高手赐教哈! :)

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发表于 2005-9-4 08:59:43 |只看该作者

请将标题按规定格式改写一下！详细格式请参考发贴说明，社区上有介绍，也可参考其他社员的例子！先帮你顶一下！:)

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发表于 2005-9-5 15:27:37 |只看该作者

哦,知道了哈, 没人拍拍? 自己先顶下,嘿嘿~~~

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发表于 2005-9-5 17:05:34 |只看该作者

Issue74..Fantasy同盟站友哈

Issue74
"The most effective way to communicate an idea or value to large groups of people is through the use of images, not language."
正文:
The speaker asserts the most effective way to communicate to a large group of people is to use images, not language. I have the same opinion with speaker that images are quite important and necessary when facing so many people, but what I think the best way to show an idea or value is to use both languages and images.

I agree with the speakers that images are essential for people to show his（可能用their更加合适）ideas to others, especially to a large group of people, such as having a client intercourse,(这个词是不是恰当) a personal presentation or seminar and so on. Using images are much easier for people to understand an idea, when large groups of people are addressed, even those people who come from different countries and have different languages. Language cannot make everyone know what the speaker is saying, while images can be effectively to average.（这个词好） Images are intuitionistic,（两个句子不能用逗号直接连接） people could see what the speaker’s idea or value is, contract to language, it is more directly to catch people’s attention rather than those abstracted languages.（最后几句话比较散）

However, language is also important when showing one’s idea or value. Suppose that the large group of people are all blinded or short-sighted, they could not see the images and get any information from images, thus language is effected as an irreplaceable aspect. Also, if we meet some complicate problems like design drawing that images could not give us a clear explanation, language is used to illustrate and complement to make the explanation more perfect. Viewing around the world, we can easily found that language has been used in mostly all of the aspects in our daily life: shopping, traveling, entertainment, etc. Language is a mirror of mankind’s spirit world and set up a bridge between each other.（这句话好） There’s a saying that words have a magical power, they can bring either the greatest happiness or deepest despair; can transfer knowledge from teacher to students.

Finally, to have a balanced decision, the most effective way to communicate an idea to large group of people is using both language and images. While images intuitionally showing what is the idea or value, language is making explanations and complementarily.( complementarity） So the audiences could have a clearer, comprehensive understanding of the speaker’s idea and value. It can easily comprehend that television is more preference than radio or silent movie. Either use images or language could not clearly describe the idea or value to the large group of people, and communicate to them.

In sum, images and language are like the two hands of human beings that both of them are essential and neither of them could be missed, as one was communicate his ideas or values to large groups of people.
语法错误比较多，有时为了追求句子的复杂性把自己搞昏了，加油

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