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TOPIC: ISSUE159 - "The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds."
WORDS: 432          TIME: 0:45:00          DATE: 2007-4-1

Will the human mind always be superior to machines? The speaker claims so, for the reason that machines are only tools of human minds. I concede that in the fields such as art, logic, analysis human mind is superior to machines now. However, in the fields which have lots to do with data process, deal it with machines is much more convenient and easier.(让步在某些领域人脑厉害  但是在另某些领域人脑就没有机器有优势了)
To begin with, we human beings are full with passion and inspiration, which is the essential element that needsto create an artwork. Retrospect to the shining and splendid works of the great artists in history, all of them is the representation of the brilliant passion and inspiration of human mind. For example, 'The Thinker' which sculpted by Rodin, represents his cherish and sympathize to human beings and his desire to fall into 'absolutely' meditation vividly. And this splendid artwork has impacted our spirits for hundreds of years by now. A machine, however, at least in nowadays and the future that predictable（the predictable future）, can never achieve such an excellent work. 在艺术方面，极其不如人脑，如Rodin  The Thinker
In addition, when it comes to the logical and analyze region, human mind is also irreplaceable. Machines can only act in the way which is scheduled before for the reason that they can not analyze the situation around them and decide what to do themselves. Every steps of the machines action is strictly scheduled by scientists. Although nowadays machines has got the ability by which it can handle more and more complex tasks, for example, explore the Mars, separate products automatically, and help people do lots of other things, it is still under the control of human mind, and it is still designed and programmed by human beings.

Nevertheless, machines has its (have their)own advantages, especially in the fields which required a large amount of computation. For example, data process, video decode, virtual simulation and so force. Moreover, when was proper designed and programmed, it can judge some limited logical questions, and that is the meaning of "artificial intelligence". For example, we can use machines to analyze the trend of weather, we can use machines to simulate the result of a phenomenon, and even we can play chess with a machine. In short, machines assist us in a lot of aspects.

In the final analysis, in some particular regions, machines have lots of advantages and at least are superior to human mind in one aspect. Nevertheless, it ultimately yields to the passion and inspiration of human beings for the reason that it was designed and programmed by scientist after all, and it was fully under the control of human beings.

整篇文章思路清晰，但感觉缺少的是例证与论点的衔接