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发表于 2007-4-2 21:11:49 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

TOPIC: ISSUE151 - "High-speed electronic communications media, such as electronic mail and television, tend to prevent meaningful and thoughtful communication."
WORDS: 490       TIME: 1:15:00       DATE: 2007-4-2
Do high-speed electronic communication ,especially E-mail and cellphones,will tend to prohibite traditional communication,such as verbal conversation?The speaker believes so,I tend to fundamentally agree with that.with certain eminent advantages,which the traditional communication inherently haven't,the high-speed electronic communication would thwart the development of traditional communication and utmately gradually replace for  that.
To begin with,the modern accelerating development of science and technology pave the way for utilizing the high-speed electronic communications,all of which would serve to facilitate the our communication .understandably,it's fair for populace to eschew certain obsolete traditional communication in favor of modern high-speed electronic one,since the traditional mean of communication is pale in comparison to that of modern one when it comes to aspect of its effectiveness.today accessing to the internet is becoming more readily available and convenient than ever before,thus it allow us to communicate with whoever we hope for-by way of E-mail,instant online comunicater,or cellphone.the modern communication serve as a effective tools for us to transmit messages within a petty time by internet-based E-mail system,to chat with anyone we intended at any time,in spite of  he or she live in any place of our global village,to approach to any cellphone user as long as people do know what its actual number is.In short,the modern electronic communication would turn out to be a prevailing means of communication is in large measure depends on it's by nature attribute which traditional one inherently donnot embrace.
In addition,the development of modern electronic communication is predicted on the application of today's ever-changing information technology,which by itself in turn suggest that the electronic communication might be more cost-effective than tradition one.for instance,internet-based long-distance education,international conference,joint medical program would aptly illustrates that.By comparaing with the traditional communication,which demands time and money to be accomplished,few would disagree that electronic communication would be a more resonable and economical means of communication.Based on the above feature,it's not hard pressed to conclude that the utilization of electronic communication would be taken priority over traditional one by populace.
Those who opposed to the speaker's position might argue that electronic communication at the expense of traditional communication would have a chilling effect which alienate family,friends,or workers from each other,however,it's no doubt that electronic communication is conducive to create a more convenient,effective and economical conditions,so thatwould significantly enhance the possiblity and quantity of our communication,even if i concede that conduct a verbal conversation face to face is still play a pivotal role in communicating among people during our daily lives.Accordingly,on balance it's tempting for us to realize that not only the traditional communication but also the electronic communication would together make the most of understanding between each other.
In sum,while traditional means of communication still sever as a main means of communication today,yet,due to the more greater superiority of electronic communication purposed above,therefore,it's not enough reason not to believe that considerable proportion of traditional communication would give way to high-speed electronic communication-like interview,conference,education,and so forth.

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