[活动] ★决胜iBT★小组第二周第一次作业 by gyyx [复制链接]

To begin with, it is more efficient with a teacher when you study in a new filed. Everyone may experience this stage, and if with a teacher, who could be a guide to this unfamiliar tour. Through this, we could save our time as well as energy to learn well. Numerous examples could be picked up from ourselves as we are all good examples that going to school at an early age, and are still studying in a university with teachers. If without a teacher, we may still exploit how to study, or what should to study first, or whether we could study many subjects at the same time. They offer us the method of study and the overall knowledge about a subject, which would be beneficial for your future study.

Admittedly, sometimes when you are not in the first stage of study, you may be more likely to do self-study, in which you could control your own step, and fulfill your own own. Thinking independently may be of use for you. However, as it is often the case, you still confront with difficulties in your study, and some of them you could not figure out with your own ability. Now you need someone to consult or to inspire you through discussion. The best person for this is a teacher, since he/she may be expert in this field, or she/he may also run into the same questions in their past study. They know what they should do is not to tell you how to do but to inspire you and do some help for you to exploit your own way to solve the problems. With their help, you could go further in the study, and not to take the risk of giving up if you could not deal with the problems all by yourself.

In addition, sometimes we see a teacher like a friend, from who we always could learn something, especially some tips of life. My English teacher in high school is an upright man. The time spending with him lead me understand of the honesty, so important concepts even in today's life.

To begin with, it is more efficient with a teacher when you study in a new filed. Everyone may experience this stage, and if with a teacher, who could be a guide to this unfamiliar tour. Through this, we could save our time as well as energy to learn well. Numerous examples could be picked up from ourselves as we are all good examples that going to school at an early age（感觉表达有问题）, and are still studying in a university with teachers. If without a teacher, we may still exploit how to study, or what should to study first, or whether we could study many subjects at the same time. They offer us the method of study and the overall knowledge about a subject, which would be beneficial for your future study.

Admittedly, sometimes when you are not in the first stage of study, you may be more likely to do self-study, in which you could control your own step, and fulfill your own own（goal吧？）. Thinking independently may be of use for you. However, as it is often the case, you still confront with difficulties in your study, and some of them you could not figure out with your own ability. Now you need someone to consult or to inspire you through discussion. The best person for this is a teacher, since he/she may be expert in this field, or she/he may also run into the same questions in their past study. They know what they should do is not to tell you how to do but to inspire you and do some help for you to exploit your own way to solve the problems. With their help, you could go further in the study, and not to take the risk of giving up if you could not deal with the problems all by yourself.

In addition, sometimes we see a teacher like a friend, from who（whom） we always could learn something, especially some tips of life. My English teacher in high school is an upright man. The time spending with him lead(leads or led) me understand of (去掉of)the honesty, so important concepts even in today's life.

Being students（→as a student 后面主语可是I,要一致.而且being结构有点awkward,） for nearly 20 years, I get a truth, that is, studying with a teacher is much better, which could not only bring about (bring about=cause,用在这里不太合适 ) you as a guide to knowledge, but also as a tutor to help and inspire you in the future (只有teacher才能做guide和tutor,但是你先行词用的是which. 这个句子最好能重新写.).

To begin with, it is more efficient with a teacher when you study in a new filed (field). Everyone may experience this stage, and if with a teacher, who could be a guide to this unfamiliar tour.（:confused: 这里是不是没有说完? ）Through this (指代不明), we could save our time as well as energy to learn well (我感觉这个句子和之前的句子是一起的… 最好两个句子合并重新写).Numerous examples could be picked up from ourselves as we are all good examples that going (→who go)toschool at an early age,(delete this comma) and are still studying in a university with teachers. If without a teacher, we may still exploit (are probably still exploring) how to study, or what should to study first (杂糅,要么是what we should study first,要么是what to study first), or whether we could study many subjects at the same time. They (:confused: who is this they?) offer us the method of study and the overall knowledge about a subject, which would be beneficial for your(→our, tone要一致) future study.

Admittedly, sometimes when you are not in the first stage of study, you may be more likely to do self-study, in which you could control your own step, and fulfill your own own (:confused: own what?). Thinking independently may be of use (awkward, change it.)for you. However, as it is often the case, you still confront with(→are confronted with) difficulties in your study, and some of them you could not figure out with your own ability. Now you need someone to consult or to inspire(→be inspired,你是被inspire的人,) you through discussion. The best person for this is a teacher, since he/she may be expert in this field, or she/he may also run into the same questions in their past study. They know what they should do is not to tell you how to do but to inspire you and do some help for you to exploit(change it) your own way to solve the problems. With their help, you could go further in the study, and not to take  (and 前后应该是并列的) the risk of giving up if you could not deal with the problems all by yourself (:o 还是tone的问题.本来上个段子里是we,到了这里整个都变成you了:rolleyes: ).

In addition, sometimes we see a teacher like(→as) a friend, from who(→whom) we always could learn something, especially some tips of life. My English teacher in high school is an upright man. The time spending (→spent）with him lead (→leads) me (^ to) understand of the honesty (名词后才能+of),so important concepts (→a concept) even in today's life.