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Bypublishing a wide variety of materials such as politics, business, society,entertainment and sports, Newspapers and magazines may provide a comprehensivepicture of a specific country, especially the foreign country which cannot beaccessed frequently. Access 多做名词 动词表访问 可以用accessible 来表示 Thus, I basically 这个词用的真好 agree with the assertion theissue gives, however, it seems too extreme by stating that no other approacheswould outweigh the newspapers and magazines.
First of all, the newspapers and magazines not only issue stories onmultiple domains, but also convey views and knowledge insightfully.广度和深度两个角度表达 真好 The great extent of diversitywill benefit on drawing the overall sketch, and meanwhile, the profoundinvestigation will contribute to refining each designated line on the sketch.As a result, a foreign country will be presented delicately in all dimensions.Let’s bring our discussion here to a more practical context.亮点 I remember clearly how thenewspapers and magazines helped me studying the Danish human resourceenvironment. The general newspapers, which publish daily, cover various fields,and usually indicate public interest and common sense, provided 我感觉是providing a background ofpolitics, economy, education, job market, and the distinguish 是distinguished feature welfaresystem. The specialized magazines gave the deep dive of impact of the welfaresystem supplemented with data chart. The newspapers and magazines are reallythe critical resources to figure out the truth.
Although newspapers and magazines demonstrated the significance, severalfactors need to be taken care of cautiously with comprehensive consideration. Take care of 是否和cautiously重复呢On one hand, the stories reportedon the newspapers and magazines may be selected to some particular intent,which is to say not all the truths will be issued to the public. What’s worse,some truths may be distorted in favor of a small group of people. On the otherhand, with the advent of multi-media and Internet technology, somedisadvantages of the traditional plane-media, such as inability to play videoand audio, are overcome. The web site equipped with multi-media technology andwell prepared content would be a good alternative to the traditional newspapersand magazines. Moreover, the web site could convey the video and audio whichmight help people well understand the foreign country and the traditional mediacannot present. 此段自然过渡陈述观点 真好
In a final analysis, newspapers and magazinesare recommendable resources for foreign country studying. But people needthoroughly consider the barriers and shortcomings of them.
commented by minami
同学你用了很多我想不到的单词短语 文章逻辑也自然顺畅 我水平有限 或许有些改的也不正确 只是想问是如何才能做出如此好的作文
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