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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The friends that you can have fun with is (Either 'the friend..is', or 'the friends..are', but not 'the friends..is'.) more important than the friend that you can.(The question is incomplete.)
There is no doubt that our friends around us have made up an essential part of our lives. We can gain joys by hanging out with them and get the precious help from them as well. However, a real friend, as far as I am concerned, should be someone who is able to help me out when I need assistance, especially when I am in some serious trouble, anxiously seeking for solutions or help. Because that is what a real friend means to me (This is headed by 'because', and is a dependent clause, and cannot be 'and'-ed with an independent clause. 'and' can only join two similar structures.) and its importance obviously overweights a friends who can just have fun together.
As long as we are living in this world dealing with a variety of problems, interacting with different people, we would definitely encounter troubles. Some of the troubles could be handled pretty well at the cost of hard work and time, however, we have to admit that not all of the troubles could be handled all by ourselves, and it is virtually a fact that everyone, no matter what his social status is, how wealthy he is or even how brilliant he is, has to seek help from others in order to get through some rainy days. Under such circumstances, the true value and significance of a friend shows. If you are fortunate enough to have a friend who can point out the right direction for your when you get lost, who can generously lend you some money when you are short in cash but have an surgery to do (The first time I read this I thought it is 'you' who are performing the surgery. But of course I think you meant 'you are scheduled for a surgery', not 'have a surgery to do'. That is, 'you' should be at the receiving end of the surgery, not the originating end..), wouldn't you feel so thankful and realize that this friend is truly a treasure in your life?
Besides, we can obtain precious experiences and guidances from our friends. Basically, the more friends we have, the more benefits we could get from those experiences. Since it is an extremely complicated world outside, one cannot possibly get to know all the details about everything, therefore it is critical that we get that valuable information from our friends and of course it is bidirectional. In this way, a considerable amount of time and efforts can be saved and can be used to simplify the problems we are dealing with. Every time I start doing something I am unfamiliar with, the first thing to do is not beginning to work immediately. Instead, normally I would seek possible suggestions from my friends around me and they probably would provide some conductive advices based on their understanding or experiences. Even some of friends may not have much experiences (Either 'much experience' or 'many experiences', but not 'much experiences'. Please be aware of your use of singular versus plural forms.) in that areas (Again.), they can still offer me some interesting and inspiring ideas from time to time. With all those contributions from my friends, naturally, there would be fewer opportunities for me to waste time on wrong ways, thereby increasing the possibility of success.
Admittedly, as mentioned before, having fun with friends is also indispensable. People need social activities with their friends as much as we need air and water and I believe that the pleasure which comes from the interactions with friends is irreplaceable. But, in fact, a real friend could be far more than someone we can only hang out with; instead, he could become a guide in our lives.
I believe a true friend is someone who is willing to stand out (to 'stand out' in English means 'to be conspicuous, easily seen, easily differentiated from others'. It does not mean the same thing as 站出来 in Chinese, which translates more likely to 'step up/out'.) when I get into trouble, to share his experiences and insightful thoughts with me, to give me encouragement and guidance when I am having difficulties finding the right ways. Therefore, it would mean a lot more to me than having a friend who can only have fun with me.
总结:
题目不完整所以基本没法对论述置评。。虽然从总体来看条理还是清晰的。语法上请特别注意单复的一致。
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