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以前从新东方老师那里要来的,内容蛮充实的。


综合写作攻略:
一、题型分析
1、要点分析
时间:在新托福写作考试的前二十分钟进行,虽然写作是新托福考试的最终部分,但万万不可掉以轻心,否则自毁长城,前功尽弃。
工具:新托福写作只有键盘输入一种选择,打字速度慢者吃亏不少。建议考生熟练操作键盘,提高打字速度并减少打字错误。
字数:有明确要求,150~225字。建议考生平常练习时利用word工具,计算文章字数,做到心中有数。
文体:正规书面文体。不可使用诸如“doesn’t”等非正规文体和口语词汇,可模仿阅读中的遣词造句。
题目:共分三个部分,阅读,听力,写作。


2、评分标准
5
A response at this level
Effectively addresses the task by conveying relevant information from the lecture; and accurately relates key information from the lecture to information in the reading; and
Is well organized and coherent; and
Contains appropriate grammar and vocabulary, with only occasional minor language errors.
文章切题,包含听力中的相关信息;将听力主要信息与阅读材料信息准确对应;段落组织有序,衔接紧密;用词确切,语法规范,有少量拼写错误
4
A response at this level
Generally conveys relevant information from the lecture, but may have minor omissions; and
Is generally good in relating information from the lecture to information in the reading, but may have minor inaccuracies or vagueness of some content or connections among ideas; and
Is generally well organized; and
Contains appropriate grammar and vocabulary, but may have noticeable minor language errors or occasional lack of clarity.
文章基本切题,基本包含了听力中的相关信息,但有少许遗漏;信息组织基本合理,但有少许不准确之处或某些内容或观点间的衔接不清晰;段落组织基本有序;用词确切,语法规范,有明显的拼写错误或偶尔表述不清。
3
A response at this level
Contains some relevant information from the lecture, but may omit one key point; or
Conveys some connections between the lecture and the reading, but some content or connections among ideas may be incomplete, inaccurate, or vague; or
Contains errors in grammar or usage that result in vagueness of some content or connections among ideas
包含了听力中的某些相关信息,但遗漏了一个要点;阐述了听力与阅读的某些联系,但某些内容或观点间的联系不完整,不准确或含糊不清;包含语法错误影响了某些内容或观点间联系的表达
2
A response at this level
Contains some relevant information from the lecture, but may have significant omissions or inaccuracies of key points; or
Omits or largely misrepresents the connections between the lecture and the reading; or
Contains language errors that obscure meaning of key ideas or connections among ideas.
  包含听力材料中的某些相关信息,但有重大遗漏或要点表述错误;遗漏或嵌解了听力与材料间的联系;语法错误严重影响内容表达
1
A response at this level
Contains little or no relevant content from the lecture; or
Fails to connect points from the lecture and reading; or
Contains language errors that greatly obscure meaning; or
Is too brief to allow evaluation of writing proficiency.
没有或有很少听力中的相关信息;没能将听力与阅读建立起联系;语法错误严重影响表达;篇幅太小影响评分
0
A response at this level
Only copies sentences from the reading; or
Is not related to the given topic; or
Is written in a language other than English; or
Is blank.
仅从阅读材料中抄袭句子;与主题无关;用除英语外的其它语言写作;空白卷
通过对评分标准进行分析,我们知道了ETS对于一篇好的综合写作作文的要求:
细节缺一不可 (example, reason, detail)
不能跑题(unity
结构紧凑 organization
段落过渡流畅 (coherent)
用词多样化,丰富 (variety)

3、如何准备
1 良好的语法知识
2 充足的词汇量
3 基本的文体知识
4 良好的阅读习惯
5 良好的听力水平
6 高超的语言衔接手段
7 多种表达方法综合运用的能力
8 高超的记笔记能力

在平时备考过程中要注意:
1. 强化语法知识和学术论文写作的文体格式;掌握常用时态,语态,语气和句式,熟练运用语法知识写出通顺的句子。
2. 千方百计强化词汇,多读学术性文章,熟悉写作格式和常用语言表达,熟悉英文写作思路。
3. 多听学术性强的英语讲座,熟悉英语口头表达方式,听懂大意,总结归纳。
4. 熟悉常用句型,多练

写作原则
归纳起来共有七条:
1)正式文体 2)完整结构
3) 明确观点 4)条理内容
5)重视句式 6)通顺联贯
7) 扬长避短

二、出题方式
13分钟阅读,字数300左右
21~2分钟听力,长度与阅读相当
320分钟写作,长度150~225

三、要点
如何确定要点:
1.       主题句
2.       重复的语意(同根,同义,同一词)
3.       原因和结果
4.       被解释的词汇
5.       带有倾向性的名词,形容词,副词,动词等。
6.       被强调的语意(比较,最高级,绝对词)
7.       问题与答案
8.       重要例子
9.       比较/对比&比喻
10.   表转折的词(其后的内容很重要)

四、动笔写作前的注意事项
1.       Read the question carefully and think about what it wants you to do.
2.       review the notes you took during the lecture
3.       plan what facts to present, and in what order
4.       select main points and write a paragraph about each
5.       develop the ideas with examples and reasons

五、如何结构全文:
总分式
分总式
总分总式

六、写作中的注意事项:
State the key point clearly in the first sentence of the paragraph with minimum detail. (每段第一句阐明主要观点,尽量少谈细节)

Each paragraph should convey one major point and support it with relevant details or explanation. (每段包含的主要观点必须有相关的细节说明或解释)

作文主体完成后的注意事项:
Allow time to correct grammar and vocabulary errors. (留出时间检查语法与单词拼写)

考生易犯的错误
Problem 1: no subject-verb agreement
Incorrect
Correct
More than one reason are expressed in the reading passage.
More than one reason is expressed in the reading passage.
One idea is that the size of the brain indicate a person’s intelligence.
One idea is that the size of the brain indicates a person’s intelligence.

Problem 2: no pronoun agreement
Incorrect
Correct
The best way to prevent a car accident is to prevent them from happening.
The best way to prevent a car accident is to prevent it from happening.
Mary is a salesperson which does a good job.
Mary is a salesperson who does a good job.

Problem 3: duplicate subject
Incorrect
Correct
Martha Graham she made her debut in 1920 with the Denishawn School.
Martha Graham made her debut in 1920 with the Denishawn School.
Although Christopher Columbus he failed in his original goal, the discovery he did make were more important than the route to Asia he expected to find.
Although Christopher Columbus failed in his original goal, the discovery he did make were more important than the route to Asia he expected to find.

Problem 4: incorrect verb form
Incorrect
Correct
These new drugs as wonder drugs saving many people who are very sick.
These new drugs as wonder drugs save many people who are very sick.

Problem 5: incomplete sentence
Incorrect
Correct
As a result, reduction in the number of death.

As a result, reduction in the number of death has been achieved.


Problem 6: incorrectly joined clause
Incorrect
Correct
Surface irrigation wastes a lot of water, this water cannot be used for other purposes.
Surface irrigation wastes a lot of water, and this water cannot be used for other purposes.

Practice
Check the sentence structure of the following paragraphs. Cross out errors and write corrections above them. There may be more than one way to correct an error.

1.    In the past, people use geothermal energy in several ways. For example, hot springs for bathing, treating disease, and heating buildings. Different tribes in North America they call hot springs places of peace, everybody could share the hot water for bathing. In European history, the Romans they also use the water of hot springs for their healing power. For example, eye and skin diseases. Geothermal energy was also heat homes in Rome and other places who are geologically active.

Keys: In the past, people used geothermal energy in several ways. For example, hot springs were used for bathing, treating disease, and heating buildings. Tribes in North America called hot springs places of peace, and everybody could share the hot water for bathing. In European history, the Romans used hot spring to cure eye and skin diseases. They even used the water of hot springs as their healing power. Geothermal energy heated homes in Rome and other places where geothermal energy is geologically active.

2.    The professor made many points about the motivation and needs of workers they support points made in the reading. First, the professor say the small work group important for workers about 3 to 15 people with one leader. The work group fill needs of workers the reason is they can participate and a sense of respect. The small work group also give workers the ability for make decisions. This point agreed with the reading it said the most satisfying jobs are those with a high level of autonomy this gave workers a voice can make their own decisions.

Keys: The professor made many points about the motivation and needs of workers. First, the professor said that the small work group is important for workers about 3 to 15 people with one leader. The work group fills needs of workers that they can fully participate in each task and enjoy a sense of respect. The small work group also gives workers the possibility to make decisions. This point agreed with the reading in the point that the most satisfying jobs are those with a high level of autonomy which gave workers a voice to make their own decisions.

七、拓展观点
总结听力材料summarize the lecture:
The speaker talks about
The lecture discusses/is mainly discussing
The professor made the point that

引出要点introduce key points:
First/second/third
First/then/another point is that
Or express the key point directly in a topic sentence.

引出例子introduce examples or reasons:
For example (instance)/one example is/such as/that is

增加例子add examples or reasons:
Next/Furthermore/another example is/in addition

对比观点Shw contrast between ideas:
However/In contrast/on the contrary/on the other hand/but

精彩opening:
1) The lecture discusses…which differs from the main idea in the reading that…

2) The professor made the point that…. The reading does not discuss this point.

Another important point is that…, but the reading does not discuss the point.

Finally, the Professor stated that….

In general, the Professor discusses problems of…that the reading does not include.

3) According to the lecture, ….On the other hand/while the reading stated that…

The professor made the point that…. On the contrary/however/in contrast, the writer demonstrated an idea that…

The lecture supports/illustrates the idea that…

The lecture contradicts/refutes/is in contrary to/is the opposite of the idea that…

对材料的指称:
The speaker/lecturer/professor/listening material/lecture

The writer/narrator/reading material/writing

八、总体写作模式
Paragraph 1         first key point from the lecture
                    Examples from the lecture
                    Explanation or connection to the reading
Paragraph 2        second key point from the lecture
                    Examples from the lecture
                    Explanation or connection to the reading
Paragraph 3        third key point from the lecture
                    Examples from the lecture
                    Explanation or connection to the reading
示例模板:
The lecture is mainly discussing ______, ________ and ___________ by _________, challenging what are stated in the reading passage that _________, _________ and _______.

First of all, the speaker thinks that ___________. In contrast, the reading passage believes that _____________. So, the lectures totally disagree with the view made in the reading.

Second, the speaker discusses ___________, Contradicting what is stated in the reading that _____________________.

Finally, the speakers raises the issue that ___________. This point disagrees with the point that ________________ demonstrated in the reading.

So, the contents in the reading passage are totally jeopardized by the speaker and the speaker has totally different ideas on the topics made in the reading.


九、范文分析
READING (Time-3 minutes)
The discovery of penicillin and other antibiotic drugs is the most dramatic medical development of the twentieth century. These new drugs quickly became known as “wonder drugs” because they saved so many lives that were threatened by major forms of infection. The research that led to their development rested on the belief that chemicals could be found that would destroy specific microorganisms without injuring the human body at the same time. Advances in chemistry and in the knowledge of bacteria quickened the discovery of such chemicals.
In 1933, the first of the sulfa drugs, prontosil, was tested clinically on humans and was found to cure blood infections that would otherwise have been fatal. In 1941, the first successful human tests of penicillin were conducted on cases of streptococcus infections. The discovery of penicillin laid the foundation for even more powerful weapons against specific diseases. Within the nest decade, researchers identified some 200 antibiotic substances that were effective against one or another type of bacteria. One of the most important was streptomycin, found to be potent against tuberculosis and other infections that were not affected by penicillin.
Antibiotics gave the medical profession powerful tools that could directly fight a very wide range of specific diseases. They made possible the survival of patients during and after surgery. No longer was it necessary to depend largely on the body’s own immune system to fight off major infections; these infections could be attacked directly with drugs. Among the most spectacular effects of antibiotics were reductions in the number of deaths from pneumonia and tuberculosis.


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Now listen to part of a lecture in a biology class.
As soon as we developed antibiotics, new strains of bacteria appeared that were resistant to some or all of the drugs. Hospitals started using antibiotics regularly in the 1950s, but resistance started appearing within a few years. Today, one-third of the patients in hospitals are on antibiotics, but antibiotic resistance is increasing the danger of hospital infections——to the point where people are almost safer staying home than going to hospital.
In the forties, penicillin really was a wonder drug. Back then, you could give a patient with bacterial pneumonia then thousand units of penicillin four times a day and cure the disease. Today, you could give 24 million units of penicillin a day, but the patient might still die. Why? Well, in a way, bacteria are smarter than us. They evolve to counteract any drug we attack them with. A lot of bacteria are now completely resistant to penicillin.
Bacteria can evolve very effective weapons against antibiotics. Some of them develop enzymes to match every antibiotic we throw at them. All these weapons and counter-weapons match one another——just like the weapons in real military warfare. So, no matter what antibiotic we use, the bacteria will come up with a way to make it useless.
How does this happen? Well, if you douse a colony of bacteria with an antibiotic the colony will be killed——that is, all except for a few cells. A few cells will survive because they carry a resistance gene for that particular antibiotic. The surviving cells quickly multiply and they pass along this lucky gene to their offspring. And soon you have a new strain of bacteria that’s resistant to that drug.
One consequence of antibiotic resistance is the reappearance of tuberculosis as a major illness. Twenty years ago, doctors thought tuberculosis was a defeated disease. Since then, however, new cases of tuberculosis have increased by 20 percent. And several strains of the disease are resistant to any drug we can attack them with.

Summarize the main points made in the lecture, explaining how they differ from points made in the reading.

Examples of responses to this writing question:

Response by student 1
The lecture discusses the resistance of bacteria to antibiotics, which differs from the main idea in the reading that antibiotics are “wonder drugs”. When antibiotics were developed in the 1940s, they were successful in curing many diseases. However, bacteria quickly became resistant to some drugs. Today, many people in hospital take antibiotics, but there is the serious danger of hospital infections. Penicillin used to cure diseases such as pneumonia, but today people still die because bacteria are resistant to the drug.
Bacteria develop resistance to antibiotics because they evolve weapons against the drugs. They can evolve strategies to fight any drug we give them. This situation is similar to the weapons of two armies use in a war. When you treat a disease with an antibiotic, it will kill the bacteria. However, a few cells will survive. Soon the new type of bacteria will appear, and resistant to the antibiotic. Therefore, we should not consider antibiotics as wonder drugs because the bacteria also have strong weapons.
One result of antibiotic resistance is the increase in new cases of tuberculosis. Doctors used to believe that antibiotics were powerful weapons against diseases such as tuberculosis. However, today several types are resistant to antibiotics. So it is a new and serious problem. This is another reason why antibiotics are not wonder drugs.

Response by student 2
In general, the lecture contradicts the idea that antibiotics are “wonder drugs” as the reading states. On the contrary, antibiotics are not wonder drugs because the resistance of bacteria to antibiotics.
According to the reading, the discovery of penicillin and other antibiotic drugs saved many lives that were threatened by dangerous diseases such a pneumonia and tuberculosis. In the twentieth century, penicillin was first a wonder drug because it can cure streptococcus infections. Furthermore, streptomycin found to be potent against tuberculosis. However, the lecture made the point that this is not true in the present. Today tuberculosis is a major illness again because the new strain of bacteria is resistant to antibiotics.
According to the lecture, bacteria have developed effective weapons against some drugs, for example, penicillin. They evolve to counteract antibiotics. It happens when a few cells of bacteria survive because they have the resistance gene. Then new strains of bacteria appeared. After that, antibiotics may attack but they do not kill all disease infections. This serious problem today is the resistance of bacteria to antibiotics.
In the past, antibiotic drugs could attack and kill diseases, but this is not true today. Therefore, it is necessary to develop new wonder drugs to fight disease.

Response by student 3
I will describe how the resistance of bacteria to antibiotics. First, it’s big problem in the hospitals. Hospitals used antibiotics in 1950, but resistance appearing a problem. The reason is danger of hospital infection is very bad so people had better stay home a hospital.
Second, penicillin was a wonder drug in 1940. You gave a man in hospital 10000 penicillin and he cured the disease. But today you give 24 penicillin but he might die. The reason is bacteria smart so very difficult treat pneumonia and other disease in a hospital. Several people die—— because the reason is the resistance of the bacteria to antibiotics.
Third, how does this happen is you dose a colony of bacteria with an antibiotic. The colony killed except a few cells. This is a dangerous problem in a hospital because people may die. Doctors think tuberculosis was a defeated disease but the increase is by 20%.
The changes the view of antibiotics as “wonder drugs” by resistance of bacteria to antibiotics. It’s a bit problem today and doctors can’t find drugs to cure the disease such as tuberculoses. Penicillin and other antibiotic drugs were wonder drugs in 1940-so it’s necessary to have a different view of antibiotics today.

Response by student 4
The resistance of bacteria to antibiotics changes the view of wonder drugs. One example is penicillin. It is wonder drug in 1941, when the first successful human tests of penicillin. The discovery of penicillin the foundation for even more powerful drugs, for example, antibiotics. Another example is streptomycin, found against tuberculosis and other infections that were not affected by penicillin.
The resistance of bacteria to antibiotics to some of the drugs. First example is pneumonia. In the past penicillin cure him, however today he still die. Second example is tuberculosis. The most effects of antibiotics were reductions in the number of deaths, however, since tuberculosis increase 20 percent deaths. It describes the resistance of bacteria to antibiotics. In the past, it was no problem, however, today it is serious problem. It’s changes the view of antibiotics as wonder drugs which saved so many lives. Because today people can still die.

Response by student 5
I discuss a biology professor talk about antibiotics. These new drugs as wonder drugs saving many people who very sick the diseases. Professor he describe penicillin as wonder drug it causing many people well after sick. The discovery of penicillin and other antibiotic drugs is the most dramatic medical development of the twentieth century quickly become known as ‘wonder drugs’. Antibiotics gave the medical profession powerful tools that could fight a very wide range of specific diseases. Professor he gave example the antibiotics make the survival of patients. For example, blood infections, pneumonia and tuberculosis. As a result, reductions in the number of death.

Exercise 1
Read the passage and then listen to the recording. To make this practice more like the real test, cover the passage and question during the lecture. Listen for important information. Take notes about examples or reasons that will help you remember the key points. When you hear the question, uncover the passage and question. Then allow 20 minutes to plan and write a response.

Reading time-3 minutes
The international style is the name given to the functional style of architecture that evolved in Europe and the United States shortly before the First World War and prevailed during most of the twentieth century. The international style is characterized by an emphasis on function and rejection of traditional decoration. It is also known as the Bauhaus style because it was refined at the famous German design school, the Bauhaus, during the 1920s. The directors of the Bauhaus, Walter Gropius and Ludwig Mies van der Rohe, reduced the urban building to a basic framework of steel, a skin of glass, and an open interior in which “curtain walls” could be moved around to suit the purposes of the user. Supporters of the Bauhaus idiom promoted a utilitarian simplicity in such phrases as “form follows function” and “less is more”.
The international style inspired both architects and ordinary citizens, and greatly influenced the mid-century building boom in the united states, particularly in New York. The beauty and simplicity of the Bauhaus idiom was evident in New York structures such as the Rockefeller center complex. Perhaps the best known New York example is the office building of the United Nations secretariat, completed in 1952. A Swiss-born architect known as Le Corbusier led the international group of architects that designed it. The UN secretariat is a slab only 72 feet thick, but its blue-tinted glass walls are 287 feet wide by 544 feet high. The building has a simplicity and elegance worthy of the most prominent international organization, the United Nations. The sleek utilitarian beauty of the international style succeeded in reshaping the city, making it one of the most successful architectural movements in history.

Now cover the passage and question. Listen to the recording. When you hear the question, uncover the passage and question and begin your response.

Now listen to part of a lecture on the topic you just read about.

The international style dominated commercial architecture for most of the twentieth century. The international style was the style of the modern city. We can see the results in New York City today. Most of New York’s skyline is made up of tall, straight, severe, glass-and–steel towers. These towers so completely dominate the cityscape that they shade the city streets. A person walking on the street is completely overpowered.
Strict simplicity is the defining feature of the international style, but it takes the idea that “form must follow function”---it takes this idea to an extreme. In the hands of a true master, the style has creative potential. However, there aren’t that many true masters. And starting almost immediately, what we saw was the uglification of the office building…to the point where the glass box became not only ugly but also ridiculous.
The international style started an explosion of cheap imitations. Take the un secretariat building. It’s a beautiful building on its own. It has an elegance that commands respect. But this type of beauty was turned into something cheap and vulgar because we saw too much of it. It lost its elegance and became, well, a little boring.
The philosophy of the international style is summed up in the familiar phrase “less is more.” But is less really more? “Less is more” inspired thousands of starkly simple buildings. In large numbers, and especially when they dominate a city’s skyline, these buildings can be ugly and uninspiring, even cold and unfriendly—more machine than human.
Critics of the international style saw its ugliness very early on. The glass box received a great deal of negative criticism—not only from the public but also from professional architects. One of the greatest architects, Frank Lloyd Wright, said, “less is more…where more is no good.” Robert Venturi was even harsher when he said, “less is a bore.”

Summarize the points made in the lecture, explaining how they agree or disagree with points made in the reading.
Key points for exercise 1:
1.                The international style dominated the architecture of the modern city; this agrees with the points in the reading that the style reshaped the city and was one of the most successful architecture movements in history.
2.                The international style takes simplicity and “form follows function” to an extreme, leading to office buildings that are ugly, ridiculous, cheap, vulgar, and boring; this disagrees with the point in the reading that utilitarian simplicity is beautiful an elegant.
3.                The international style received much negative criticism from architects and the public; this disagrees with the point in the reading that the style inspired both architects and ordinary citizens.

Exercise 2
Read the passage and then listen to the recording. To make this practice more like the real test, cover the passage and question during the lecture. Listen for important information. Take notes about examples or reasons that will help you remember the key points. When you hear the question, uncover the passage and question. Then allow 20 minutes to plan and write a response.
Reading time-3 minutes
Geothermal energy is derived from the heat contained within the earth. In some places the heat is so intense that it melts mantle rock to create liquid magna. Geologists believe that the ultimate source of geothermal energy is radioactive decay occurring deep within the planet. A renewable energy resource, geothermal heat is produced primarily when water descends from the earth’s surface and meets hot magna rising toward it. Some of this geothermal water circulates back up through faults and cracks in the earth’s crust and reaches the surface as hot springs or geysers. However, most geothermal water remains deep underground, trapped in cracks and porous rock.
In most regions of the world, geothermal heat reaches the earth’s surface in a very diffuse state, having lost much of its energy potential. However, in some areas, including significant portions of western North America, geothermal reservoirs exist close to the surface and are thus easily tapped for power generation. Geographic regions that possess well-developed geothermal systems are located in geologically active areas. Such favored regions with continuous, concentrated heat flow to the surface include Iceland, Japan, and the Philippines.
Now cover the passage and question. Listen to the recording. When you hear the question, uncover the passage and question and begin your response.

Now listen to a geology professor talk about geothermal energy.
The first use of geothermal energy in North America probably took place more than ten thousand years ago. This is when aboriginal people settled around mineral hot springs. The hot springs served as a source of warmth, also cleansing and healing. Hot springs were so important to aboriginal North Americans that they were considered neutral zones—places where members of warring tribes could bathe together in peace. In European history, people also valued hot springs for their healing powers. For example, the Romans used geothermal water to treat eye and skin disease and also to heat buildings at Pompeii.
Today, humans benefit in a much different way from this important natural resource. Ever since the world’s first geothermal-generated electricity was produced in Italy in 1904, we’ve tapped geothermal heat as a power source. Geothermal heat can generate electricity without the harmful fossil-fuel emissions that cause pollution and climate change. In geothermal power plants, the physical force that spins turbine blades is steam, heat, or hot water from within the earth.
Another use of geothermal energy today is direct use of hot water. Direct use involves taking heated water—without a heat pump or power plant—and using if for industrial processes, or to heat buildings and greenhouses, or to supply heated mineral water for health resorts.
The concentration of geothermal energy has to be very high in order to make heat extraction economical for a nation. Geothermal sites around the world aren’t all equal in their power potential. The best places for developing geothermal energy systems are regions that are volcanically active, like places around the Pacific Rim and in certain parts of Europe for example, Iceland is a geological hot spot, where geothermal energy is used to heat almost every home in the nation.
Describe past and present uses of geothermal energy, and explain why some regions have better potential than others for developing geothermal systems.

Key points for exercise 2:
1.       Past uses of geothermal energy include using hot water for bathing and cleansing, to treat diseases, to heat buildings, and to generate electricity.
2.       Present uses of geothermal energy include the generation of electricity and the direct use of hot water for industrial processes, to heat buildings and greenhouses, and to supply heated mineral water for health resorts.
3.       Some regions have better potential for developing geothermal systems because they are geologically or volcanically active, the concentration of geothermal energy is very high, and geothermal reservoirs exist close to the surface.


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