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发表于 2010-8-26 22:29:42 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
09.11.1 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Does advise given by older people more valuable than from people at your age?
What is more valuable?Advise given by older people or that from people at our age?Different people would have different answers.Those who consider older people’s advise more valuable hold the opinion that in something we must trust is our elders.Those who oppose this opinion,on the other hand,argue that people at the same age is usually like-minded and can offer a proposal of some merit.Personally,I side with the former and I will provide concrete evidence as listed below.

The first plain truth,I’m presenting here,is that knowledge originates in practise and on no account can we ignore the value of experience.The old,having wider experience and more extensive knowledge,would always put forward quietly sound suggestions.When it comes to people at our age,they are prone to see the issue from a similar angle like us ,which makes us fall into the same error.The best way to overcome it ---so at least it seems to me---is to consult the older generation who usually see things from a completely different perspective,until bit by bit the horizon springs wide and the unknown becomes knowable,we will recognize the tremendous benefits of the elder’s advise.

Furthermore,behind my preference lies an equally significant fact that advise from young men who tend to be aggressive may lack a detailed plan and bring us into a fairly dilemma,just like the popular saying goes “Impulse is a devil”.But a man who,with the increase of their age,has known human joys and sorrows, will definitely keep a cool head whenever things go wrong.Consequenly,there is a certain that all the factors would have been taken into consideration in their pratical plan which will make it easier for us to get ahead in success.As is known to all,chances favours the minds that are prepared,and under the elder we will be able to seize more chances for our career.

Last but not least,ther is a possibility that young people won’t offer the most conductive proposal,since they may be our rivals and would not deal honestly with us.However , for an old man who have achieved whatever work it was in him to do,there are no compelling reasons to refuse our request for help.All that they expect of us is that we are carring on what they can no longer do and greatly improving their achievement.

In conclusion,despite some minor drawbacks,taking up advise from older people,comparede with that from our peers,is instrumental rather than detrimental to our tatal life.It will benefit us not only in our study and career , but also in any other aspects that has something to do with our self-improvement . Unless we’ve grown old as them,the elder’s words and minds will apparantly prove the best classroom for us.
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你的名字太可爱啦~

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