今天看issue77题
77.The most effective way to understand contemporary culture is to analyze the trends of its youth
我在想展开的时候,想到把这个题目破成三块来写三段。不知道怎么样?
观点是赞同这个说法
1)what does the trend of youth stand for
2)the correlation between the trend of youth and contemporary culture
3)why it is the most effective way.
另外issue54题,In order to become well-rounded individuals, all college students should be required to take courses in which they read poetry, novels, mythology, and other types of imaginative literature.
我看到一些书上一来就认定了in order to 这句话的条件,
但我个人认为,
第二和第三个问题需要分成1段或者2段来论证
不要单独解释correlation,可以说 为什么youth is the emblem of a society
接着让步一段说 well adulthood may be indicator of a robust society as well. Blah blah reason.
Issue 54 可以这么写,这些所谓的literature, poetry和novel都是为了一个目的就是 well-round. 我感觉你切题的话切well-rounded更保险一些,因为你说specialized有风险。这算是答非所谓。这个issue强调 well-rounded, 结果你说 you need to be specialized. Kinda tangential to the topic
issue 77中the trends of its youth是用最高级来限定的,所以它是这个statement的中心以及重点,所以从它切入是保险的
issue 54中well-rounded individuals是in order to的对象,所以它就是这个句子的重点,所以从它切入比较保险,不会跑题
就是说总是应该从句子的核心内容切入?