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Doyou agree with the viewpoint that people are now easier to become educated thanin the past?

With fast development of the society, moreand more chances for people to obtain education are emerging. It also relatedto the high-technology and the requirement of the vocation. So I agree with thepoint that people are now easier to become educated than in the past.

First of all, compared with the pasttechnology, today's equipment can make people get information more efficiently.For instance, everyone has a smart phone nowadays, and they can not only read articlebut also watch a lesson through the smart phone. It means that they can getknowledge when they are waiting for a bus or when they are jogging. They canget knowledge anytime and anywhere. And Especially young people can easily surfthe internet to find out information which they need. Through this way, theycan learn knowledge conveniently and efficiently. So, the development of technologyhelps people easier to become educated.

Furthermore, whatever the government orpersonal has make condition for more people to get into the education system.Some poor students can go to school because of the government which isinvesting lots of money into education. It is obvious that the country hasrealized the important of the education. The more people educated, the morecontribution to the country for development. And my workmate has helped severalpoor students who is from the rural area to finish their school work. It seemsthat they are devoted their effort to make everyone has a easier chance tostudy. Trough their effort, the school dropout of China is decrease 1 percentfrom the past. So, the increase of the education investment is making educationeasier.

In addition, with the rapid life in thecities, people find out finding a job is becoming a difficult work. Especiallyfind a good job is always required high diploma. So numbers of people begin tostudy again. During this year, five friends sign up for a master of engineerdegree to promote their career. Nowadays, everyone has to get more educationabout his or her career, in order to be promoted or to compete for a betterjob.

Of course, some old technology has lostduring the time lapse and interference of the entertain is less than today.However the latest technology is making education easier and more conveniently.I therefore reinforce my standpoint to agree with the viewpoint that people arenow easier to become educated than in the past.

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