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发表于 2010-3-25 22:33:49 |只看该作者

3.25 Teachers should not show their political or social views known in the classroom

As the Chinese old saying goes: A teacher in a day is a father in whole life. Teachers are those who not only impart multiple knowledge to us but the important figures who open the door for us to realize the whole world . Because of this ,some people claim that teachers should be careful to show their own point of view on politics and social life, which if not handled properly will lead to some far-reaching problems
. However ,I oppose this point ,for the reason that what the teacher give to the students should not be limited just on the knowledge , but more .

To begin with , students in our country are always viewed as the outstanding one on all kinds of academic studies ,but when it refers to the social values and views of their own ,the majority of them seem to be unsure or obscured on this issue. Since
teachers play the predominant role in directing students to think and behave ,It is also necessary for them to advocate the contemplate on social and political issues ,which improve students’ deep understanding of society and also build more
responsibility that everyone should have for the country .

Besides ,when teachers express their own views on the issue of politics and society, it is more likely to happen that the interaction and communication between students and teachers begin to emerge , meanwhile the atmosphere of the whole classroom will be more vividly or even the relationship between students and teachers that used to be rigid will witness a change. Consequently ,students are allowed to express their own ideas without worrying about whether they are right or wrong ,which is a bonus for the development of those students who always see the standard answer as the a must choice.

What’s more , students who get more chances to talk about the political and social issues will be more capable to fix the practical problems than those who do not. Even though these “advanced” issues are not viewed as the basic courses that students need to ponder ,we cannot deny that these issues origin from our daily life, such as the problem of the traffic accidents and the soaring price of daily necessities which everyone need to face in the normal life . By thinking and discussing these issues ,students will connect what they have learned on books with the realistic problems
,which definitely do positive effect on their abilities of solving problems.

From what have been mentioned above , we can see it clearly that students can benefit a lot by thinking and discussing the political and social issues ,in which process teachers lead the main role.

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发表于 2010-3-26 22:31:35 |只看该作者

本帖最后由 crazylu 于 2010-3-26 23:34 编辑

我把26号的作业写成25号的了:L 看到你25号的组就两个人，不知能不能加到你们组，咱们三个互改呢

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=1075143&page=1&extra=在地板）

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发表于 2010-3-27 15:05:13 |只看该作者

12# summeralways

3.23 Young people should try different job before they decide which job or career they will do in the long term

Career ,which is the most fundamental and crucial part of our life ,is now being taken more freely than in the past . We have to admit that the rapid development of our society and prompt improvement on efficiency (efficiency of what?) has made it possible for people to choose their desirable job whenever they want . Some people maintain that the advantage of trying different kinds of jobs are obvious and beneficial to society and individual in a long way. For my part ,I strongly support it is necessary for people to experience more before they make decision on which career to focus on in the future .

Imagine , besides the knowledge imparted to us in the classroom ,what else have we got at the moment (I think "at the moment" is not necessary here)when we graduate from university? Have we got a complete and deep understanding of ourselves on the merits and shortcomings in order to be qualified to the job ? In most cases ,no one can instantly reflect those in a full aspects . The reason to this issue is that we seldom have the chances to get aware of ourselves in the isolated academic atmosphere , only the practice of combining what we have learned with the realistic problems can make it. Thus ,we can see it clearly that if someone take some different jobs before settling down on one career, he or she would more likely to realize him/herself well ,which absolutely contribute to the right decision that best suitable for him/her.

Besides ,trying different opportunities by doing various kinds of jobs enable people to develop their abilities ,which indisputably put them in a favorable position in the future job market. Like what the novels have showed us ,the successful man are those who never stop at one place and do the repetitive work all day and night for their whole life ,what they desire and persue is to adapt themselves to the environment as well as taking risk to experience life as much as they can . (It would be better to indicate which novels or stories you talk about, which help to convince readers.)Different jobs supply us all kinds of precious opportunities ,by which we can be equipped with both the skills in hand and the advanced thinking in mind.

What’s more ,when people begin with a new job ,it often means a new door is also opening for them to develop the relationship with those they never touched or acquainted before . But the benefits that co-workers and friends bring is(are) far more than the fantastic relationship itself , it is the resources behind really mean to us.(I cannot catch your meaning here:() As we all know that our society has dramatically changed by the deep and far-reaching relationship between one and the other , and one person’s opinion can affect others’ choice or decision . The experiences and knowledge one person hold may quite differ from another one, which lead to the diversity of our thinking .On the other hand ,in the different job position , we have more chances to get touch with various kinds of people in different character , from which we would be more confident and flexible to handle all types of relationships in life .

In conclusion ,taking different job do greatly effect on one’s future career .It is recommend that young students should try and experience more in order to fulfill their ambition even the life-long career.

总结：词汇句型都用得很不错。要说有美中不足的地方，就是论据对论点支持不够，尤其是"Besides"那一段。

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