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[F1] 大龄单身女性 F1 二硕转码1000被拒 准备2000求指导 [复制链接]

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个人基本情况(如题目)年龄:26
本科:985 BS in Physics
硕士:top2 MS in Integrated Life Sciences
录取院校:CMU Information Networking的MS项目
状态:今年年初毕业、未婚,男朋友本科毕业去US同院系

5.18北京1000被拒214b,下面是我的1000过程

Q1:出示护照和I20
Q2:问了我父母的职业?
我:my father is a manager, my mother is a doctor. 他接着问what kind of doctor? 我说orthopedic doctor(我妈是骨科,然后我内心OS整形科好像也是这个单词)。他没听清,我又说了一遍orthopedic,他说I see

Q3: 看了我的CV,好像说了一句Can be more specific(自言自语 我没太听清)?然后我问Do you want my study plan?他摇头

Q4:问我why you change your major?
我:Becasue I've studied life scienses, and I think information networking and telecommunication is neccessary for me to work in a medicine company when I come back to China, it's can make me more competitive.

然后他就和后面的女士讲了很久话,给她看我的CV,并指了指上面的内容(感觉每一部分他都指到了并进行了评论)后面的女士一句话没说,一直在听和点头。我觉得事情不妙,一直她投向笑中带救的表情。但vo没咋看我。

然后面签官(是个白人中年男性)看了电脑,说了我的年龄26岁,说是比较大什么的(没完全听清)。

最后转向我 我都看见他手放在蓝纸上准备拿起,心想approved了,然后他又把手转向白条递给我,说sorry we can't apply you the visa now, 我说what can I do  now, 他说you can reapply at any time. 我就说OK 走了

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发表于 2023-5-25 13:27:11 |只看该作者
本帖最后由 Gter4179893 于 2023-5-25 13:33 编辑

我认为1000的问题如下:
1. 回答问题不够清晰,不自信。vo问了为什么转专业,我没有把握好陈述机会
2. CV内容可能过于分散,没有凸显重点
vo的问题给了我表达的机会,但我的回答理由不够充分,会有点奇怪?


目前在准备2000,2000的问答准备如下:

1. 你上次拒签的原因?

I didn’t know the exact reason, but I think I didn’t explain clearly the reason why I change my major, and my CV didn’t introduce about my background and my motivation to study aboard clearly. In terms of that, I’ve reprepared these materials, my CV, study plan and advisor’s CV, for you to look through.


2. 你为什么要换专业?

After years of learning different majors, I find my real interest in computer science. In my previous study, I was exposed to many topics related to computer systems and networks, such as surgical software designing, scripts programming and laboratory website operations. I found that I really liked to use computing skills/techniques to solve problems in my subjects, so I want to learn more deeply and systematically.

【思路:发掘兴趣(不知道够不够convincing,会不会显得很假),不敢说为了在美找工作】

【还有因为我国内学历可以,二硕必要性应该如何陈述】


3. 你为什么选择这个学校的这个专业

First of all, I really like this subject (computer systems networking), and want to learn it more deeply and systematically.

I chose CMU because CMU is my dream school, and it is one of the best universities in Computer Systems and Networking. Participating in high quality CS courses there will fulfill my interests.

For my major MSIN, it provides students with specialized curriculum combining computer science, information systems and business education, which will offer me professional training to make values in my future career development.

【思路:1. CMU学校好 + 2. 项目符合我的需求】


4. 讲一下你的学术背景

My undergraduate major is physics at Central China Normal University, followed by my first master major in Integrated Life Sciences at Peking University, where I engaged in many computer-systems-networking-related projects, like designing automated surgical software system, scripts programming and laboratory website operations.

5. 你为什么选择读二硕,为什么不读博士学位?

PhD program is long term and big commitment, I might take it after I learn more about this field.

Secondly, I found my interest in applying computer networking techniques to solve real-world problem. Therefore I want to have as much hands-on experience as possible. So I think this industry-oriented program is the perfect match for me.

【选择硕士项目的理由中的industry-oriented是否敏感】


6. 你毕业之后的计划

After graduation, I will to go back to my hometown Sichuan directly. Because I’m the only child in my family, I have very close relationships with my parents and grandparents, and it’s my responsibility to be accompanied with them and take care of them.

Besides, these years the demand related to information technology in Chengdu (provincial capital of Sichuan) has been rising, which requires high-quality talents in computer systems design. I also [like/treasure] Chengdu’s high quality of life, moderate cost of living and vibrant economy, for which I can both be with my family and pursue a job of my interest.

【说直接回来会被觉得假吗?】

7. 谁资助你?你的父母是干啥的?

My parents are my sponsors, they set aside a sufficient deposit for me, about $100,000 a year. And my father is an equipment manager works for Deyang Turbine Company, and my mother is a doctor of traditional Chinese medicine that works for Deyang orthopaedic Hospital.

8. 有人和你一起旅行?

Yes, his name is Chenyue Zhao, he is my boyfriend and he will also go to CMU to study for a Master’s Degree program. We are both interested in computer system technology, and were both admitted in computer science related program. Thus, in Pittsburgh we will live and study together.

【同行人/男朋友是否可以提及?一同留学的兴趣、目的、共同居住等】

【男朋友目前还在被check】

9. 可以和我说一下你的这位同行人录取了什么项目吗,他未来有什么打算?

He was admitted in MS in Mobile and Internet od Things Engineering, which is MS-MITE. This program basically focus on developing embedded system and distributed system for mobile devices.

[We plan to go back to China together after we graduate. xxx etx.]

【我的毕业后计划是回成都,如果问到了男朋友的计划该怎么回答】

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你这帖子个人信息太多了, 你怎么什么都往网上发,适当隐去。

1000的评价就是呆板, 比如问父母职业就是在问你的国内羁绊以及经济状况, 家庭是否能够提供足够的持续性现金流供你读书, 这个如果你之前有过认真准备, 肯定知道回答。 转专业这个也是去面签之前就可以预见到很容易被问的, 也没有准备。 你就看你这个回答, “在药企上班需要网络计算机知识”, 你用中文打眼看这句话离谱不?

更不谈你为什么就一定是去药企上班, 哪个药企之类的逻辑链了。

你的专业路径肯定是很奇怪的, 物理, 然后生命科学, 现在又转码。 一硕好学校, 好容易考到北京的, 大部分人不都追求扎根吗? 你直接去美国转码, 你觉得VO会怎么推测你?

VO对你的攻击点其实你进入使馆之前就都已经很明显了。

你这后面还来一个, 北大硕士读完了, 美国CMU硕士读完了, 直接回四川养老。。。我不是说不可以, 咱就是说, 你是VO你咋想?

- 留学必要性。
- 回国羁绊。

我的置顶帖子里面说过, 就这么两点, 你一点也没有展示。

你的那些背诵答案我也没有时间挨个评论了, 整体一个感觉就还是很空洞。当你在说服VO你有必要去美国留学的时候, 你应该给他一个印象, 你有很清晰的职业规划, 你在向VO展示你宏大的职业规划, 以及how CMU fits into it. 最好还能把之前的无力和北大ICS这些都串联上等等, 这才是一个文案。

实际上, 准备面签, 你要编纂的, 不是几个问题的背诵答案, 而是一个大局的剧本。 你要吃透这个剧本, 变成剧本当中的人物, 然后在VO面签做出让人信服的表演。

再回头看你的这些背诵答案, 你堆了很多词语, 但是表达的信息非常空非常少。

比如: 你为什么要换专业?
After years of learning different majors, I find my real interest in computer science. In my previous study, I was exposed to many topics related to computer systems and networks, such as surgical software designing, scripts programming and laboratory website operations. I found that I really liked to use computing skills/techniques to solve problems in my subjects, so I want to learn more deeply and systematically.

最后核心关键词就是一个like。 你一个有北大一硕的, 现在投入时间金钱去美国转码, 因为like。 你是VO你咋想? 如果有一天有人拍电视剧, 写这么一个剧本, 物理四年北大三年然后转码去美国因为like写代码, 你怎么评价这个剧本? 好剧还是烂剧?

其他的你自己可以类推。 归纳掉无用信息, 你到底想要传达给VO的“关键词”是什么? 没有细节的废话VO每天听的太多, 他们已经练成左耳进右耳出, 只有你开始真正强行将你本人的情感, 本人的真实细节想他们推过去的时候, 他们才能跟你链接, 开始考虑给你过签证。

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