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发表于 2002-12-12 22:02:30 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

1. Critical judgment of work in any given field has little value unless it comes from someone who is an expert in that field.

2. The study of an academic discipline alters the way we perceive the world. After studying the discipline, we see the same world as before,but with different eyes.

3. All students should be required to take courses in the sciences, even if they have no interest in science. (新）

life is just like a game. The problem is that it's not how you play the game, it's how the game plays you.

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发表于 2002-12-12 23:05:42 |只看该作者

1. can not agree with it.
first, expert are only those who have studied certain issues for a long time and have made certain contributes to them. But even experts can disagree with each other intensely, or even have contradictory ideas. Remember the popular joke? Ten economists can have 11 conclusions! It is hard to say that those experts can judge things or to solve problems in a better way. Maybe what they will do is to make things worse!

second, actually, great inventions are always made by grass-root people. Steam-powered machine is make of an ordinary worker, the idea of chain-store like Mcdonald is devised by two brothers whose name have long been forgotten. When we keep absolute respect to the so-called experts, we are probably blocking imaginative dividuals from inventing.

third, quite often, exeperts are affected by other people, say, their college, thier relatives, of their own tastes and judgment

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发表于 2002-12-12 23:07:10 |只看该作者

写完才发现，第二点有点离题了。呵呵。补充加矫正：Sometimes ordinary peopole can find what the experts can not find. In that sense, they have unique and useful judgment of certain things.

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发表于 2002-12-12 23:27:50 |只看该作者

2.
it is true that academic disiplines are most effective in changing our ways to view the world. Just take a look at how differently people regard the very issue. An artist may feel especiall content to see a large tree because she favors the light and shadow of the leaves, while an botanist only sets her eyes on the bark and branches of the tree.

second, academic disciplines do much in clearing out our vague concepts of the world. For instance, a music teacher may feel much confused toward why the Asian Financial Crises would take place in the seemingly rather prospective areas and why people rush to buy products that are most expensive. But to an economis who have mastered economic discplines will find those phenomenon all too easy to explain.

However, it is not wise to emphasize on disciplines too much. After all, disciplines are studies contributed by our pioneers, which is to say, they are thier way to view the world. We should always be aware that we have the right to develop our own visual angles. If not so, we are not likely to make progress.

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发表于 2002-12-13 00:29:36 |只看该作者

3. All students should be required to take courses in the sciences, even if they have no interest in science. (新）
against:
1. the duty and function of university is to provide freedom,for instance academic study/research/thinking,etc, to people who are involved in it.
if we require all the students to take courses related to science, that means we grab their rights of free learning.
2. interest is one's best teachers. if students are not interested in science at all and whatz the benefit they could obtain from this approach?
3. the balance between all subjects.
if university lays emphasis on studying science, it will end up as unbalanced development of all the subjects.
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发表于 2002-12-13 00:37:40 |只看该作者

最初由月色发表
[B]1. can not agree with it.
first, expert are only those who have studied certain issues for a long time and have made certain contributes to them. But even experts can disagree with each other intense... [/B]

a long time should be changed into LONGER TIME :)
college should be changed into COLLEGUES :)

you could also discuss this topic more profoundly as providing more examples on the outside and inside influences when critisizing.

and usually in the first part of issue writing we should provide our understanding of the very topic. and then take position as for , against, partly agreement, etc.

furthermore, you could think the angle as the value of works is not from the critics of some experts, but common people. the more attention great works stir, the more value it creats.

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发表于 2002-12-13 03:17:17 |只看该作者

一、
1.judgment from an expert may not absolutely be critical.
2.as long as the judgement is reasonable and practical, it is valuable.
3.admitted, in some narrow special field we do need judgement from expert.

二、
1.some defined knowledge or axiom may restraint restrict the space of our imagination.
2.the way we perceive the world is formed by the character, the living experience, family background the most, academic discipline can affect it rather than alter it.

三、
1.science including the fundamental laws and principles of this world we live in. it is necessary for one to understand them, or it will be very hard for one to live. (say, if one didn't know the electricity is harmful to the human body, one would touch it...)
2.on the basis of science could we create, even a musician need to know some knowledge of the frequency or pitch of sound to create fair music...
3.Certainly, one student reach higher education, say as one enters college, they should not be forced to study science but choose whatever they are intereted in.

呵呵，记得我原来写过一篇A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer. 虽然和第三篇不太相同，但其中我是强调学习的兴趣和自动性的，呵呵。变态的ETS。

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发表于 2002-12-13 08:00:11 |只看该作者

郁闷。。。

斑竹歧视我呀，怎么每次俺写了都没人改？俺不写的时候都改呀。。。

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发表于 2002-12-13 21:02:50 |只看该作者

呵呵，gteryy你的新头像很可爱呀~~

我第三题的观点和你的差不多，也是partly agree
It is necessary for people to absorb some basic rules and principles of science in order to fully develop their mentality and personality.
The result of one's lacking of basic knowledge of science can be detrimental to one's daily life, say, ......
In addition, taking some basic courses in science such as maths can greatly develop one's logical thinking and reasoning ability which is beneficial to many other specific fields of study,even the field of pure arts.
However,overemphysizing the study of science may lead to unbalanced education. Higher education should provide students with a free atmosphere in what they are interested in learning. At the stage of further study, it is significant for students to study what they are interested in and good at. The requirement of studying science inclusively at this stage of learning can turn out to be both unreasonable and detrimental.

life is just like a game. The problem is that it's not how you play the game, it's how the game plays you.

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发表于 2002-12-13 22:36:46 |只看该作者

1,against.
first,not all judgements from an expert in a certain field are right,arbiters,such as aristotle,may also present false ideas.
second,ideas,judgements and advice,which promoted the developement of certain fields,are not scant in history.That is to say,judgements from non-experts can also enhance one field in some circumestances.
2,support
first,one's eye upon the world depends one's own experience and differs by different displines of separated subjects.when seeing a giant bridge,a engineer may start to consider its constitute and force bearing while an artist may be intoxicated by its grandiosity.
more over,the extent one cut into a subject is based the amount of knowledge one masters in that field.
3,one's interests is the most effective stimulus to learn and study.whithout interest,any subject being learnt should seems boring,in which we could achieve little,even, no advance.therefore,students should mainly studies depends on their own interests.
but certain studies of most important science are indispensable,such as math,which students majors art may not use it often,still works from time to time.For example,poeple majoring language also buy commodities like those majors others with money,and itt would be incredible to see they can't caculate the money should be cost.And science always benefits us in other ways.
In conclusion,although ingenial,students should call a balance between their interests and needs.

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