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jennifersoUID：3132548

It is undeniable that most classic and well-accepted movies are inspirable and can teach people something about real life. However, except for this kind of movie, other types of movies also have values because they meet people’s various requirements.

The reason why people come into cinema (the reason of going into cinema is vary from people by people)is diverse from people to people, and(这个and多余，thus已经是连词了) thus different kinds of films are required to adapt all kinds of tastes, some of which（them） are even quirky. For instance, comedy might be treated as ridiculous and superficial by some pundits, but it is indisputable fact that comedy can make people laugh and cheer up depressed people. Every person needs relax occasionally. If their purpose is(单复数) just to relieve from(删除)（releasing stress） and (decreasing tiredness), they can watch Stephen Chow’s movies to devote themselves to the delightful environment for a moment. For those who desire to gain courage to overcome difficulties in front of their lives, comedies, such as One Piece or Naruto are still a good choice.（单复数一致）

Another type of film, science fiction, is also beneficial and can entertain audiences. Science fiction movies reflect sparks of human beings’ intelligence and widens（单复数一致） people’s horizon of imagination. James Cameron, one of the most successful directors of Hollywood, is a good example to illustrate this point. Cameron was a big fun of science fiction movies since he was young. He was always interested in those quirky, fantastic stories about outer space and dreamed to have an opportunity to seek the worlds filled with strange creatures. 举一些他的科幻作品来说明他的想象力。The romantic film Titanic actually comes from his dream of diving and searching the relic of this prominent gigantic ship. （泰坦尼克是真人真事，卡梅伦有其他非常多的好科幻作品可以引用更合适）

In sum, it is hard to decide what kind of movie is worth watching, because people have different requires when they watch movies. A good movie is not necessary to teach us something about real life. （这句话想表达的意思是？？）As long as we can get what we want from a movie, it can be categorized as a good movie.

jennifersoUID：3132548

7.21已改好。不能上传附件，群里给你。

theflyfishUID：2101420

感谢楼上的各位。等会慢慢看

wendy316UID：2566643

快马加鞭的帮你改完了，嘎嘎。今天要早起，睡去了。

cherrycarrieUID：2943359

7.20 综合修改。
真是晚了，对不起。。。

cherrycarrieUID：2943359

这是pengdegao修改的。
她好像没有添加附件的功能，所以代传一下~~~

cherrycarrieUID：2943359

7.20独立修改。
不好意思晚了这么多
综合的话可能还要再一会儿= =因为我还没做，，，，，，
好吧我尽快。。。真是不好意思

theflyfishUID：2101420

7月21日独立

pengdegaoUID：2908139

43# theflyfish
我不能上传附件，群里留言了，你来找我要吧。

theflyfishUID：2101420

7月21日综合

theflyfishUID：2101420

45# cherrycarrie

非常感谢修改啊。
重复用词问题，主要是没什么积累，一时之间想不到什么替换词。要开始被单词了。
时态是和memoir相关的，我用的过去时。文章作者和lecturer提到的用现在时。我再想想。

cherrycarrieUID：2943359

不好意思，修改的晚了。

theflyfishUID：2101420

7月20日综合

theflyfishUID：2101420

7月20日独立

qqweer2007UID：2686919

38# theflyfish
改好了