ISSUE125 [REBORN FROM THE ASHES] by tequilawine

tequilawineUID: 2702008

Future never can be the copy or reflection of the past. It's silly to compare them with each other, even worse to forecast unpredicable future by history. Tactically speaking, we live for adventure in life, not for boring ordinary routine, as we hope, our world evolve all the time.

"We can never go through the same river ever." quoting from famous philosopher, pretty obvious, we know, the only thing that doesn't change is changing. Involving all we know, that takes in charge of human, environment and also incidents that consist of our crooking human history. That's why we can not simply summarize their relationship.

To begin with, I think mankind is the most flexible nature in world, in addition, no such two persons are completely the same, which is also the reason that our world become so colorful. Also we are not in common with our ancestors. That means we have different culture, manners, belief and so forth. How do you expect we can resemble them. It's weird that you bring your medieval noble manner into modern world, vice versa.

Following that, atmosphere around us accompanying with us transforms at the mean time. you live on breeding cow several hundred years ago, but now you live on computer on you job. Technology advanced by times, and our society that base on science and knowledge also altered beyond our ancestor minds. The only thing we are definitely sure is that someday our dreams will come true.

With time fleeting, incidents occur comprehending so many factors which makes it more complicated than ever we know. You can predict the accident on inadequate analysis, working on that to indicate the more unbelievable future.

Future is not under our control. However we can acquaintance with it by all means as we can. Boarding our knowledge in science, in nature, in astrology, no matter whatever is it, only if can help us know the future, it will be helpful to us, maybe give us strength to face the future in doubt.

jinziqiUID: 2387034

Future never can be the copy or reflection of the past. It's silly to compare them with each other, even worse to forecast unpredictable future by history. Tactically speaking (第一次见，感觉不错), we live for adventure in life, not for boring ordinary routine, as we hope, our world evolve all the time.( 我们活着是为了冒险,不是因为无聊典型的路线,就像我们希望的,我们的世界一直在发展,不知道是不是我理解的这个意思?)

"We can never go through the same river ever." quoting from famous philosopher, pretty obvious, we know, the only thing that doesn't change is changing (呵呵 好句子). Involving all we know, that (没看明白这个that指的是什么) takes in charge of human, environment and also incidents that consist (consist是由…组成，后面应该是组成的元素) of our crooking human history. That's why we can not (cannot) simply summarize their relationship.

To begin with, I think mankind is the most flexible nature in (the) world,(.) in (In) addition, no such two persons are completely the same, which is also the reason that our world becomes so colorful. Also we are not in common with our ancestors. That means we have different culture(s), manners, belief and so forth. How do you expect we can resemble them. (?) It's weird that you bring your medieval noble manner into modern world, vice versa (又学一词反之亦然呵呵).

Following that, atmosphere around us accompanying with us transforms at the mean time. You live (lived) on breeding cow several hundred years ago, but now you live on computer on you (for your) job. Technology advanced by times, and our society that base(s) on science and knowledge also altered beyond our ancestor minds. The only thing we are definitely sure is that someday our dreams will come true.

With time fleeting, incidents occur comprehending so many factors which makes (make) it more complicated than ever we know. You can predict the accident on inadequate analysis, working on that to indicate the more unbelievable future.

Future is not under our control. However we can acquaintance with it by all means as we can. Boarding our knowledge in science, in nature, in astrology, no matter whatever is it (no matter what=whatever,感觉语序应该是
whatever it is. 或者直接or whatever), only if can help us know the future (少了主语吧Only if can we get benefit from the past), it will be helpful to us, maybe give us strength to face the future in doubt (in doubt是不是和maybe重复了?).

先说过去到现在都是发展的，现在的事物与过去的都不一样了；生活也改变了，唯一的是梦想一定会实现；事情有太多因素，且都无法预测。
现在和过去的确不一样了，但是不足以说明过去的人没有预测到现在会是发展到什么程度。既然梦想一定会实现，那不也算是预测了未来吗?可以再深入写写。有没理解对的地方及时告诉我啊~

豆腐店的86UID: 2512956

Future never can be (貌似是can never be)the copy or reflection of the past. It's silly to compare them with each other, even worse to forecast unpredicable future by history. Tactically speaking, we live for adventure in life, not for boring ordinary routine, as we hope, our world evolve all the time.(本段读起来有点奇怪，你说未来不可能是过去的翻版，为什么是这样？copy 还能说得通，但是 reflection貌似不能说 can never be 吧。还有就是silly to compare，为什么是silly？ 以史为鉴从来没有人说是silly的行为啊？如果你这么认为，那就应该讲清楚啊。其实我觉得你可能只是想说不能拿过去来预测未来，但是你换了一种说法，而这种说法---silly to compare 是有偏颇的。 )

"We can never go through the same river ever." quoting from famous philosopher, pretty obvious, we know, the only thing that doesn't change is changing.（引用的名言和the only thing that doesn't change is changing的联系在哪里？ 名言说我们不能走同样的路，而你说不变的真理就是世界一直在变，是否存在紧密的联系？个人觉得不然。） Involving all we know, that takes in charge of human, environment and also incidents that consist of our crooking human history. That's why we can not simply summarize their relationship.（这句话没看懂）

To begin with, I think mankind is the most flexible nature in world, in addition, no such two persons are completely the same, which is also the reason that our world become so colorful. Also we are not in common with our ancestors. That means we have different culture, manners, belief and so forth. How do you expect we can resemble them. It's weird that you bring your medieval noble manner into modern world, vice versa.

Following that, atmosphere around us accompanying with us（这里是不是重复了？） transforms at the mean time. you live on breeding cow several hundred years ago, but now you live on computer on you job. Technology advanced by times, and our society that base on science and knowledge also altered beyond our ancestor minds. The only thing we are definitely sure is that someday our dreams will come true.

With time fleeting（学习了）, incidents occur comprehending so many factors which makes it more complicated than ever we know. You can predict the accident on inadequate analysis, working on that to indicate the more unbelievable future.

Future is not under our control. However we can acquaintance with it by all means as we can. Boarding our knowledge in science, in nature, in astrology, no matter whatever is it, only if can help us know the future, it will be helpful to us, maybe give us strength to face the future in doubt.

个人觉得楼主可以试着总结一下每一段的段落大意，然后看看是不是能够清楚地表达楼主的观点。我觉得有点含糊不清，第三段，当你想阐明过去和未来的变化的时候，你用了人与人之间的不同，说道古人和现代人的差异，然后呢？你没有具体再回到过去和未来上。或者说你有了一个deduction的思路，但是你只是划了一下道路线，没有扎扎实实铺好路，有点架空。语言上有些许堆砌的感觉，很多好词，但是用得有时候先得牵强，可能是例子不充实的关系吧。
本人说话比较直接，如有冒犯，表示歉意。

hugeseaUID: 190158

Future nevercan be the copy or reflection of the past. It's silly to compare themwith each other, even worse to forecast unpredicable future by history.Tactically speaking（weird，Generally speaking不就可以了么？）, we live for adventure in life, not for boringordinary routine, as we hope, our world evolve all the time.

"We cannever go through the same river ever." quoting from famous philosopher,pretty obvious, we know, the only thing that doesn't change ischanging. Involving all we know, that takes in charge of human,environment and also incidents that consist of our crooking humanhistory. That's why we can not simply summarize their relationship.

To beginwith, I think mankind is the most flexible nature in world（此句有问题，mankind和nature不是同类的，不能用be动词吧，人不是nature吧，我觉得mankind这个词也不好，用human吧，改一下：human is the  most flexible creature in world;或者 human has the most flexible nature in world）, inaddition, no such two persons are completely the same, which is alsothe reason that our world become so colorful. Also we are not in commonwith our ancestors. That means we have different culture, manners,belief and so forth. （这个我要argue一下，真的是different culture么？）How do you expect we can resemble them. It's weirdthat you bring your medieval noble manner into modern world, viceversa. （这个论述，我觉得不靠谱）

Followingthat, atmosphere（living conditions） around us accompanying with us transforms at the meantime. you live on breeding cow several hundred years ago, but now youlive on computer on you job. Technology advanced by times, and oursociety that base on science and knowledge also altered beyond ourancestor minds. The only thing we are definitely sure is that somedayour dreams will come true.

With timefleeting, incidents occur comprehending so many factors which makes itmore complicated than ever we know. You can predict the accident oninadequate analysis, working on that to indicate the more unbelievablefuture.

Future isnot under our control. However we can acquaintance with it by all meansas we can. Boarding our knowledge in science, in nature, in astrology,no matter whatever is it, only if can help us know the future, it willbe helpful to us, maybe give us strength to face the future in doubt.

其它的我没细看，你的思路和pluka的比较接近，是既要承认过去是可知的，然后还要不承认过去可以预见未来，这中间的原因就是人的主观能动性以及不同时代的人生活环境的不同。