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2010年8月12号

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?If you do not make sure other people (especially influential people or your emplyers)know about your strengths and accomplishments,you will never get successful in life?

观点：不同意
提纲：
1、
有很多人并没有得到别人的认可，但是成功了
2、
于此相反的是，有很多人，虽然大家都认可了他，但是他最后还是失败了
3、
其实，成功与否，根本与别人认可与否无关，有的时候取决于我们自己对于成功的定义。

There're a group of people dream to be successful.Then how can we get success?As a famous saying goes:success is equal to a clear goal and persistent efforts.From this saying we can see that whether can us be successful is determined by ourselves and does not have anything with making sure others know about us.So I don't agree with the statement in this topic.Want to succeed?Set a goal and just do it.

To begin with ,I will show you that even others have never been aware of our strenghths or accomplishments, just by ourselves,we still can succeed.Go through our history ,it is filled with such examples. Vincent van Gogh,the famous painter ,who has not been widely accepted during his lifetime ,but after he’s death ,people has realized his intelligence and achievement in art .Now Van Gogh has been regarded as the most great painter in the world .The case is not rare,take Liuxiang for another instance ,Liuxiang ,the winner of the men’s 110m hurdles race in Athens Olympic Games and also the record keeper for 11 years ,his gold medal is the first one has been wined by an Asian in Olymic. However, before he get so successful ,people didn’t know him at all and even his coach did not actually think much about him. But he finally made it .All these indisputable evidences go to show that it is really not required for us to make others know about us can we make success ,we must trust ourselves and keep going ,and when we get success ,people will approve us.

On the contrary, there are also a lot of people who have already make sure other people known about him, but still failed.Take one colleague of my parents for example,the colleague has an enviable background---graduated from Tsinghua University,always was the president of students,won the race in many different international awards and so on.He is always shining.Everyone are optimistic about him,trust him will also get a good score during his career.But he let them down,because he is just an bookworm, can not bear the pressure from the work and finally he has broken down.At the end,only sympathy is left for him.Thus,we can see even one can be approved by others,it is also doesn’t mean that he is really a successful man.As one saying in the movie“Forrest Gump”goes: life is a box of chocolate,you never know what you will get the next time.Maybe you are great in these area and all of the people recognize you well.But that is not to say you will get success next time.All you need to do and have to do is never be arrogant,stand on the earth,try your best and never give up.

In addition,I think, when judging if one has really get successful or not,the defination of sucess could not be ignored.Different people have different views on the success.For some one,they regard it as getting others acceptance.Then ,if not,they will never think they has indeed made it even maybe they has already got a high position in the society and has innumerable money, which is the symbol of success in the eyes of some people who are poor and lowliness.For these ones,I have to admit that "yes,only after you make sure other people know about you,can you succeed".But this is an special situation,most of us common people just want a happy and soft life,and for us it is the real success.So how we are looked at by others could never make a big deal.

In sum,many people in the world want to be successful.But all I want to say is, whether we can succeed could not be determined by others' acceptance on us,without it there are many examples has already made great achievements,while even with it,there are also a lot of people failed at last. To be successful, just set a goal,and spare no effort to make it.

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