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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people should try several different jobs before they take a long term career.
Nowadays, because of the progressive development in the society, variations are apeeared in every second. Young people face to the various intriguing challenges and their decisions are uasually usually easy to be affected by the exterior factors. From my point of view, as for job, these young people should not be influenced and change it continuously before they take a long term career mainly for 3 reasons.If you can excerpt the 3 reason would be better
First of all, when people started a new job, there must be a certain period of time for them to adpat adapt to it. For instance, I used to jackaroo? in a silk commercial company in my summer holiday. At the biginning of the internship, nothing could be accomplished by me. Two months could only let me be familiar with the departments and process of operating tasks. I was told by my boss that it was necessary for a person as me study for 3months in the company at the biginning. Therefore, if the adapation needs for 3months, young people must demand more than half years to begin to get their true experience. In this case, if their jobs change continuouslyand rapidly, each of them will become a person who had lots of tryings without earning valuable experiences.
Additionally, when young people apply for a job, they are always sincere during the interviewing.interview They gain the job by their own effort and the company offers them promissory working environment and payment. Some business also train new workers since those company has a strategy in management. Hence, as yong people work in a company, they not only need to be responsible for themselves but also for others. Changing a job is not a personal decision owing to a series of alteration which will be led by it. For example, the person who resigns the job need to hand over the work to his or her colleague. As for the colleague, the pressure suddenly increases.As for the manager, he or she might need to change their schedule and restart to plan it..
Last but not the least, different jobs differ the networking. In order to achieve the goals, sometimes the assistant of his or her friends is obligatory. If the job is changed, there must be obstacles apeared in the initial woking.working Moreover, because of the new job, people perhaps have no time to contact with some friends who are out of a certain society. In this situation, they will gradually lose treasured friendship.
All in all, young people should take a long term career as the first step in their life in persuitpursuit of sureness.
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