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2.11 独立 综合

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2.18 改 综合, 不好意思晚了,昨天被同学拉起被活动了

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2.17 综合

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2.17 不好意思 晚了

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2.18 综合

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2.17 改  昨天回家过节了  不好意思晚 了

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15# kaolaliang

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2.17 综合、独立

2篇写作都是计时写的，都没有写完整，修改的同学见谅

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2.16 TPO16 已改好

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TPO 16
The passage talks about Britain’s archaeology that was faced crisis and limitations, and three problems were indicated in passage. However, the lecture introduces a new deadline of archaeology which is benefit for filed of archaeology.

First, artifacts can be protected before constructing. The lecture mentions that archaeologist have rights to examine any site when it is been projected to rebuild. When archaeologist have found the site is valuable , they should cooperate local government and construct company to design a plan to decide to build around or to relocate a site. It is eventually helpful for the artifacts remained.

Second, archaeologists can get fund assist from construction firm. The passage says that archaeologist used to born with the fund resources, which often stop their research. But the speaker has explained the new rule, the problem of research fund should be a history topic, archaeologist may have more achievement on their researches.

Third, there’re more jobs about archaeology in society.

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TPO15 修改
The passage talks about measures to prevent the spread of the cane toad in Australia. However, the lecture has a conclusion about the three proposed methods will be unsuccessful.

First, it's introduced in passage that block the scope of cane toads' activity by fence. Contrast, the speaker suggests it won't work that young toads and eggs can be transported to other sites by water flowing in rivers and streams. This directly contradicts what the passage indicates.

Second, capturing activity takes no effect. The passage says that volunteers can capture the toads and destroy toad eggs easily. But these volunteers are not trained for this, who even cannot distinguish between native frog's eggs and toad's egg, which could damage to the frogs. This is another part where experience contradicted theory.

Third, the virus cannot be executed. Austria cannot release these virus that used harmful in the South of America. Even more, Austria and America have a frequent transportation about animal research and something else. If the Austria virus will be carried to US, which could cause a damage to Eco-system because of toad is part of species in South of America which has a numerous number. The final method cannot do it obviously.

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2.15  feedback

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不好意思 改晚了

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谢谢修改

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改好了