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3月6日  独立  It was easier to achieve a success in the past than it is today.  09/10/10 cn


Nowadays, we hold the high-techniques, establish the convenient transportation system, we also have the perfect information networks, all of these make our lives easy and comfortable. I do not agree that it was easier to achieve a success in the past than it is today.


First of all, no matter past or nowadays, for success, people have different definitions. For some people, success is a peaceful and normal life without starving and poverty. But on the other hand,people who have a steady character may want to achieve a perfect career and become a well-known person. For the people whose goal is not so high, that may be easy to get the success. By contrast, people whose aims are too much and too high, to achieve success must pay their full energy, time and painstaking work to get it, and sacrifice a lot things, such as holiday, money or sleeping. Success for them is really a hard process.


Moreover, in the past, people lack sufficient knowledge or theories system and physical conditions at the same time. people in the past who studied on some particular fields knowledge might be during a long and painful exploration process, due to the limited knowledge what people have held. At the same time, because of the pool physical conditions, such as transportation system and post system,etc, their activities were limited in a relatively small area. There are less chances to contact outside world, and rarely have academic communications with the people who studied the same field, Like they were during a long term to found that earth like a circle, we are going around the sun.


Last, nowadays people hold the high-techniques and establish a convenient transportation, they give people tremendous benefits. news, information and new techniques can spread out of the world quickly through the Internet. we can search the wide range of information fast and total(后改成full-scale). People can change their major or interest once their find they are not really proper to study that. But, people who live past did not have these advantages in that period. A lot of people use their whole life to achieve one success and some of them we even never know,


To sum up, depend on the definition of success, and the environment the people who live in the past, it is hard to say success is easier to get in the past than today.


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Only movies that can teach us something about real life worth watching.090911
Hundreds years after the movie generate, it undergo a tremendous change, gradually become a complicated art form. Movie exist do not just for teaching people about the real life, but also have other values. So, I don’t agree that only movies that can teach us something about real life worth watching.
From the angle of team of movie makers, each motion picture has their own spirit they want to emphasis or express, not just teach people about real life. Along with the computer technique developed and social developed, it divided many parts of jobs, different categories, movie evolved very complicated. For example, some commercial movie, the makers just want to transit the information about the fashion or car, or charming actors, beautiful shots, like the movie <the devil wears prada >, <the holidays>. And, some movie give us fascinate original soundtracks, like the movie<1900>, <the music and the lyrics>. You cannot say these movies do not worth to watch. They are really attractive and have their own art values.（举一个具体的例子比这样罗列可能效果更好）

For the audience, watching a movie is not just for learning something, sometimes, a quite large numbers of people watch movie for some particular actors or for relaxing, moreover some people just see particular kind of movies. People watch movie for their own aims. For me, I am a fun of Johnny depp and Edward Norton, I have seen all the movies they attended, like Johnny depp’s, even traced to 80’s. So watching movies just for the actor or director I love, never consider learning something, but if can, it’s nice but not important. On the other hand, a newspaper survey shows most people watching movie just for relax, getting some fun or killing time when two persons just fall in love.（不太恰当） Especially under high stress society, between（删）
learning and watching movie, it doesn’t seem to have any closely related.
On the other hand, many methods we can use to learn knowledge in this information society, watching movie is not the best way. It is not the main point since movie have been invented, in the early age of movie developed, it normally shows to people many continuous pictures about landscapes around the world. Learning something is not the essence of motion pictures.
In one word, movie brings us lots of fun, let people get close to each other and relax, teaching us something is nice, but if not, it doesn’t matter!








It’s more important for the government to spend money to build art museums and performance center than to build recreational facilities(such as swimming pool. playground)  090919na
Art museums and recreational facilities are the necessary part of urban planning. None of them can absent in a city. However, due to the city conditions which I live, I agree that it is more important for the government to spend money to build art museums and performance center than to build recreational facilities.
To begin with, the museum and performance centre promote citizen’s spiritual life and bring more profit to the city. If a city doesn’t have a relatively perfect museum, it will like a person lost his soul. For museum, it recreate the city’s figure and give people a place for tracing the history, while deepening the sense of belonging of their citizen. On the other hand, built a excellent performance center can attract more artists to come and hold concerts, also offer more chances for citizen to contact the art form they like. Of course, it will bring much profit for government and job opportunities, promote the city economic.
More important, it offers a proper place for school to teach their class. A increasing number of schools begin to pay attention on the social class education. Teaching knowledge to their students about the history or environment where they live in, and the city development, it would be a important task for education system. If a city can build more different type of museums, like art museum, science museum, history museum, nature museum, it would be promote the education quality and help to increase students’ interests of study at the same time.(论据稍显不足，举几个实际例证更好)

On the other hand, nowadays, city planners and landscape architects have designed enough places for people work out. Almost any of the（every） residential and neighborhood area in Asia, like Singapore, China and Japan, all plan two to three recreational spaces for people do sport. But, for most young people, they prefer to work out in the personal clue.
In conclusion, according to the city development, we already have enough recreational areas, but built more special and diverse subjects museum are we need.

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090912cn  Should children spend most time playing and studying or required to help the family with household chores like cooking and cleaning?


I strongly agree that children should require to help the family with household chores. It develops children’s learning ability, makes children more independence and responsibility, inspire them have passionate about life and work.

First, housework makes children more independence and develops their learning ability. Housework is an unavoidable part of people’s life, it is best to learn as early as possible, especially like the scientist said, 4 to 5 years old is the best and fast stage to learn things. Take my nephew for example, from he was old enough to keep things, my sister taught him to keep things by himself, like books or toys in the room. Although that was a terrible beginning, after few times, we found he had strong ability to learn and pretty interest on keeping stuff, if you can patiently teach him. Until now, he likes to help my sister to share housework and feel that he is a important part of the family. Even through this, he has a strong skill on organization, observation and a clear way to solve problems, like he can very clearly and logically tell the things happened in the kindergarten, and he know exactly which part of toy didn’t work.

Moreover, housework cultivates the sense of responsibility. According to a report, children are sensitive, if you let them join in the family daily work, they would show strong responsibility on family. Take my nephew’s again, my sister let him to arrange the vegetable and fruit in fridge and always take him to the supermarket, showing him which fruit and vegetable are good for health and people must eat. After that, reminding parents to buy the necessary food become one of him task. As my sister said, he feel have responsibility on family health and never choose food to eat, unlike some children on his age.

Last, housework gives us passionate about life and remote people’s psychological health. Through the housework children gain, they can found their own value which makes them love their life time. According to a research of Harvard university, they traced to observe a group of people for 20 years, when they grow up, research shows the children who love to do housework have more income than the one who dislike, and lower unemployment rate, crime rate, divorce rate.

In sum, I believe the idea of children should require to help the family with household chores is correct, it create a healthy, lovely and independent children.

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3月6日  独立  It was easier to achieve a success in the past than it is today.  09/10/10 cn
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Nowadays, we hold the high-techniques, establish the convenient transportation system, we also have the perfect information networks, all of these make our lives easy and comfortable. I do not agree that it was easier to achieve a success in the past than it is today.


First of all, no matter past or nowadays, for success, people have different definitions. For some people, success is a peaceful and normal life without starving (是不是用starvation更好点？) and poverty. But on the other hand, people who have a steady character may want to achieve a perfect career and become a well-known person. For the people whose goal is not so high, that may be easy to get the success. By contrast, people whose aims are too much and too high, to achieve success must pay their full energy, time and painstaking work to get it, and sacrifice a lot things, such as holiday, money or sleeping. Success for them is really a hard process（感觉表述上有点重复，使用变化的表达方法或词会好点）."（） b2 k* A2 D: [* s
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Moreover, in the past, people lack sufficient knowledge or theories system and physical conditions at the same time（好像这样表达不太好）. people in the past who studied on some particular fields knowledge might be during（experience） a long and painful exploration process, due to the limited knowledge what (that) people have held. At the same time, because of the pool (poor?) physical conditions, such as transportation system and post system, etc, their activities were limited in a relatively small area. There are less chances to contact outside world, and rarely have (had) academic communications with the people who studied the same field, Like they were during a long term to found that earth like a circle, we are going around the sun（be during有这种用法吗？如果把during a long term去掉，这句话表达不正确。还有整句话意思不是很清晰）.) P3 V4 u; F: Z6 h+ J6 Y
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Last, nowadays people hold the high-techniques and establish a convenient transportation, they（which） give people tremendous benefits. news, information and new techniques can spread out of the world quickly through the Internet. we can search the wide range of information fast and total(后改成full-scale). People can change their major or interest once their find they are not really proper to study that. But, people who live past did not have these advantages in that period(和who live in the past 重复). A lot of people use their whole life to achieve one success and some of them we even never know（是不是最好能举具体点的例子来说明？）,

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To sum up, depend on the（different） definition of success, and the (tough) environment the people who live in the past, it is hard to say success is easier to get in the past than today
（论证不是很充分，我感觉需要加一些具体的例子。就像第三段最后说的那个例子就好点。还有表达上需要进一步提高。加油！）

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