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[作文] [daily writing] sundae 的独立作文 新手哈 求指教 [复制链接]

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发表于 2011-7-20 11:46:44 |只看该作者 |正序浏览
题目which is more important, book knowlegde or experience?






This is increasingly that we see decent criminals who were intellectuals familiar with deep knowledge printed in bibles of a certain field. Besides this, when it comes to the most common life of students, more and more of us hold the feeling that it turns out totally different when I close my book and intend to try what I have learned in the real world.
On personal part, I am on the side of the point of view that the knowledge gained from experience is more important.
Firstly, exploring the unknown field is the nature of human beings. Even if we get some already tested knowlegde which,yes, will save us some energy so we can be more efficient, the curiosity rooted in our character will yet lead us to test it again. Therefore, knowledge gianed from experience is about human nature and sometimes more proper preparing that gained from books.
In addition, we usually tend to bear in mind experiences instead of principals or formulas. Books are like a senior sage telling us what is right or wrong. But only listening to it is definitely not real study. We will forget the knowledge so easily. To gain knowledge by hand , however, is another story. Experiences always stimulate kind miscellaneous senses to let us remember the knowledge along our way.
Finally, it is in the real world not the books that we live. The object we communicate with is real human. The problem we face is real dilemma. Sometimes we need conclusions which may be gained from books, but most of time the answer we need can be only find and understood by real experiences.
When we look back on the procedure of how books came up, we find that books are printed experiences. After all, we all know our terminal aim does not lie in paper.
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发表于 2011-8-17 21:01:47 |只看该作者
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发表于 2011-8-13 23:46:49 |只看该作者
那个 改的作文在ECHOWRITING@163.com
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发表于 2011-8-12 21:42:51 |只看该作者
8.12独立,写的真纠结
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发表于 2011-8-11 08:53:51 |只看该作者
谢谢楼主替我改作文。你的作文很好,比我的好得多得多:),膜拜一下,呵呵!我在这里是新手,请多多关照!

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发表于 2011-8-11 02:39:32 |只看该作者
本帖最后由 qnwh2011 于 2011-8-11 08:49 编辑

[有些人觉得他们可以靠自己或者家人的帮助,解决important problems.因此,人们不需要政府的帮助。* l9


There are many problems along the way of life. Some of them are easy to handle while some may trap us in a very tough situation. Faced with such problems, being independent or asking help from only family , of course, is worth admiration, but(however我觉得 更合适), in my opinion, keeping the problems away from the government is not always the best choice.

A reasonable citizen should know that his or her life is not only is influenced by other factors , but also has effect on lives of others. The relationship in the society is like a giant invisible net. Any move of one single person can cause tiny or large fluctuation of the whole net. So one individual's problems, no matter who what they are, may not be his or her own problems; they are likely to become a new focus that all of us should pay attention to because it's the same society we live in.

Living in the society needs cooperation whichand cooperation needs leaders. So I think that's why we have government. Government is human's invention for solving public problems which are initially important problems for individuals. Supposed that everyone solve travel problems on his own, by bike or car, would the bus have come up? And what about the convenient railroad systems? If everyone or every family close the door and face alone whatever he or they encounter in life, the society will never develop no matter how advanced technology someone is using because nothing benefits the public.


Government should keep
)informed of what is bothering its people, although its people are supposed to know what kind of problems is worth informing the government. Some problems can be defined as important, but it can be solved by oneself according the already developed way of handling such problems. Or it needs only a little tolerance and compassion to solve conflicts between neighbours. Sometimes good operation of the government also needs qualified citizens.
To conclude, faced with important problems, asking for help from the government is beneficial for the individual, the government and the public.

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发表于 2011-8-10 13:49:29 |只看该作者
8.10独立
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发表于 2011-8-10 08:21:37 |只看该作者
8.8 独立修改
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发表于 2011-8-8 13:45:58 |只看该作者
佩服下 如果lz的头像也是真的话 小的就膜拜了

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发表于 2011-8-8 13:01:30 |只看该作者
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发表于 2011-8-6 18:11:25 |只看该作者
你的独立写作真的很棒很棒很棒:D
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发表于 2011-8-6 13:39:39 |只看该作者
好了~
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发表于 2011-8-5 21:17:32 |只看该作者
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发表于 2011-8-4 08:20:56 |只看该作者
写的不错,学习了~~
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