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发表于 2011-8-2 16:07:46 |只看该作者 |正序浏览
本帖最后由 米陌 于 2011-8-3 21:51 编辑

8.13一战,才看到这个互助小组,8.2日起加入~
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发表于 2011-8-11 16:55:40 |只看该作者
zhengxiao0312 改
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发表于 2011-8-11 15:22:51 |只看该作者

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zhengxiao0312 感觉文字很流畅
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发表于 2011-8-11 09:32:57 |只看该作者
文章已改,麻烦看一下我的https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1294721&extra=
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没关系~不急~我下午也传了一阵才传上来~

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发表于 2011-8-10 18:04:51 |只看该作者
改好啦
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突然上传不了附件了 不好意思 我明天再试试

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发表于 2011-8-10 16:05:47 |只看该作者
越来越好了,加油
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发表于 2011-8-9 23:31:15 |只看该作者
8.9 作业
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改好了,继续加油~~~
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改好了,加油~~
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本帖最后由 米陌 于 2011-8-6 22:23 编辑

8月6日20101022NA  Do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement? The advice from the grandparents is of no use to their grandchildrenbecause the world has changed a lot over the past 50 years.& u* S:
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Admittedly, the so-called generation gap does exist between grandparents and their grandchildren, however, the suggestions given by grandparents cannot be completely negated because some advices are virtues that should be followed perpetually. Three examples are provided in the following paragraphs.

Firstly, to follow the regulations and laws is one of the virtues applied both today and in the past. Although some changes occurred during the 50 years, citizens today still have the obligation to obey the Constitution and other regulations to maintain the normal operation of the society. Anyone who violates the law will be punished. For example, shoplifting was prohibited half a century ago. Grandparents learn this rule from their previous experiences and they will tutor their offspring not to steal things in stores because it is against the law. This suggestion is still useful today.

Another suggestion grandchildren need to listen to is to love their family members and support each other. Although nowadays, children become more independent, there is still no denying that interactions with family members are essential and people cannot survive without a family. Take me as an example. With differences in personal preferences, my cousins and I live in different cities. We seldom get together. But the distance between us cannot fully separate us and we all agree that family members are the ultimate support and people you can always count on.

In addition, to be responsible, which was regarded as an important code of ethics centuries ago, is still valued in modern society. For example, to be responsible for the society, people should make contributions to their community as they all benefit from it. This is a commonsense and will never be out of date. And this is proved by surveys conducted by the U.S.A Today. In both 2010 and 1950, the newspaper asked its readers to name 5 most important characters of a friend. And surprisingly, the results are quite identical and responsibility is on both lists.

Therefore, people cannot fully deny the usefulness of suggestions given by grandparents who experience a different living condition because some commonsense appear to be useful all the time and will not be phrased out as time goes by.

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发表于 2011-8-5 21:30:18 |只看该作者
8.4 米陌 http://sns.gter.net/space.php?ui ... =blog&id=118976
家里网络出现故障 久等了~~!!!!
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