【8 26首战】作文求批改

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我会把我写过的综合写作（TPO）和独立写作（机经）的所有作文发上来，希望大家帮我改，改得越狠越好！
THX！

奔跑蜗牛UID: 2579189

楼主加油啊

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奔跑蜗牛 发表于 2012-8-20 14:43
综合写作 主要看的是你听力的内容写上没有
语法的要求明显不如独立写作严格

嗯， 谢谢。明天就考了，上次用ETS官方在线模考做的TPO21,ERATER打分是30，所以应该就没问题了~

奔跑蜗牛UID: 2579189

综合写作 主要看的是你听力的内容写上没有
语法的要求明显不如独立写作严格

关键是听力的内容哦

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TPO7综合写作
The article believes that it is unlikely that wood companies in the United States will try to receive certifications from the international organization. Then the writer lists three reasons. However, the speaker gives refutations corresponding to the reasons.

Above all, it is said in the passage that American consumers don't value the ecocertification label. The professor disagrees and illustrates that American buyers don't treat every product in the same way. They can distinguish product claims, which is from their own company or from an independent organization. American consumers are confident with the international organizations. As a result, they react very favorable to the international organization.

Besides, it seems that American consumers are inclined to the price and choose a cheaper one. But in the lecture, the professor tells that when price alone determines much higher or lower, American buyers will buy the cheaper one. If there isn't big difference of the price, such as less than five percents, American consumers do consider other factors instead of the price. They value more about preserving the environment.

Finally, the writer claims that certification of products will benefit American companies only if they market their wares abroad. In fact, the speaker states that it's definitely not because of foreign consumers but because of foreign competitions that force the companies to be certificated. If American companies slow the pace of being certificated, it will fail to capture American buyers. Therefore corporations from foreign countries will crowd into the American market, as the domestic companies don't serve the products.

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TPO7 综合写作
The article believes that it is unlikely that wood companies in the United States will try to receive certifications from the international organization. Then the writer lists three reasons. However, the speaker gives refutations corresponding to the reasons.

Above all, it is said in the passage that American consumers don't value the ecocertification label. The professor disagrees and illustrates that American buyers don't treat every product in the same way. They can distinguish product claims, which is from their own company or from an independent organization. American consumers are confident with the international organizations. As a result, they react very favorable to the international organization.

Besides, it seems that American consumers are inclined to the price and choose a cheaper one. But in the lecture, the professor tells that when price alone determines much higher or lower, American buyers will buy the cheaper one. If there isn't big difference of the price, such as less than five percents, American consumers do consider other factors instead of the price. They value more about preserving the environment.

Finally, the writer claims that certification of products will benefit American companies only if they market their wares abroad. In fact, the speaker states that it's definitely not because of foreign consumers but because of foreign competitions that force the companies to be certificated. If American companies slow the pace of being certificated, it will fail to capture American buyers. Therefore corporations from foreign countries will crowd into the American market, as the domestic companies don't serve the products.
求批改！THX!