issue144 老题高频ＪＪ_艺术类_艺术家和评论家谁重要_偶最怕写艺术了，这个还好点

naiba369UID: 131655

拿不准的地方看先

1The world is full of the beauty unless we have a pair eyes to find it out." Truly it is.
2.there are numerous excellent even immortal masterpieces showing to us.
3.he did not received the respect on his living

gusuwuUID: 200419

we do not lack beauty in the world, but the eyes to find it.

dgfyhchinaUID: 190311

Therefore, to a certain degree, artists are significant as well as critics. The former create the beauty, and the latter discover the beauty, which are two important and irreplaceable factors within the lasting value of the art, besides the two are twisting each other and becoming a whole organism that cannot be broken up. As Rodin said" The world is full of the beauty unless we have a pair eyes to find it out ", undeniably, the world need outstanding artists who can create immortal masterpieces for our human beings. Moreover, we especially call for the critics who can find out the talents and discover the beauty inside their works. Otherwise, the world will lose no less than one hundred Van Gogh. 第三段，你说的是，艺术和评论交织在一起，可以举列说明， 如某人即是艺术家又是评论家，这样就更有说服力

zhxoUID: 175740

The world is full of the beauty unless we have a pair eyes to find it out "

这句话对嘛？？
我这么觉得逻辑有问题啊

zhxoUID: 175740

The speaker asserts that it is the artist, not the critic, who gives society something of lasting value. However, I do not support this claim. The artist is important as well as the critic.(eclectic point) They both play a irreplaceable(不错 学习ing) part in the process of creating and evaluating the essence of the art, which is considering the something within the lasting value.(how to understand wat does the "which" substitude??)


从lasting value 说明二者同样重要！！
First of all, what is the lasting value?(teminology) From my point of view, the lasting value of art is the pursuit of the beauty, the display of the beauty and the discovery of the beauty.平行句厉害哦 Undoubtedly, the display of the beauty is important, as it creates a lot of excellent artworks. Meanwhile, the discovery of the beauty is also significant, without that, we cannot taste the essence of the immortal artworks. The great France sculptor Rodin said that：" The world is full of the beauty unless we have a pair eyes to find it out." Truly it is. And that is reason why Van Gogh's outstanding works had little recognition when he was living. Hardly any admired his excellent works until some critics discover the lasting value within his paintings. Therefore, both the aesthetic values, which created by artists and the perspectives of discoverer, that showed by critics are in the same positions in the lasting values.



Admittedly, the artists create the aesthetic value within the artworks themselves. From The Renaissance up to now, there are numerous excellent even immortal masterpieces showing to us, which are all showing the indescribable and forever beauty.（定语从句的逗号用法） Eternal and mysterious smile of Da Vinci's Mona Lisa, exquisite and scared The Creation from Michelangelo, vivid and realistic Night Watch by Rembrandt, dramatic and colorful Liberty Leading the People by Delacroix, changing light and color of Impression, Sunrise from Monet, lifelike and museful The Thinker sculpted by Rodin, raging and abstract Guernica by Picassco. And all those immortal masterpieces let us feel easy and comfortable, make us enjoy the essence of arts, which are all owing to the beauty and the aesthetic value within them.

At the same time, the critics provide the public with a special perspective to taste the beauty. Without the particular perspectives from critics, definitely, we may miss a lot of greatest artists and their immortal works. There is no better illustration than Vinect Van Gogh. This gifted impressionistic artist sold only one painting before he suicided at merely 37 years old. Few people recognized his paintings, and he did not received the respect on his living（during his life）However, when the critics noticed his artworks and the public took attention on those excellent paintings, the lasting value inside all his works were showed to us. And one of his paintings--Portrait of Doctor Gachet has auctioned for the highest price--82.5 million U.S. dollars up to now. From this, we can see how important role the critics are playing to the artists and their artworks.

Therefore, to a certain degree, artists are significant as well as critics. The former create the beauty, and the latter discover the beauty, which are two important and irreplaceable factors within the lasting value of the art, besides the two are twisting each other and becoming a whole organism that cannot be broken up. As Rodin said" The world is full of the beauty unless we have a pair eyes to find it out ", undeniably, the world need outstanding artists who can create immortal masterpieces for our human beings. Moreover, we especially call for the critics who can find out the talents and discover the beauty inside their works. Otherwise, the world will lose no less than one hundred Van Gogh.

In brief, both artist and critic are important to the beauty. The artist create the aesthetic value within the artworks, meanwhile, the critic discover and show it to the public in a special perspective way. Thus, the artist and the critic both give（ remarkably contribute to ） the lasting value of art to society.  这段和上段有些重复哦～～

fastalingerUID: 181399

整体上没有挑出什么错误。
最后一段和倒数第二段好象有点重复。我觉得不写也可以。
不知说的对不对。

christian.xieUID: 194467

狂引用了那么多名人后。。。被判雷同的可能性是否成倍增长？
迷茫中~~~~~

likeying27UID: 195699

Someone said（应该是一般现在时，而且这里是speaker这么说吧，所以In this issue，the speaker claims） that it is the artist, not the critic, who gives society something of lasting value. However, I do not support this claim. The artist is important as well as the critic. They both play a irreplaceable part in the process of creating and evaluating the essence of the art, which is considering the something within the lasting value. 平衡观点

First of all, what is the lasting value? From my point of view, the lasting value of art is the pursuit of the beauty, the display of the beauty and the discovery of the beauty. （看到这里有作者要引新4的感觉，呵呵）Undoubtedly, the display of the beauty is important, as it creates a lot of excellent artworks. Meanwhile, the discovery of the beauty is also significant, without that, we can not taste the essence of the immortal artworks. The great France sculptor Rodin said that" The world is full of the beauty unless we have a pair eyes to find it out." Truly it is. And that is reason why Van Gogh's outstanding works had few recognitions when he was living. Hardly any admired his excellent works until some critics discover the lasting value within his paintings. Therefore, both the aesthetic values, which created by artists and the perspectives of discoverer, that（that->which） showed by critics are in the same positions in the lasting values.美是持久价值的标准

Admittedly,这个词是让步,用这里什么意思? the artists create the aesthetic value within the artworks themselves. From The Renaissance up to now, there are numerous excellent even immortal masterpieces showing to us, which are all showing the indescribable and forever beauty. Eternal and mysterious smile of Da Vinci's Mona Lisa, exquisite and scared The Creation from Michelangelo, vivid and realistic Night Watch by Rembrandt, dramatic and colorful Liberty Leading the People by Delacroix, changing light and color of Impression, Sunrise from Monet, lifelike and museful The Thinker sculpted by Rodin, raging and abstract Guernica by Picassco. And all those immortal masterpieces let us feel easy and comfortable, make us enjoy the essence of arts, which are all owing to the beauty and the aesthetic value within them. (好恐怖的名词列举,我学不来) Artists 的好处,创造了美

At the same time, 体现平衡观点的词the critics provide the public with a special perspective to taste the beauty. Without the particular perspectives from critics, definitely, we may miss a lot of greatest artists and their immortal works. There is no better illustration than Vinect Van Gogh. This gifted impressionistic artist sold only one painting before he suicided at merely 37 years old. Few people recognized his paintings, and he did not received the respect on his living. However, when the critics noticed his artworks and the public took attention on those excellent paintings, the lasting value inside all his works were showed to us. And one of his paintings--Portrait of Doctor Gachet has auctioned for the highest price--82.5 million U.S. dollars up to now. From this, we can see how important role the critics are playing to the artists and their artworks. Critics 可以给我们揭示美

Therefore, to a certain degree, artists are significant as well as critics. The former create the beauty, and the latter discover the beauty, which are two important and irreplaceable factors within the lasting value of the art, besides the two are twisting each other and becoming a whole organism that cannot be broken up. As Rodin said" The world is full of the beauty unless we have a pair eyes to find it out ",这话不要重复 Undeniably, the world need outstanding artists who can create immortal masterpieces for our human beings. Moreover, we especially call for the critics who can find out the talents and discover the beauty inside their works. Otherwise, the world will lose no less than one hundred Van Gogh.

In brief, both artist and critic are important to差动词 the beauty. The artist create the aesthetic value within the artworks, meanwhile, the critic discover and show it to the public in a special perspective way. Thus, the artist and the critic both give the lasting value of art to society.首尾呼应
结构没有什么问题吧,我想.
PS:Orange&Blue 什么时候考啊?

naiba369UID: 131655

唉，没办法呀，van gogh 也是才知道怎么拼

中国的人物还好说，但是外国的真的不是很懂，要么就说齐白石老先生吧，呵呵，没机会作弊了。

唉，明天我就又要开始AW的准备了，真是折磨呀，还请老大多照我呀，呵呵 ：目

imongUID: 140258

文字上不少地方还可以推敲的更好
整篇文章略有些车轱辘话来回说
不过一开始定的基调不错 确保了从结构上 立论上 还是比较新颖的文章
btw
大家能不能别一股脑儿的都van gogh
就不怕判个plagiarism??

ggxinxinUID: 161010

first:
good essay.
second:
As Rodin said" The world is full of the beauty unless we have a pair eyes to find it out ", [repeat, may be prolix]
third:
the art is not only pursue the beauty especially the styles of art in modern time.

learn much from you

naiba369UID: 131655

ok,20

devotionUID: 168104

缓考成功了吗?

devotionUID: 168104

写的不错
继续加油

naiba369UID: 131655

3x,3x,3x, 真是太感谢了啊！！！

今天不叫个郁闷，要写两篇艺术类的，其中还有issue176，郁闷呀：（

我，牛？google牛吧，都是查它的，我怎么能记住那么多的牛人，和那些我只知道中文名字的作品。唉，多写吧。笨人就用笨办法吧。

俺可不是6天可以搞个5.5 的料

谢谢大家了，我尽量给大家看看，但说实话，我的计划是每天 issue2，argu2，现在，就issue 保证了，argu 还没怎么写呢。偶的argu 很次的，唉，菜啊！！！