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daifeifmmuUID: 109178

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We can see the sales of exercise related stores are at all-time highs, but what the Nature's way selling is food, although they said it is health related food, but how can the residents in Plainsville believe it is really healthful to their body. What the Plainsville people interested in is just sports and the things that must be used during the running, weight training and so on, they may think other stores that did not sell them will have no relationship with their health, then they will take the items that Nature's way offered as unnecessary, what may be worse is they may even think such a food will be harmful to their health and then disgust it, finally, they will buy nothing from any of Nature's way's chains.

There are a lot of shops concerns with keeping health and selling things well there, but it is selling well now, not for ever. If we imagine Nature's ways also has some thing concerns with it, it will face stuture soon, for every merchant know they can earn a big money in Plainsville, they all rush here, just like everyone know here has a golden mine in Plainsville, at last, most of them can not get the gold from here. What the Nature's way sell will not be alone, there may be a lot of people sell the same things as Nature's way do, and may be their price and quality are even better than Nature's way. When even the stores that are more rational selling than Nature's way can not earn a big money, how can we expect Nature's way earn more?

Everything is changing, so does the people running into exercise, the fashion in Plainsville that people love keeping fit may be not keep long, but the food store and others that Plainsville built need a long time to gain its cost, once most of the people in Plainsville find they should take a slow step in keeping health rather than do it everyday, they will recover from the hot spirit and we will seldom see someone in Nature's way's house, once there are no guest, there will be a big lose of money!

flyingwindUID: 189320

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daifeifmmuUID: 109178

In this memo the vice president of Nature's Way CNW), a chain of stores selling health food and health-related products, recommends opening a store in Plainesville. To support this recommendation the vice president cites the following facts about Plainesville: (1) sales of exercise shoes and clothing are at all-time highs; (2) the local health club is more popular than ever; and (3) the city's schoolchildren are required to participate in a fitness program. Close scrutiny of each of these facts, however, reveals that none of them lend credible support to the recommendation.

First, strong sales of exercise apparel do not necessarily indicate that Plainesville residents would be interested in NW's products, or that these residents are interested in exercising. Perhaps exercise apparel happens to be fashionable at the moment, or inexpensive compared to other types of clothing. For that matter, perhaps the stronger-than-usual sales are due to increasing sales to tourists. In short, without making out other possible reasons for the strong sales the vice president cannot convince me on the basis of them that Plainesville residents are exercising regularly, let alone that they would be interested in buying the sorts of food and other products that NW sells.

Secondly, even if exercise is more popular among Plainesville residents than ever before, the vice president assumes further that people who exercise regularly are also interested in buying health food and health-related products. Yet the memo contains no evidence to support this assumption. Lacking such evidence it is equally possible that aside from exercising Plainesville residents have little interest in leading a healthy lifestyle. In fact, perhaps as a result of regular exercise they believe they are sufficiently fit and healthy and do not need a healthy diet.

Thirdly, the popularity of the local health club is little indication that NW will earn a profit from a store in Plainesville. Perhaps club members live in an area of Plamesville nowhere near feasible sites for a NW store. Or perhaps the club's primary appeal is as a singles meeting place, and that members actually have little interest in a healthy lifestyle. Besides, even if the club's members would patronize a NW store these members might be insufficient in number to ensure a profit for the store, especially considering that this health club is the only one inPlainesville.

Fourth, the fact that a certain fitness program is mandatory for Plainesville's school children accomplishes nothing toward bolstering the recommendation. Many years must pass before these children will be old enough to make buying decisions when it comes to food and health-related products. Their habits and interests might change radically over time. Besides, mandatory participation is no indication of genuine interest in health or fitness. Moreover, when these children grow older it is entirely possible that they will favor an unhealthy lifestyle--as a reaction to the healthful habits imposed upon them now.

Finally, even assuming that Plamesville residents are strongly interested in eating health foods and health-related products, the recommendation rests on two additional assumptions:(1) that this interest will continue in the foreseeable future, and (2) that Plainesville residents will prefer NW over other merchants that sell similar products. Until the vice president substantiates both assumptions I remain unconvinced that a NW store in Plainesville would be profitable. In sum, the recommendation relies on certain doubtful assumptions that render it unconvincing as it stands. To bolster the recommendation the vice president must provide dear evidence--perhaps by way of a local survey or study--that Plainesville residents who buy and wear exercise apparel, and especially the health club's members, do in fact exercise regularly, and that these exercisers are likely to buy health foods and health related products at a NW store. To better assess the recommendation, I would need to know why Plainesville's health club is nonular, and why Plainesville does not contain more health clubs. I would also need to know what competition NW might face in Plainesville.