issue87 这篇写了三次,前两次都没写下去,这次写的也很痛苦

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In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries.
这篇写了三次,前两次都没写下去,这次写的也很痛苦



Ever since beginners have been portrayed as possessing more advantages than experts in making significant discoveries, more and more people tend to trust beginners more rather than the latter, which is true in a sense that due to their special characteristics. Nevertheless, the development of discoveries made by beginners is determined on a case-by-case basis.

Beginners, as the non-mainstream in academia, spill consequential meanings over individuals into society as a whole as they have unique advantages in their realm. At the personal level, beginners are more easily to have seminal spirits to search and discovery in the pursuit of their reputation such as status, authority, wealth, etc. This is especially demonstrated in the business world. Consider, when refers to our modern moguls, Bill Gates and Tenner come into our mind respectively. As a beginner, the former founded the biggest company in the world after he  left university. Tenner is in character with the former, both of them have enough courage and intelligence to gain success in the business field which experts may lack.

Moreover,  beginners are encouraged more than experts by government in most cases as they are younger, and keeping a more vogue ideology in their minds than experts. For instance, as we know, a majority of experts access the success when they are in an old age, we can easily foresee that some experts may not have their original impassion for their work for even  having the erstwhile spirits they may not obtain much more before retiring. On the contrary, beginners never taste the sweet feeling of success, thus they are more willing to pursue their goals and keeping working for a long term. As the matter, it requires a majority of facts to think that beginners have few advantages is true.

Also, at the social level, complex and troubling relations founded by experts may influence them rather than the beginners. To be more specific, for instance, beginners have few complicated relations at least in the unfamiliar field. And as we know, the less they have, the less limitations they encounter. This may be illustrated in the scientific realm, a certain professor may collect much more information about researching due to the wildly relations. Yet he or she may consider more to decide which of these ideas is better, and which seems more likely feasible. Consequently, this professor shows a conclusion that combined many limitations, which surely will get more success.

Aside from the foregoing provisos, beginners' advantages, be it more, lack enough space to show or develop. For example, if a beginner is impoverished all the life, how can he or she get advanced and convenient equipment to make discoveries? Also, if whose novel ideas cannot be identified by the mainstream of the academia, then what one can do? These cases should be contemplated in the practical process. On the contrary, experts, as they researching in this field, have abundant techniques and facilities to help them. Also, most of people may concern their theories firstly when certain beginner has not been renowned.

In sum, with more courage and spirits, beginners are more easily to discovery important things, with encouragement and endorsement of society, beginners are more likely to find significant meanings. Yet all of these should be determined on a relatively seemly condition.

[ Last edited by staralways on 2005-8-12 at 11:10 ]

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issue87 这篇写了三次,前两次都没写下去,这次写的也很痛苦

In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries.
这篇写了三次,前两次都没写下去,这次写的也很痛苦

Ever since beginners have been portrayed as possessing more advantages than experts in making significant discoveries, more and more people tend to trust beginners more rather than the latter, which is true in a sense that due to their special characteristics. Nevertheless, the development of discoveries made by beginners is determined on a case-by-case basis.
觉得说清楚些比较好～～比如在哪些方面有优势，哪些方面有劣势～
Beginners, as the non-mainstream in academia, spill consequential meanings over individuals into society as a whole as they have unique advantages in their realm. At the personal level, beginners are more easily to have seminal spirits to search and discovery in the pursuit of their reputation such as status, authority, wealth, etc. This is especially demonstrated in the business world. Consider, when refers to our modern moguls, Bill Gates and Tenner come into our mind respectively. As a beginner, the former founded the biggest company in the world after he  left university. Tenner is in character with the former, both of them have enough courage and intelligence to gain success in the business field which(where) experts may lack.

Moreover,  beginners are encouraged more than experts by government in most cases as they are younger, and keeping a more vogue ideology in their minds than experts. For instance, as we know, a majority of experts access the success when they are in an old age, we can easily foresee that some experts may not have their original impassion for their work for even  having the erstwhile spirits they may not obtain much more before retiring. On the contrary, beginners never taste the sweet feeling of success, thus they are more willing to pursue their goals and keeping working for a long term. As the matter, it requires a majority of facts to think that beginners have few advantages is true.

Also, at the social level, complex and troubling relations founded by experts may influence them rather than the beginners. To be more specific, for instance, beginners have few complicated relations at least in the unfamiliar field. And as we know, the less (reletions) they have, the less limitations they encounter. This may be illustrated in the scientific realm, a certain professor may collect much more information about researching due to(rely on) the wildly relations. Yet he or she may consider more to decide which of these ideas is better, and which seems more likely feasible. Consequently, this professor shows a conclusion that combined many limitations, which surely will get more success.

Aside from the foregoing provisos, beginners' advantages, be it more, lack enough space to show or develop. For example, if a beginner is impoverished all the life, how can he or she get advanced and convenient equipment to make discoveries? Also, if whose novel ideas cannot be identified by the mainstream of the academia, then what one can do? These cases should be contemplated in the practical process. On the contrary, experts, as they researching in this field, have abundant techniques and facilities to help them. Also, most of people may concern their theories firstly when certain beginner has not been renowned.

In sum, with more courage and spirits, beginners are more easily to discovery(discover) important things, with encouragement and endorsement of society, beginners are more likely to find significant meanings. Yet all of these should be determined on a relatively seemly condition.
觉得思路还是很清楚的～论据还不够有力
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