Issue159 [Transcend小组]第八次作业 Issue 159With the rapid development of technology, especially in the most recent quarter century, machines in our lives have been improved to take on some functions that are hardly imagined ever before, such as the automation system at home, the computer with reorganization of the language of human, the robot which can ride the bike.//赶紧背景的陈述可以不放到首段,首段指出TS就可以了。 At the same time, people come to worry about whether machines will replace human in the future like the description in the scientific fiction. As far as I am concern, we, human beings, will never be transcended by the machine that we invent and machines will only be our effective tools and assistants.Machines which people invent and improve are playing a vital role in human society from ancient to very recently. People in the Paleolithic era invent many kinds of useful tools like chisel, needle which help them to deal with daily living, arrow and sword which help them to hunt large and ferocious animals. After the revolution of industry, the advent of multitudes of tools with the power of steam bring a huge step forward to efficiency of industry and make people's lives much more convenient than before. The steam train, for instance, can take far more passages and travel a longer distance than carriage and horse, which promote the intercommunication of the resources and people in different areas. Recently, the computers bring another renovation of our lives. Writing documents, for example, is ever considered to be a complicate work with typewriter. However, with the keyboard and the software in the computer, the input of word is much quicker and more convenient that every one can take advantage of it. ///Although machines have lots of merits, they have to be controlled and operated by people. Admittedly, the automation of machine has been improved dramatically and machines can actually deal with some works itself in a regular situation. However, when errors and accidental situation happen, machines can do nothing but waiting human to do with them. For example, when a patient with pneumonia in the hospital takes off the breath-helper suddenly, what the machine can do? It just gives a warning alarm to call for the nurses to fix the situation. Without immediate action of nurses, the patient may face dangerous or even lose his life. In addition, machines themselves can not find out and repair the exceptions like the abrasion. Consequently, the working situation of machines is watched and kept by human in most time. Only by doing so, the machines can always maintain their high efficiency and accuracy.Further, machines can hardly possess creativity that people have. The creativity which is thought to stem from the complex interaction of our brain has not been fully understood by ourselves, let alone the application on machines.好句子 What machines can do right now are(is) exactly what human tell or (program) them to do and they can not do things outside the regulation fixed by people. Although scientists endeavor to let machines posses such characteristic, it will be many decades before this comes true. Also, the machines can never have emotion as people do. Emotion is built up from communication, correlation and independent judgment of people.(可以加到上句中,改成定语从句) Without all these ability, machines with passion can only be realized in the fiction. The robot devised recently can do almost every work to take care of a baby that a mother can do, such as swaying the bed of infant, playing music, feeding milk and so forth. But the infant can hardly develop an emotion with the machines not only because they do not have the appearance of human, but also they can not communicate with infant like mothers do.In sum, although the technology can make the machines more and more advanced, without the characteristic that human possess machines can only set at the assistant position. 好文章!例子充分!论证合理!值得学习!
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