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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement.For someone who wants to be successful in the society, knowledge gained from study is more important than the ability of being creative（周二作业）

Several decades ago, people lived a simple life. They earned their lives by crafts skills that they had learned from their predecessors. The industrilization however, has made our life more complex: it has fostered all kinds of expertises, each of these expertise has its specific treasures. Therefore, we are no longer able to learn skills from someone, we have to acquire knowledge both from books and practices. As far as I am concerned, the importance of knowledge learned from books is match up to that of the creativity.
First of all, both the book knowledge and the creativity play significant role in business world. In today’s life, no one could be succeed without the education. Let us take Bill Gates as an example. Some may argue knowledge written in books are out-of-date and Gates droped from Harvard to set up Microsoft. However, this should not cover the fact that Gates has indeed learned computer science since he was a little boy. He was infatuated with computer science for many years. No one could deny that he learn basic computer knowledge from books. After he was proficient with these basic principles he presented his brilliant creativity.  He discontinued his study and grab the opportunity to spark his genius  in creation, and finally gets great achievement of making himself the richest man in the world.
As to the academic realm, creativity is to be considered one of the most important attributes a professional man or woman should have as well. In the academic field, scholars are traditionally to be considered as learning machine. They strive to browse piles of books, toil to read numerous papers, it seems that they are a book worm sinking in the leaves seas.  But the fact is that they have to possess a high spirit in creation. Creativity is the momentum for progress. If we throw ourselves in the stalemate of researches, if we are stick to the existing achievements, we will never be able to uncover any mystery of the world. For example, Famous architects outlined every cutting-edge design of edifice using their creativity. Madam Curie discovered radium because of her unyeilding faith towards creation. Geologists exert their creativity by exploring outer space.   
In sum, because of the full development of every aspect of our society, both knowledge derive from books and the ability of creation are important in today’s society.

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Several decades ago, people lived a simple life. They earned their lives by crafts skills that they had learned from their predecessors. The industrilization however, has made our life more complex: it has fostered all kinds of expertises, each of these expertise has its specific treasures. Therefore, we are no longer able to learn skills from someone, we have to acquire knowledge both from books and practices. As far as I am concerned, the importance of knowledge learned from books is match up to that of the creativity

First of all, both the book knowledge and the creativity play significant role in business world. In today’s life, no one could be succeed without the education. Let us take Bill Gates as an example. Some may argue knowledge written in books are out-of-date and Gates droped from Harvard to set up Microsoft. However, this should not cover the fact that Gates has indeed learned computer science since he was a little boy. He was infatuated with computer science for many years. No one could deny that he learn basic computer knowledge from books. After he was proficient with these basic principles he presented his brilliant creativity.  He discontinued his study and grab the opportunity to spark his genius  in creation, and finally gets great achievement of making himself the richest man in the world.
这段主题句写的是书本知识和创造力在商业中很重要，但是后面Bill的例子感觉是知识是创造力的前提。

As to the academic realm, creativity is to be considered one of the most important attributes，[which]a professional man or woman should have as well. In the academic field, scholars are traditionally to be considered as learning machine. They strive to browse piles of books, toil to read numerous papers, it seems that they are a book worm sinking in the leaves seas.[转折的生硬]  But the fact is that they have to possess a high spirit in creation. Creativity is the momentum for progress. If we throw ourselves in the stalemate of researches, if we are stick to the existing achievements, we will never be able to uncover any mystery of the world. For example, Famous architects outlined every cutting-edge design of edifice using their creativity. Madam Curie discovered radium because of her unyeilding faith towards creation. Geologists exert their creativity by exploring outer space.

In sum, because of the full development of every aspect of our society, both knowledge derive from books and the ability of creation are important in today’s society.

搂主的文章写得很好，能讲一下这篇文章的结构吗？
有时间指导一下我的作文吧。https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=866347&page=1&extra=page%3D1#pid1771952169
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Several decades ago, people lived a simple life. They earned their lives by crafts skills that they had learned from their predecessors. The industrilization however, has made our life more complex: it has fostered all kinds of expertises, each of these expertise has its specific treasures. Therefore, we are no longer able to learn skills from someone, we have to acquire knowledge both from books and practices. As far as I am concerned, the importance of knowledge learned from books is match up to that of the creativity.留学,考试

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First of all, both the book knowledge and the creativity play significant role in business world. In today’s life, no one could be succeed (successful, succeeded)without the education. Let us take Bill Gates as an example. Some may argue knowledge written in books are out-of-date and Gates droped from Harvard to set up Microsoft. However, this should not cover the fact that Gates has indeed learned computer science since he was a little boy. He was infatuated with computer science for many years. No one could deny that he learn basic computer knowledge from books. After he was proficient with these basic principles he presented his brilliant creativity.  He discontinued his study and grab the opportunity to spark his genius  in creation, and finally gets great achievement of making himself the richest man in the world.

As to the academic realm, creativity is to be considered as one of the most important attributes a professional man or woman should have as well. In the academic field, scholars are traditionally to be considered as(deemed as) learning machine. They strive to browse piles of books, toil to read numerous papers, it seems that they are a book worm sinking in the leaves seas.  But the fact is that they have to possess a high spirit in creation. Creativity is the momentum for progress. If we throw ourselves in the stalemate of researches, if we are stick to the existing achievements, we will never be able to uncover any mystery of the world. For example, Famous architects outlined every cutting-edge design of edifice using their creativity. Madam Curie discovered radium because of her unyeilding faith towards creation. Geologists exert their creativity by exploring outer space.
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In sum, because of the full development of every aspect of our society, both knowledge derive from books and the ability of creation are important in today’s society.

从两方面阐述。不错不错。
结尾短了。